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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Contemporary Duck WIP: The Chronicles of Linda Rose! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 11 months ago
Thank you both. I need to go and develop my own style more.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@rae
I think you can just put them wherever.@keilah-h @theshadow @grcr @whalekeeper @esther-c @freed_and_redeemed
Ayla
Ooh, a war! This would make an amazing tale for my memoirs. “I’m Ayla,” I informed the stranger. He appeared to have changed his mind about killing me. “My guess is that we will encounter at least three more people. Rarely do…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 1 year, 11 months ago
Thx for the thoughts. The ending is already planned out and I will not reveal anything. 😁
I’m so glad you approve of his scene!!! I was worried for a minute there because I don’t know what his everyday life is like.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Thanks!
@freed_and_redeemed@whalekeeper @esther-c @keilah-h @grcr
Percival
A crash sounded, and Percival bolted awake. He leapt to his feet and reached for his sword, scanning the room. It appeared he was in a castle, judging by the stone walls, and red carpet beneath him. Castle! Lord Damien’s castle! “Come out and face me like…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Wait Sniper plays saxophone? HOW DID I NEVER KNOW THIS?!
@rae@princesachronicle22 @theducktator@kyronthearcanin
Azalea
Why does everyone seem so upset? Well, besides Stephen, Joy, Callum and Evelyn. They had only just come back from their search, and had found the others at the largest cabin, looking very uncomfortable. Fairy was…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
@theducktator @loopylin @stephie @theshadow @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
I will try to get you Chapter the 17th – The Rebel next week, but since I start work and school, no promises. I will send it out in two weeks at the latest, so you can hold me accountable to that deadline.
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Now we just get to sit back and enjoy the drama.” He gestured toward Silvanis and the ducks.
XD
@keilah-h @theshadow @princesachronicle22 @kyronthearcanin @ducktator
I VOTE WE HAVE INSTRUMENTS FOR ALL THE CHARRIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! We can make a little band and watch them struggle to get the dynamics right together! It’ll be so c…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@keilah-h @rae @princesachronicle22 @theshadow @kyronthearcanin
Bob
Bob had sworn to stay away from hens after Serpentine’s betrayal, and now he was stuck in some kind of couples thing with the most annoying hen he knew. To be fair, she hadn’t always been this annoying. She’d been sweet and friendly at first, if rather too excitable, but he’d…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 1 year, 11 months ago
Were the people back in their worlds notified about the selection? Like, taking my charrie as an example, will Crosshair’s peers (the Empire, the Bad Batch, whoever he’s working with right now) be like “hey, what happened to him? He should be here by now” or did someone come to them and say “Your friend has been selected for a game of s…
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@keilah-h @theducktator @theshadow @kyronthearcanin @princesachronicle22
Silvanis
Maybe he should’ve gone lonesome and gotten something but he wasn’t hungry and Fairy hadn’t said she was so at the moment, he couldn’t care less. Besides, he was still thinking about who and why they had been taken here and how much did they know about…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
That sounds good.
@theducktator @rae @kyronthearcanin@princesachronicle22
Eldred
Eldred, Rosalind, and the group moved toward the largest buildings in the center. The wall closest to them had a window, and they crowded around it, peering in to see a table, some chairs, boxes… and some writing. Eldred read it over, then read it a…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@theducktator @freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper @esther-c @keilah-h @grcr
Sorry, school has started and I was whisked away by it. Anyway, I will be introducing three characters.
Percival
Age: 19
Species: human, and from the fictional country of Terre, which is inspired by Germany and France.
Appearance: tall, muscular though more athletic than…[Read more]
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@whalekeeper @keilah-h @theshadow @grcr @esther-c
Tags were weird. ⬆️
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper @keilah-h @theshadow @grcr @esther-c
Ayla
Some one had heard me, and he had a gun. Guns weren’t supposed to exist in fantasy novels! I pointed my sword at him, hoping I didn’t look terrified. My adventure had barely begun, and I hadn’t met a single old wizard. I couldn’t die yet! “Get thee hence, thou beet…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 year, 11 months ago
Why does it keep messing up your guy’s tags? Ugh, let me try again.
@rae @linus-smallprint @grcr @keilah-h @ellette-giselle
Deadline for the art challenge is Friday the 6th
Thanks for participating : )
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 year, 11 months ago
@rae @linus-smallprint @grcr @keilah-h @ellette-giselle
Deadline is Friday the 6th
Thanks for participating : )
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freedom posted an update 1 year, 11 months ago
Notifs on my forum aren’t working the best, soooo @keilah-h what did you think of Freedom’s Fire? <3 idk anyone else on here that read it that hasn't already given their thoughts, but I wanted to ask you XD (we'll ignore the formatting issues. that's Amazon's end and I plan on fixing it in the future when I have more time to do…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 11 months ago
I’m glad you put the takeover-by-the-empire subplot back in. I was kinda wondering if you’d forgotten it lol
No, I haven’t forgotten. This book moved way faster previously, but people keep telling me to add things so now I feel like it’s a lot slower.
Right now it’s not clear if they’re married yet or not.
what? No! They aren’t married!!
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I thought it was AMAZING!! The characters were well crafted and the story was riveting. I want more already, and I greatly enjoyed how you brought in side characters like the Baumann boys (Knowing they might have their own book someday makes me really happy for some reason). I liked that doctor who helped Leon, I don’t remember his name. (Although…[Read more]
I’m so happy you enjoyed it!! Awww, you wanting more means so much💖 (don’t worry, I’m in the editing process of the 2nd book👀). The doctor’s name is Wilhelm, Wilhelm Müller :3
Jezyk IS in other books, but still before he’s killed. (my books often take place at the same time just from different povs) Jezyk was killed bc he was in and knew about…[Read more]
Ohhhh ok, that makes so much more sense about Jezyk now!! Yeah, I liked Wilhelm, he was cool. Where did he go? I remember towards the end of the book it said he’d gone somewhere.
and lol, you’re welcome.
Where Wilhelm went will hopefully be explained in a later novel, but basically he had to flee bc his brothers were after him AND he had a few Jewish people he helped rescue and had to help them get to safety :3
Ohhh really cool! Yeah, I can tell there’s a lot of stuff in the story that’ll be explored in other books, and that makes me really happy lol
also he has brothers after him?? Interesting!
@keilah-h ACK, I was thinking of another character😭 Wilhelm doesn’t have brothers after him 🫠🫠 but he is helping others escape.
dude, I was thinking about Himmler while talking about Wilhelm.
Wilhelm doesn’t have brothers after him eventually…but Himmler does.
This is what happens when you have more characters than you can count XXD