Keilah H.

@keilah-h I know there’s actually a prequel called Tron from a long time ago… Not sure if you watched it? It’s been a long time, but I know that I prefer Tron: Legacy.

Yooo those fanfics sound epic! I would love to hear more!

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what scenes? I’m confused too now, if you meant which of yours, i liked both scenes!!

no it’s not weird to detail all the species! It’s good to know your characters inside and out so to speak 🙂 they all sound like you put a lot of thought into them!

And as for MCs all being boys I admit it’s my natural tendency to do that too so n…[Read more]

@keilah-h Oo, nice! Ah, I think one reason I like it so much is because of all the emotions that each character brings me, from Sam and his dad to Rinzler and Clu… It makes me want to cry, especially the ending part.

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i read the scene you posted and it’s very cool! I like it!

@keilah-h Same here, same here. I’ve rewatched it the most, too.

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and one morphing: (they’re called Death Hawks for here explained reasons)

Atheico looked shocked, “How did you find him? And how are you not dead? His father swore he’d kill anyone who came to his castle after I—”

“I didn’t find—” Mythia twitched and tried to stay still, “ I didn’t find him. He’s my friend and Lysanna sent me to hi…

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Thanks! i have the Serpent Children, then the Peluvaro, who morph into owls, and the Bardans, who morph into griffons. Peluvaro and Bardan blood mixed makes an odd combination; their descendants are Pelubalar, literally owl-griffon and have wings, slight scaling on the face, severe scaling on the hands, and claws on their hands. The…[Read more]

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Thanks! 🙂 yeah, mine are born with both abilities, but in certain events they can lose their ability to chose. For example, they can give up their gift (aka powers) to save someone, or, in extreme circumstances, can die to save someone. As you might assume, this happens very seldom.

Ahhh makes sense, especially if you do more sci fi…[Read more]

@keilah-h coolio!! I like the variety of your people!!

haha poor Flame. alas; every character must have a weakness!

yeah, Evyrett was stuck in an iron castle for the first 18 years his life with only his friend/servant/cook named Coldon, a loyal boy, but he is rather odd and Evyrett is his master, so it’s not a normal friendship. Especially…[Read more]

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Yes I do but in this particular scene it’s a metaphor, but I do have lots of dragons and some dragon people in my stories.

heres one; Evyrett Knayaz

prince of the serpent people. He’s a liiittle nervous around anything bigger than him it bring around any other living beings in general

Heres the story scene that goes with it;
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@keilah-h ooo here is another dramatic scene I just remembered

Dorok smiled stiffly at the prince as Ayerna introduced him, but he wasn’t happy. He felt a nagging in his mind and a pit of apprehension in his gut; he didn’t like this man, and he wasn’t sure if it was because the spoiled snob seemed to be paying special attention to Ayerna, or if th…

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@keilah-h Oo I like these! You’ve got good proportions!

@keilah-h ahhh i see, well the scenes are both cool! keep up the good work! 😉

@keilah-h I write fantasy!! Tho I’m still in my first draft there’s one scene I sorta like (at least the idea of it) that’s a bit Action-y

(Tho it begins at the end of one POV Chapter and finishes in another)

Arabella’s POV

“She said to take care of you myself.”

“She?” Ara whispered, wondering what he meant. But Arabella didn’t have tim…

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Well, I think this one ought to be… interesting XD

Then he blinked in shock as Violet’s fist shot out like a viper and hit the man square in the throat; he let out a cry of pain, and released his grip on her neck. She fought and bit and kicked, but they still wouldn’t let her go; the…

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oooo cool! I’ll share one if that’s okay! It’s my favorite dramatic scene still, even though I’ve written others… and I admit it makes me shiver, likely because I see everything I read in pictures, but it’s still… well decide for yourself. XD (Death Rams are my fantasy version of Raptors with extra-good senses and really nasty…[Read more]

@keilah-h Thanks for the tag! Yeah, most of the time I do fantasy. Nice scene! Very dramatic indeed.

*thinks for a very long time* Yeah, I really don’t remember or know what scenes I write are dramatic… Here’s a prologue from a short story that I’m working on, though:

“If you don’t tell me the information, lady, I’m afraid I’m going to have to…

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here’s my last one from yesterday!

Then he blinked in shock as Violet’s fist shot out like a viper and hit the man square in the throat; he let out a cry of pain, and released his grip on her neck.