Keilah H.

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @loopylin @stephie @theshadow

Tis time for the next chapter. Thank you for your patience.

Chapter the 13th – The Guardian

@ellette-giselle

But then that makes right-handers day ALL THE OTHER days of the year!!! 😀

Perhaps, but that is less special.

Ok, I’m done giving un-asked for ideas.

 

Sorry.

Not sure why you are apologizing here. Your ideas are welcome.

@keilah-h

and ha I didn’t even notice that with Alan and Oliver in the beginning.

I am kind of glad you…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thanks, I really did enjoy the game and some of the arcs definitely gave me some interesting character ideas. Persona 5 is basically a game where you play as a Japanese High school student who has the power to break into peoples minds and steal their corrupted desires.

@keilah-h

yeah, no kidding!! The amount of drafts you go through before a book is perfect!!!

I mean, it grew a lot from the original, and it clearly isn’t finished either.

@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

New scene!

Asher and Eric were only the first of many war orphans who found shelter in the orphanage. On the second day of the two brother’s arrival, a girl came by saying her mother had felt led to give them some children’s clothing and she hoped Sabina could find someone who needed them. Aft…

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@ellette-giselle

Because, your country seems to have a little superstition what with the wizards and all that. In the olden days, (which your book is fantasy so i can’t quite tell the era) People were really cruel to lefties because they believed it was a sign of demonic inhabitants or the practice of witchcraft.

Hmm. I don’t think the citizens o…[Read more]

@keilah-h

😊 Thanks. Yeah, they definitely need some development. I can’t wait to see how all three of them react in a situation like this and with each other.

@keilah-h

Awesome!

I kinda feel bad for dumping three new characters on y’all. 🤭

@theshadow @freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h @grcr @theducktator

M’kay! I’ve decided on another character duo! (Actually three characters, but I’m only gonna write from the POV of two of them) I need practice writing these guys since I don’t normally do first person, but their novel is going to be completely in first!

So! Without further ado….…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah, I know. it’s horrid.

Anyhow, we’ll see what Linus decides to do with all this info. lol

@keilah-h

Clarification, I don’t believe all that about witchcraft and the devil involved with left hand. That was just the belief back then. ;D

@keilah-h

Yup, they’re starting to.

@keilah-h

I didn’t say that. I only said they burned their hands and cut their palms. They would also brake a lefty’s hand if they thought he was dangerous or they were especially cruel.

They did it because they are lost sinners and were listening to the devil.

It’s prejudice and superstition in one of it’s mots violent forms.

You see, The…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Why did I suggest it or why did they do it?

@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

new section!!!

The days passed, and the people of Ardenta waited in eager anticipation for the Sabbath. They longed to see each other, to hear from Aaron, and to be united in worship once again. At last, the week’s end came.

Early in the morning, before the sun or soldiers were up, the people w…

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Okay, I did not end up going today.

@ellette-giselle, @keilah-h

OH MY GOODNESS!! I love the picture! I think that’s your best one yet!!! – Ellette

wow great picture!!! – Keilah

Thanks! That is my most recent TNPT drawing.

Oh goodness. I dislike germaphobic guys. 😛

Oh. *Goes to wash hands for 45th time today – Reason: touched the ‘W’ key for t…[Read more]

@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

Ok, all y’all who have stuck with me through all of this, I have a question.

Is anyone willing to help me write a blurb? I keep trying and nothing sounds right? Anyone have ideas or examples?

Also, I’ll try to get another section tomorrow. I’m a little distracted with the publishing process of…[Read more]

@keilah-h @theshadow @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

Ok, all y’all who have stuck with me through all of this, I have a question.

Is anyone willing to help me write a blurb? I keep trying and nothing sounds write? Anyone have ideas or examples?

Also, I’ll try to get another section tomorrow. I’m a little distracted with the publishing process of…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I APOLOGIZE IF MY RANTING MAKES YOU THINK THAT.

It’s fine

you really don’t think it’s a real mess?

No, not really. It’s not perfect, but I still think it’s pretty good.

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @loopylin @stephie @theshadow

This week is a little busier for me. I still have time to write, but chapters may arrive a little later than expected. My church does a camp for families this week and I may be going out there for a couple of days. Also, I am a little stuck right now, trying to figure out how to introduce…[Read more]