Keilah H.

@linus-smallprint  @keilah-h @hybridlore

“Joseph!” Asher yelled.

Joseph spun toward his friend and saw the ball in his hand. “Throw it!” he shouted, running several paces backwards.

Asher threw the ball and Joseph caught it. Eric came racing out of the house, whooping in the afternoon sunshine.

The days were growing warmer, and with the spri…

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@linus-smallprint  @keilah-h @hybridlore

“Joseph!” Asher yelled.

Joseph spun toward his friend and saw the ball in his hand. “Throw it!” he shouted, running several paces backwards.

Asher threw the ball and Joseph caught it. Eric came racing out of the house, whooping in the afternoon sunshine.

The days were growing warmer, and with the spri…

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@linus-smallprint @keilah-h

Thanks y’all! This was so great to come home to!

I’m glad y’all liked Adrian’s reintroduction! It’s one of my favorite scenes.

Ah, thanks Linus for the typo catches.

There we go, there is that Ardenta mistrust appearing.

Yes. Glad you caught that! Not only is the poor kid traumatized by soldiers, (as alluded to in…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle @rae @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @whalekeeper @esther-c @keilah-h @anyone-else-idk-lollll-XD

Life/Writing Update, Request for Brainstorming Help, and maybe a scene snippet👀

Hiiii everyone!!! Y’all may have noticed that I’m not super active here on KP anymore😅 Truth is, life has been kinda hectic,…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thanks!! 😊😁

Yeah, lower body can be really tasking.

@everyone @loopylin  @koshka @raxforge @rae @theducktator @esther-c  @keilah-h

I’ve got lots of animal charries! (that’s because my WIP has 100% animal characters). If anyone wants to start this up, I’d love to be a part of it!

@the_lost-journal and

@whalekeeper

If you need help creating animal characters, I’d love to help! (Animals are m…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint  @keilah-h @hybridlore

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A day passed, and then another. Slowly, Joseph was beginning to come to terms with his grief. He was beginning to spend more time praying, asking God to help him. He knew he could never be like Aaron, but maybe God would at least help him triumph over the nightmares that stole his sleep…

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@keilah-h @rae @theshadow @kyronthearcanin @princesachronicle22

Joy

So apparently there were instruments around here. Silvanis and Fairy had each found one. Joy didn’t recognize Fairy’s, but Silvanis’ appeared to be a piano. Fairy began to play, and Silvanis joined in. Joy leaned forward. Their music sounded like nothing she had ever heard…[Read more]

@keilah-h Sorry this took so long. I was on a trip, and then I had to catch up on school.

Ayla

“So there are, in fact, enemy soldiers about like you assumed,” said Mr. Crosshair. “Fortunately, they seem to be pretty brainless, so as long as we avoid being in their direct line of sight we should be fine.”

That sounded boring. Besides, if we av…[Read more]

@keilah-h Whatever you want! Lyrical, instrumental, whatever! ✨

@keilah-h

Hey, thank you so much for this!

Yes, that’s exactly what I’m trying to do, and I’m so glad you can see that! Makes me so happy!!!

@keilah-h

Yeah, well “so far” is the key term, my girl.

We’ll see.

@hybridlore

Either way, God wants us to share Him with others. Ultimately, He knows who is going to accept that gift or not, but that doesn’t change the way we should approach it, right?

I don’t think it should, but I’ve seen some people go at it like They are the ones s…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Sounds good! Yes, I think I get what you’re saying about Divine Election, but I don’t really know how it would change evangelism for me. Either way, God wants us to share Him with others. Ultimately, He knows who is going to accept that gift or not, but that doesn’t change the way we should approach it, right?

I’m also pretty…

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@keilah-h

*cough cough*

I knew that.

*wince*

Sorry i forgot! Okay, so I have an older age range. Good.

I would definitely like some advice (maybe later on) in how to classify these books. I was thinking YA, but that could include 13 or so year olds, and the violence level in these books might be to high for that. I mean, they are kinda dark…[Read more]

@keilah-h

They were characters from a very old WIP.

Glad you like it.

@keilah-h

Glad to hear that!

I wouldn’t delete this, I need it for Joseph’s arc and to really set the whole stage. But, I’m glad you liked it enough for it to be a keeper weather I can trim it or not.

Btw, completely off topic, You’re 15? Right?

@keilah-h @hybridlore

Okay, that’s two against me.

Glad you like the map!!

I’ll take a look at that section and see what I can do by way of trimming a few things up………

what do you think, @linus-smallprint ?

@hybridlore

Yeah. I’ll see what @linus-smallprint and @keilah-h say, and from there I’ll make a decision once I have everyone’s opinion.

I think I could end up trimming things up a little if I need to.

Well, I know the belief in Divine Election is not held by everyone. Some people believe that anyone who chooses to be saved can be saved,…[Read more]

@hybridlore  @keilah-h  @linus-smallprint

For anyone interested, here is the current map.This is what everything looks like in this book.