@keilah-h
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Let’s see…
Viktor
As soon as the man walked up, Viktor heard Reúven’s voice in a low mutter.
“What fine boots. Very much the officer.”
Viktor’s eyes went wide. He spread his feet and gripped his sword, ready. Esen shifted on his shoulders to raise her crest in answer to his…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon anyone here?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@koshka heya! @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
Grimm
Grimm stared at the bottle of green liquid, considering the option for a moment.
He glanced at the little creature in his arms as he twitched. He ran a forefinger over the kit’s brow, letting out a small sigh.
“Let’s try it.” He said softly.
Zlatan nodded, opening the bottle. “Like I said, onl…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h can we get started back here again?? K rlly wanna continue it!!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka @wilder-w
Ok!
Reúven & others
Well, here they were. Literature right off the top. Reúven pulled a chair out for Liora and he and Viktor sat down on either side.
The teacher had stepped out to talk with another teacher in the hall, letting the students settle in before class started. She wa…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 ahh Erich, I luv u lol!! But don’t go getting into trouble!! Tho…I feel like that’s where we’re heading!!
@elishavet-pidyon u on and want to RP with Reúven and them meeting Lyn and Grimm?
I’m finally on for a while!
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Arien started the topic First chapter of my book . . . in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago
Okay, I said I’d post something from my last book, A Dream Come True, so here is the pitch and the first chapter!
First, the pitch:
Elinor and her twin brother Aedan were supposed to be like children to the Dickinsons. Instead, the Dickinsons treat them more like slaves. When Aedan learns that the Dickinsons are planning to sell them as servants…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon that would be an interesting scene! And ugh!! Alwin has my heaaart!! @freedomwriter76 @koshka @wolder-w @keilah-h
Paxton
“Are…Are you ok?”Ok? He was far from ok…
But, he slowly nodded, figuring the young man was asking more about wether he’d been hurt in their sudden collide and less about Paxton’s current mental and emotiona…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka @wilder-w
The poor baby!
Also, I have an idea for a scene for later after Alwin has met some more charries in which he gets knocked over and… his backpack falls open.
But for now…
Alwin
An annoying buzz sounded overhead, calling Alwin’s attention to his slow feet. He sped up, his worn t…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @koshka @wilder-w
Ma poor Paxton….
Paxton
Paxton scrubbed at his eyes, hastily stumbling down the hall, making sure to keep close to the wall.
He glanced over his shoulder, wondering if Aramis would follow soon after.
Thankfully, no one came.
He let out a small, shaky breath of relief, hands f…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@wilder-w @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 (November!!!) @koshka @freedomwriter76
Reúven
Golden sunlight splashed across the crowd of students, staining everything in light. Reúven squinted at the brightness and shifted his eyes away.
Better to not burn spots into his vision.
Viktor walked beside him like a young soldier going to court martial. The b…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @wilder-w @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
Soren
“You messed up, Edrich.”
Aramis mocked a gasp, placing a hand over his chest. “He speaks!” He raised his hands, gesturing at Soren. “Oh great one, please deliver your knowledge and wisdom to us!” At the end of his sentence, he rolled his eyes, plopping himself back onto the be…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@wilder-w @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter76 anyone wanna RP?
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 Aw, reading that made me smile. Steve’s a much better person than I’ll ever be. Also I think he’s earned Dante’s eternal respect and loyalty.😄
Dante
Steve set Dante slowly onto the ground.
“I don’t just give everyone one chance.”
Dante stared up at him.
No. This was the part where the fight was supposed to b…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76. @koshka. @wilder-w. @keilah-h. @godlyfantasy12.
Alwin
Another day.
Alwin shuffled wearily down the hall toward his classroom. The halls were crowded with students wrapped in conversation, exchanging schedules, rifling through backpacks, and heading to class. Bleary eyes blinked in dumbfoundment at the bright spirits of the…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76. @koshka. @wilder-w. @keilah-h. @godlyfantasy12.
I’m on for now!!
So, before I go for Alwin, I’ll introduce the rest of my charries.
Also, I think the invisible country this AU is in is involved in combat in a far off country. It’s not a war close to home, so nobody really notices it except for those involved. (And sorry, I…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h
Jocelyn
As soon as Cécile had spoken, Jocelyn knew the words rang true.
No wonder Dawson became so tense…
Jocelyn’s fists clenched. Hurting someone just because you could…just because they were under your command…
It was…just so wrong.
Like so many other things she’d seen…
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
So um…who’s turn is it?
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Light replied to the topic Thanksgiving in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
First of all, thank you so much for creating this topic! It’s so good to see more people in this world thanking the Lord on thanksgiving.
I’m thankful for my family. My family has gone through some hardships this past year or two, and I’m so grateful for our Heavenly Father helping us get through.
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h sorry Kad doesn’t really have anything to do right now. I’m trying to hurry this up but I’m not sure how it should end
Dante
“Dante…I think we need a little bit more proof than that…
I don’t exactly know if I can trust you anymore.”
Dante looked up and met Steve’s eyes.
Trust.
He had heard those words many times…[Read more]
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