Keilah H.

@koshka @keilah-h @calyhuge @loopylin

Rory

Rory trailed behind Leo and the girls, lost in his own whirlwind of thoughts. He finally noticed they had come to a stop and looked up.

They had come to an open door covered with large paper frogs. Inside a chorus of children were working their way through a simple rhyme. A middle-aged woman was…[Read more]

@keilah-h @calyhuge @loopylin @ellette-giselle

*Nearly tags myself on accident*

Leo

“Sure.” He smiled down at the girls. Their tails were something to get used to, but he had seen weirder things here.

The hall was long and curved, so that in a few paces they had lost sight of the others. Soon the somber red doors have way to bright yellows…[Read more]

I’m fine with it! Glad someone finally RPd!

@koshka @keilah-h @calyhuge @loopylin

Rory

Rory carefully moved so that his back was to the wall. The amount of people was starting to feel dangerous, especially since Rory could sense mots of them would be handy in a fight. He was still trying to get over the fact that strangers greeted each other…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @calyhuge

This group is kinda big and I’m getting a bit confused. Is it alright if we split up? If no you can ignore this rp

The Twins 

The girls crept closer to Leo, getting a bit overwhelmed by all the new people showing up, Ellie especially.

“Hey, Leo,” Ed said, “Wanna show us where the kindergarten classroom is?”

@keilah-h

Okay, I’m thinking I’m gonna keep it.

Yes, but oddly enough, when a God-fearing character dies in a story, I’m not usually as sad as I am at other characters’ deaths cause they’re in heaven (even though they don’t exist lol)

SAME!! I totally know what you’re saying!!

I know!! It is so sad! They would have been such a sweet couple.…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yep sort of. I meant guys dressing as girls, or vise versa. So yeah. It’s gross and called some pretty strong names in the Bible.

XD and I love wearing only dresses and skirts.

@keilah-h

I think the last RP was page 448?

@keilah-h

I think it’s your turn to RP in here?

@linus-smallprint   @keilah-h

Okay, here are the questions I had.

Where the characters believable?

Did they have good, individual personalities, or were they clones?

What would you say was the message of the story?

What would you say my world view was?

Was there anything that seemed unbelievable or forced?

Is there anything that you w…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint   @keilah-h

Okay, here are the questions I had.

Where the characters believable?

Did they have good, individual personalities, or were they clones?

What would you say was the message of the story?

What would you say my world view was?

Was there anything that seemed unbelievable or forced?

Is there anything that you w…[Read more]

@keilah-h

yay!! I’m glad you want to read more!!
question: what do you think of the Seven year jump forward ending?

were you sad Aaron died?

I love how that soldier–Adrian, I think?–wants to learn more about Aaron’s beliefs after he saw how brave he was before dying.

yes!! That was one of my favorite parts. Aaron’s last prayer was that God would…[Read more]

@keilah-h

She sounds fun. XD

I totally recommend looking into girl’s/guy’s different physiological in fighting. It’s pretty interesting if you find a decent source, and I know it’s helped with my characters.

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @esther-c @koshka @loopy

Ok, Y’all. This topic has gone deep. XD Wow. That’s good though. We should really pull apart why we are writing what we are writing. I’m getting a fresh look at my own characters too.

There are many facets to what y’all are saying. I will say first off, that the reversal of the “da…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Hmmm…. Depends on what the challenge is.

@keilah-h @linus-smallprint

I’m sorry it’s so long. I hope no one is reading this on their phone, because then it would seem REALLY long. There just wasn’t a good place to split this up.

So, picking up where we left off at the end of Aaron’s letter.

My Dear Joseph,

I don’t know how to begin this; It is so hard to say farewell. Dear little o…

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@keilah-h

I’m learning to animate on Blender and just learned how to rig limbs. The practice object looked kinda like a tail and all I could think about was how much fun I’d have making scenes from my reactor meltdown of a fanfic haha……

Lol that would be fun. Also that’s really cool!

character models to animate with, although I’m thinking of…

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@keilah-h

theyre really good

I read Heartless by Marissa Meyers first and I loved it so my friend recommended the lunar chronicles

and now I own the whole series and the graphic novel spin off series AND the coloring book

(Needless to say I enjoyed the books)

I’m moving a discussion I started into this thread. It’s kind of related.

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Basically, how far are you willing to disregard gender norms in stories, specifically tropes? For an extreme example, switching a “damsel in distress” for a “man in distress.”

@keilah-h

Haha! Good to know.

So then, since you said something, does that mean your aren’t happy? Maybe a little stressed?

@keilah-h @ellette-giselle

I think “damsel in distress” can very easily be messed up because it automatically takes away the damsel’s agency in the situation, usually speaking. But I would love to see situations where it isn’t so biased towards the damsel’s savior – like maybe the damsel holds the emotional weight of the story in her hands, to…[Read more]