Keilah H.

@ellette-giselle

Lol, yes, that may be stupid of Jonathan. But it makes a good story.

I kind of feel like 314 (was that the right number) isn’t really dead. We never got much evidence besides the Agent telling us he was. He could have easily run away or something. But we shall see.

Good chapters! Jim taking care of Jonathan was hilarious.

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint @keilah-h

It’s Tuesday again! Two new chapters on whichever document you prefer.

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NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

20-21!!!

Father figures are so often my favorite character and yet they always end up dead. 😭

@keilah-h

Hmmm…I really like Father Nicolas from a rather dead wip. I’m also writing a dad by the name of Lotan Linder. I like him so much he just avoided dying where he originally was going to die. I haven’t figured out how yet, but the one character who has two loving and living parents gets to keep them. Also Ryla’s grandfather…he’s weird…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Oh, lol.

@hybridlore

Oh. Duh.

I was thinking in response to Jonathan falling. I didn’t even think of the other chapter.

@ellette-giselle

Yeah…. Totally. *shakes head vigorously *

His backstory. First time we get to hear what happened to him.

@hybridlore

What?!?! But Rick is so sweet and nice!!

*stares at you with total deadpan face*

Poor Jim? Why poor Jim?

Thanks so much!

@ellette-giselle

Augh! Really??

Rick is not a nice guy. 😠 And poor Jim!!

I love the dynamics you have going.

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18-19

@elishavet-pidyon XD love it when the quiet characters have a secret explosive temper.

I am very much struggling to think of what the experiment should be, sorry. I failed chemistry two years in a row in school so I’m not really the best at this lol

@keilah-h

Probably Don.

I love him so much.

@liberty

I read this two weeks ago when you first posted…and then forgot to actually reply. *facepalm* Anyway, I enjoyed this a lot. The POVs seemed different enough to me.

@grcr @rae @esther-c

Praying for all of you.

@loopylin

Too true. 😭

Our vacuum broke, so now it sucks and does not suck at the same time, thereby creating the paradox of Schrödinger’s Vaccum.

@whalekeeper

Poor Lucille. 😭 I like Dali. Please don’t kill him.