Keilah H.

@ellette-giselle

Yeah… 🤣🤣😶

@ellette-giselle

You’re right, you’re right, but that was a better comparison than the Cadwicks. Plus, Sabina and Turin became nicer xD

@hybridlore

WhAt?!?! They remind you of Sabina and Turin? But they’re so…. different. Okay, i guess I can see where you’re going with that, but Rolf didn’t threaten to stab anyone, and Liesl is extremely sweet.

 

It kind of feels like she’s going to be a love interest for one of them… 🤔

Hmmmm.

@ellette-giselle

Lesson learned… I guess I have to add you every time. Unless you were using a different account?

@ellette-giselle

Yayy!!!

Hmm… they are reminding me of Sabina and Turin a little. More closed-off, not believers, smaller family who probably went through some grief. I’m excited to learn more about them. I feel like the father is already suspicious of them… meaning he might be really opposed when they bring up God… but Liesl will probabl…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Darcy and I are complete opposites, but I love him!! He’s one of those complicated characters that just needs some diving into.

@whalekeeper

So it is the relationship cross between Darcy and Aaron, but also the personality. (Though Turin is more prone to kill things than Darcy is.)

@highscribeofaetherium

I don’t know.

That’s when he just walks out of the room from asking Mr. Benet for Elizabeth’s hand…… That might have something to do with it. lololol.

@raxforge

You could head to class…. or burn down the school and fight agents. which would you prefer?

lolololololol.

@hybridlore

ugh!

it’s making me request access again.

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION!!!

The next morning, both young men were extremely tired. They ate a light breakfast, but neither of them felt like getting up and walking again. Leon decided to lay down and doze for another hour or so, and Julian pulled out the book from J…

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@koshka

Rax and Ben

Rax himself began to observe the building. He agreed that it was a beautiful building. He had stopped walking so that Syph could stay balanced. Ben looked around as well. All three were standing around in awe of the beauty and magnificence of the school.

After a while, Rax beckoned Syph down, “We should head to our class, a…[Read more]

Chapters 5 and 6 are out! Same link as last time…

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iTo1_yooHUC67Ve8ddKn2gCS0rK_fjpc0kh_NJu3Sig/edit

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @koshka @raxforge @theshadow @anyone-else

@koska

Rax and Ben

”Yes that is what he calls me.” Rax began to walk inside. “I saved him in the arena where I’m from. He’s called me ‘Master’ Rax ever since.”

Ben stopped and facepalmed. “I am so sorry! I forget you don’t like being called Master. Please forgive me Master Rax.”

Rax chuckled, still walking to keep up with the crowd. “It’s alri…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay!

@loopylin

I haven’t even read those and I already think that’s a perfect comparison!

@whalekeeper

@theshadow

First, have to clear out all of the uh… wonderful writing before posting it.

XD

Lol, I was rewatching an episode from Martha Speaks (I don’t care if it’s for kids it’s one of the greatest shows ever), and this line really spoke to me.

Oh my goodness *brings back memories* We used to love that show.  But I don’t remember that line, sadly xD

@whalekeeper

I’ll be praying for you as well!

@stephie

That’s great!! 😊

@trailblazer

Lol, same

@whalekeeper

Yeah, Nahim always wore at least a speeder mask or a helmet for about five years, so that’s probably what she compared him with.