Keilah H.

@whalekeeper nooooo I don’t want twenty-three characters to disappear into nothing forever

lol it’s your story do whatever you want and ignore my weird rants haha

@rae oh that would be a hilarious idea.

kinda like getting all the pairs to get to know each other without any change of them beating each other up lol

Sniper’s great on saxophone if you wanna know. I don’t know if Huntress has any musical talent, but I’m sure she’ll figure something out.

@theducktator  everyone else be like “WHAT THE HECK WHY…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle lol Fin being dead isn’t what’s funny, it’s just the way she said it, like “How’s he doing? Oh….wait….never mind.”

also forgive me for any typos or poorly written thoughts. I was up at 10 last night writing that and my mom was yelling at me to go do something I’d promised to do with my brother before going to sleep.

@whalekeeper ahh ok.

I thought of an ending if you haven’t written that yet, that most of the characters get out okay because I’m seeing wayyy to many good characters here that will vanish into nothing if they lose, which they will.

You don’t have to use this if you don’t want to, but the idea I had was that there’s a rule that states th…[Read more]

@theshadow @theducktator @rae @kyronthearcanin @princesachronicle22

Sniper

All that wanderin’ and naught to show for it. Except for the Lupinari, but they certainly weren’t edible.

Maybe I shoulda gone back and stripped the meat off a’ that creature. At least then we’d ‘ave had somethin’ to bring back.

Huntress didn’t look annoyed at me,…[Read more]

@theshadow ooh cool characters!

@theducktator

Crosshair

“Get thee hence, thou beetle-headed flap eared knave! Only cowards shoot girls!” the girl yelled. Not threatening at all. Crosshair could barely tell what she was even saying, but he lowered his weapon anyway.

Then she stopped, seemingly noticing that he didn’t look like an inhabitant of…[Read more]

@rae

I keep wanting to ask how Fin is and then I realize he’s dead

why is that unreasonably funny to me lol

anyone willing to go next?

@rae wow that’s a confusing question if I ever saw one lol

is there an actual name for it? Because otherwise “Ruth Triangle” isn’t a bad name for it XD

Y’all are allowed to add tracks of your own! I’ll give them a listen. They can be battle tracks (fast-paced songs that don’t need explaining and are equivalent to background music like in video games) or symbolism tracks (a song that reminds you of a specific idea or scene, write after the song what made you think of it)

also I’m aware they’re…[Read more]

oh and here’s all my tracks! just copy them into your browser and delete the space or something because KP really hates too many proper links.

Battle tracks:

h ttps://youtu.be/OD2PAOCdJ08?si=1I5ojZmqEmffKK8M –Atomic Express

h ttps://youtu.be/wVkNurOWJUQ?si=OxgqmLT695AzcRqV –Theme of Solid Snake

h ttp…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I am a little worried I took some of the POVs too far in my imagination, and if I did, I’m sorry. Some of them I interpreted humorously without thinking much about their actual story 😅

that’s actually fine with me. I trust you with Crosshair, and Mundy’s homeworld is notorious for its completely wacky lore so I honestly think you c…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint very nice! I trace stuff all the time too, so I know how you feel saying stuff like “This technically isn’t my art, I just traced it and added my personal flair”

(My profile picture is a prime example)

@freed_and_redeemed same lol

@whalekeeper speaking of which, when do you think you’ll have the next part done?

and who’s gonna draw first blood haha

@theducktator @rae @theshadow @kyronthearcanin @princesachronicle22

Huntress

It explained the reason why we were always in male-female pairs.

That didn’t mean it wasn’t completely weird…..

The ducks took one look at each other and went to opposite sides of the pavilion, while Evelyn and Callum discussed the ramifications of this situation…[Read more]

@ellette-gislle yeah, it’d be a good idea to make that a little clearer then.

@ellette-giselle ooh I’m glad you put the takeover-by-the-empire subplot back in. I was kinda wondering if you’d forgotten it lol

I would agree with Linus that you probably should draw out the Aaron-Sabina marriage subplot a bit more. Right now it’s not clear if they’re married yet or not.

@ellette-giselle sorry your tag lol