Keilah H.

@ellette-giselle

Hunter

“So, the winged kids are nice… except then some of them are really mean. That totally isn’t confusing. Not only do you tell me I need to keep an eye out for winged students, but I have to be able to tell them apart?” Rory asked. “This place is certainly out of my league. So, who are these fellas with the artist brother…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings yeah that’s just cause of my weird cartoon-realistic combo artstyle haha, but thanks!

you and @grcr have a very similar style! I can see why you’d pick that one.

@theshadow so….we have traded places…..

now you’re telling me to read your story that you’re afraid is a dumpster fire! (Don’t worry, I think yours is great.)

I would go with what @linus-smallprint says about the new paragraphs whenever a character is talking. Look at my fanfic–the google doc separates the paragraphs out a lot, so I’ll…[Read more]

@theducktator

Crosshair

“Well, maybe we could find a way out while we go on a quest. Like, a secret passage full of deadly traps under a moat! I doubt you could get out even if you tried. It’s a well known fact that you can’t escape a fantasy world until the world is saved, and your arc is complete. We’re only at the inciting incident. Unless…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle amazing!

@ellette-giselle I’m still reading!

@freed_and_redeemed I like how you took the basic idea of the What If episode and made it your own thing!

@theshadow lol yep

oh and thanks. Which loaf scene exactly? Cause there are a couple haha. What point are you at?

I tried to make it as entertaining as I could. Some of it’s derived from official media the developers of the actual game have put out over the years. The plot of the latter two-thirds or so are from a comic series they made (I don’t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle haha I think my dad showed me the dog one a while back. poor doggy lol

and ha, that’s a perfect shot of the horse leaping.

@ellette-giselle whoaaa that’s so cool! You recreated a movie poster, I presume??

I’ve tried, but it never looks right.

@theducktator also yes, killing off characters=very relatable.

Me, I usually end up mutilating characters. One loses an arm here, another gets blinded there, still another gets their face scarred over there…..Nothing TOO bad, but yeah, my guys (and girls sometimes) get beat up.

@rae lol yeah, I probably should be glad of that haha

@ellette-giselle

Hunter

So Rory had military training! Interesting. Maybe Hunter could introduce him to Echo or Rex.

“From all the schools I’ve ever come from there’s always been a hierarchy among the students. There seem to be the privileged fellows who get away with anything, the targets, the guys just trying to study, and the rebels. I’ve…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle that’s great! Glad you’re having fun!

Hunter

“No worries, I just have never seen a guy with wings or… or claws…” The boy looked embarrassed. “I’m Rory Alans. It’s nice to meet you, Hunter. I… I’m not from around here…” He stopped and considered his next words carefully. “Where do you come from, and how did you end up here?” H…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle ooh nice art!

and haha @linus-smallprint Alan and Keefe don’t look much alike, do they? lol

(gets flashbacks of imagining Oliver with a slouch hat despite the fact that you said there was to be NO HATS IN THE LYEN ARMY)

hehe glad you didn’t go full out on me

@ellette-giselle that was perfect!!

Hunter

An older human boy. A little timid of the claws.

“Sorry.” Hunter brought his hand down, sensing the other boy’s apprehension. “I promise I’m not out to hurt you. What’s your name? I’m Hunter.”

He kept his wings folded and his claws at his sides, so as to look as unthreatening as he could.

@grcr oooh I like yours too!

@mineralizedwritings here is mine! Don’t know how close it is to the real thing, but I like it either way.

@ellette-giselle Well, I could bring my charries back in to show you if you’d like. Basically, you write a short paragraph from your character’s perspective. It could be from first or third person, whichever you like better. Then leave it off for the other person/people to respond with their character(s).

Here, I’ll show…[Read more]

@whalekeeper ooh interesting! I just looked it up and I kinda like the plot. I remember seeing a promo poster for it a long time ago.