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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium
I’m in!!
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Allison posted an update 1 year, 2 months ago
Calvin, go do something you hate! Being miserable builds character!
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Girl that might be even worse….WHY WOULD YOU KILL HUGO’S SISTER???? I’m going to kidnap him and give him a hug and fuzzy blankets and hot cocoa…it’s so sad!!!!
😭😭😭😭 I know!!!! Though it fits the story better…😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 We will see though, I’m writing that part right now and basically taking one step forward two steps back…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I dont thinks thats bad or weird, each person is different. Ill show mine to everyone but my parents😄
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I dont share my work with anyone in my family except my little brother who loves to hear my storys and hes the only one in my life right now who will listen to me yammer on about it for hours 🙂
Its really up to you whether you want to or not. My parents are both good people and love to read what I write, but I dont want to share my WIP…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Hey! Good job, that must be so exciting!
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Aaaahhhh!!! I love it!!! Here… Ill write a quick one… (OH! Also I have decided in my WIP, Vikii does live! But instead of her its the main characters older brother and Hugos sister.😭)
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Ottoline leaned her head on his shoulder. At first he thought it was an accident, but when she didnt move again he…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic December Daily Poetry in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Hey this looks fun! Ill try to do/share some if I have time.
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Janellebelovedpig replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I might come sprint for a bit tomorrow (roughly 18 hours from now) after work and before music practice and caroling. 🙂
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Allison replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
I will pray for you <3 Sorry you had a bad day and if you ever need to chat, I am always here!💗
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Allison replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
I will be praying for you💗
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Allison changed their profile picture 1 year, 2 months ago
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Allison replied to the topic Most Common Character Traits? in the forum Characters 1 year, 2 months ago
🙂 Im not sure how else to describe it. Gold seems to fits it perfectly. Neither blond or brown.
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Allison replied to the topic Most Common Character Traits? in the forum Characters 1 year, 2 months ago
I try to write a ton of different characters. Mainly all are extroverted like me. My main character in my current WIP though, is an introvert and I thought it would be a slight challenge and fun to do a different personality than my own. I have another character (as a few of you know) Hugo, he is slightly bad, but still good. I b…[Read more]
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Allison posted an update 1 year, 2 months ago
“I’m not a bit changed—not really. I’m only just pruned down and branched out. The real me—back here—is just the same.”
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Allison replied to the topic Hello, good people! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 2 months ago
Hi! I’m Acancello, also known as Allison! I am homeschooled and in 10th grade. I love dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food, writing, reading, talking and a lot more 😁! I am writing a dystopian and post-apocalyptic thriller novel now and are nearly done. I’m so glad you could come to Kingdom Pen! Alright, now I’ll ask you some…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Please say a prayer in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
Ill be praying for your mom 💗, sorry that had to happen, back injury’s are the worst!
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Allison replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Oooh! This seems really fun! I will see if I can join…
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Lets see… I do think that the huge story was a little bit much with the large number of dragons you picked (Though the idea was totally amazing!) That was a lot to keep track of for a person like me who isn’t on here to much. I think if you guys who are on here more often want to keep doing it, you should totally go for that on here…[Read more]
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Allison posted an update 1 year, 2 months ago
@esther-c @jonas @freedomwriter76 @hybridlore @grcr @euodia-vision @everyone
Does anyone use Grammarly? I was wondering if it is as good as everyone says. I’m thinking about using it to make some minor corrections on my book, but want to know if its reliable.
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That name sounds familiar, but I don’t have any idea what it is.
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Heres an excerpt I found online:
“Grammarly is an American cloud-based typing assistant. It reviews spelling, grammar, punctuation, clarity, engagement, and delivery mistakes in English texts, detects plagiarism, and suggests replacements for the identified errors. It also allows users to customize their style, tone, and context-specific…[Read more]
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@acancello
I’ve heard of it and used it once…but it’s kinda annoying because it corrects your style. So it would say sentances aren’t grammatically correct because they aren’t….but I wanted it that way because it sounds better and it’s just my style. It was annoying and I had no use for it so I deleted it. I think Google Docs works fine for…[Read more]-
Hmmm, alright. I also think that would be annoying. Thank you! 🙂
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Ehh… I’ve heard of it, but I’ve never used it before… sorry, I guess I can’t help much…
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Thats ok 🙂 I just found out about it today too
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I have actually used it lots of times before! I don’t use it while writing though, because it gets kind of acting, but any type of editing it would be great for. Did you have any other questions in specific about it?
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Haha whoops, I just realized you said you didn’t know what to ask. Umm, I think it’s definitely worth downloading. I never got premium but you can still do a good amount of stuff with the free version, like spell check, which is really good for just finding typos xD. And then you can look at your tone and see if any of your sentences aren’t…[Read more]
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Yes it did, thank you! 😀
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I’ve never personally used it, but I know a friend who’s used it. But I haven’t heard much about it from her, so I guess I’m not much help. XD Honestly, I’ve never had any interest in getting something like Grammarly because I don’t struggle with spelling and grammar too much and I have a friend who’s willing to edit my books for me. Lol. So yeah. XD
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Yeah, I would mainly use it to catch all the little things I missed, and after, I may just hand the whole thing and a red pen over to my mom since shes good at things like that XD
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Lol XD
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i use the web extension! it gives me suggestions on everyhting i write, whether it be an email, short story or google search! i really like it!
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👍 Thanks!
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@acancello
hey, this is random, but how’s writing going? more importantly, how’s Hugo??? <333 XD
Hi! Thanks for asking, it means a lot 🙂 Its going pretty good, I went to a coffee shop last night and met a girl who was really interested in my work.
I am now at 80k and I’m soooooooooooooo close!!!!!!!!!!
Hugos good, right now hes helping people evacuate the city. XD
Hows your writing? Are you ready for the Holidays?
@acancello
Oooh, coffee’s amazing!!! And I’ve also been getting closer to a girl at school who I consider to be in the popular group at school and I’ve always felt kinda inferior to her (cuz she’s amazing at sports and everyone likes her, while I’m just the quiet nerd of the class lol), but we’ve kinda bonded a little over our writing. She really…[Read more]
Yeah, thats kind of the funny thing, I hate coffee XD I was there for my home school group, it was a board game night.
Thats great that you are getting closer to her! And she reads your stories? Thats great! I would have people read mine, but they need a lot of editing…. OH NO! Thank you! You just reminded me that I have not gotten any thing…[Read more]
@acancello
Oh that’s funny XD I absolutely LOVE coffee…especially a good pumpkin spice latte (mmm….) My stories need a lot of editing, but as people read them then it inspires me to actually DO the editing lol
Oh no!!! XD I literally just looked up “gifts for mom” etc. I reccommend Amazon, it’s my best friend lol
OH I wish I was brave enough…[Read more]
I should start having people edit.. that would be great!
We dont have Amazon so I will either make something or have my Dad take me shopping… Ill think of something XD
Boys dont scare me at all, but maybe because the neighborhood I’m from was mostly boys (Skateboarding boys) and they are some of my best friends since they are really active like…[Read more]
@acancello
You don’t have to have an Amazon account…you can just go to amazon.com and get what you need! If you don’t have an account you do have to pay for shipping…but yeah, it doesn’t bother me that much.
I know, it is so annoying how so many girls just are totally addicted to their phones!! I have a flip phone so I can’t do that much on…[Read more]
Also, I really admire how social you are…like I am just so tense around social environments and just kind of want to disappear so yeah. Random thought XD I need to learn to be more social…
@savannah_grace2009
4H sounds really fun! Thats so awesome, a steer? We are going to start raising pigs in the spring, which will be different. First year living on a farm😂!
I have a Samsung phone that takes the worst pictures in the world, but I mainly use it for texting and calling. Secretly I am crazy obsessed with video games (Nothing new or…[Read more]
@acancello
I’m not on Christmas break yet…we get out on Thursday at 2, when we usually get out at 3:45 so it’s a nice early release! I probably won’t go to school on Thursday just because it’s going to be a big school party and I don’t want to play in a cornhole tournament just because…lol
I dont blame you, cornhole is not the most exciting game XD Ive played a bit though since one of my good friends loves it, but usually they all turn into a good old fashioned game of ‘pelt’. XDXDXD
@acancello
Turns out I might get out of school thursday the easy way…I just got sick XD AND I HAVE A TEST TOMORROW!!!!!!!!!! AHHHH!!! the timing couldn’t be worse…but at the same time I have all the time I’m sick to study lol
Aw man, being sick sucks. Hope you recover soon! <3 And a test? Oof, wish you luck 🙂 We are off school now, since we didnt take other breaks off throughout the year, but to be honest, I really miss it XD I love learning
Annnnnd I may get to go on a trip to with some friends this week…. we will see… 😃 😬
@acancello
Thanks <3 I love learning too!!! (everyone thinks I'm weird for that XD) Ooooh! A trip!! We might go to Havre (a town in Montana) this weekend for Christmas, if my mom's back gets better. It really hurts her to travel in a car, so it all depends on how she's feeling.
@savannah_grace2009
That will be fun! Hopefully your Moms back gets better. Back injuries are rough! I guess now I’m not going? Plans changed again XD. We were going to go to D.C, but my parents didnt want to drive in the Christmas traffic. Oh well, there will always be another time!
And I know, learning is so… enlightening. My brother thinks…[Read more]
@acancello
Oh no!! I’m sorry, DC sounds amazing, so sorry you guys don’t get to go 🙁 I kinda hope we can still go to Havre because that’s where my grandparents live, so it’s really nice to get to see them.
I would bring my books to work on at night…but I go to public school for almost 9 hours a day, so by the time I get home, the last thing I…[Read more]