Karissa Chmil

Also everyone (Sorry to chat so much) 😀 but I was wondering if you would want to (You defiantly don’t have to if you don’t want to ) But I’m writing a historical fiction book and could you just read over it and see if it pulls you in, if you can see it , if it sound real and other things like that! Thanks!

Jade stepped off the train into the…[Read more]

@esther-c

Your really good at description! I just love –  Ami melted under the gaze of Ev’s chocolate brown eyes.” “Ev searched her emerald green eyes, trying to understand what she was thinking. Its super sweet!

@thearcaneaxiom

That little piece of writing you shared is so good! I like how it paints a picture of what the main character is seeing! Here’s a piece of my writing that I wrote recently, it may seem not very exciting- but it is part of a book based off a nightmare I had and it is pretty creepy so I’ll just stick with this 😀

I walked…[Read more]

Another word that just popped into my head is “Somnambulism” which is basically a fancy word for sleepwalking, but it sound more exciting 😀

Also does anyone here know anything about describing people? Do they do it all in one place or do they spread it all throughout the chapter or whole book? I spread it out usually, but then think its better…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

That is an amazing description!! It defiantly would pull the reader in. I love the description of the blanket, It’s kind of sad and happy at the same time 🙂

@godlyfantasy12I

I have a whole book on crazy words (that I can’t get to at the moment) but I’ll have to share a few on here!

Oooh, great! I’m excited to see some! Also, yes I do  love to write description but either I feel like I write to much so that it bores the reader  or to little so no one  knows what I’m writing about 🙂

@lightoverdarkness6

That’s a good idea! Thanks! I also really like those words,especially jocular, gregarious and magnanimous . I’m going to try to add them into my book!

@thearcaneaxiom

Wow! What an amazing magic system you have! That is so creative and would be so much fun to read about! Unfortunately my WIP does not have any magic in it, but who knows maybe someday… 🙂 I think the only other magic books I’ve read, were all the Harry Potters which I loved. I think what drew me in was the great description.…[Read more]

@sarahsmile

Oooh! I love Anne of green gables also! Have you read all 8? I have and I love them sooooo much! There also my first favorite right now, but as soon as I read or re-read another series it changes 🙂 Which one is your favorite? I really cant decide. Have you read the 3 little women books by Louisa May Alcott? If not you should try…[Read more]

@felicity @loopylin

Sorry to just barge in but watermelon on pizza would be pretty good ( I think)! It would be the perfect sweet and savory combo right? I always love to try new food and like Felicity I will also try it as soon as I can 😀

@sarahsmile

Welcome to Kingdom Pen, I hope you love it! I’m Acancello. Home schooled high schooler that loves to read and have zero drawing talent 🙂 I love guinea pigs and dogs and traveling! I also am in the process of moving cross country with my family which is amazing! I also love crafting, cooking, running, video games and so much m…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

Wow! Thank you so much! That helps at lot! I did not even know any of those facts and they will help a lot in my book! Thanks again!

@esther-c

I like what Ami’s answer to the question was, that’s a really good way to describe her!

What is your favorite food or meal?

Shauna: I really like to eat sushi. I love how many different types there is and how each one tastes different.  I also though, will eat anything if I have to, I’m not picky.

Jean: I LOVE hamburgers! The fluffy…[Read more]

@80strish

Welcome! I’m Acancello! I’m also home schooled and I too love acting! I also love guinea pigs, dogs, traveling, trying weird food, writing, reading, talking and a lot more:D ! I’m so glad you could come to KP! OK, now I’ll ask you some hopefully not already asked questions 🙂

Whats your favorite book series?

Do you like to do any…[Read more]

@loopylin

What color best fits your personality?

Shauna: Green

Jean: Why?

Shauna: Its the color of life, plants, trees. Its a beautiful and mysterious color.

Jean: Mysterious?

Shauna: It is said to be the color of feelings.

Jean: Wow! Oh! Its my turn! Haha! Anyway I think either blue or purple will fit my personality.

Shauna: I’m not sure…[Read more]

@loopylin

Hahaha! I love your characters! They are just like real people! 😀