Karissa Chmil

@esther-c

I will take any feedback! Thank you!

@highscribeofaetherium @freedomwriter76

Yes its pretty disturbing😬  But don’t worry, in the end it all gets stopped and everyone is safe! 😃

@highscribeofaetherium

Well.. C.H.I.M.E is a little bit disturbing to some people, it is a horrible, evil and nasty government facility that… (here comes the scary part!) Changes humans into machines expertly. Yep. The kids have to walk all 406 miles they would have drove to C.H.I.M.E to save their parents and top the facility if they can.

@mineralizedwritings

Thank you! Your right about some of those errors, I’ll fix that. 🙂

@whalekeeper @freedomwriter76

Thank you! Yes, Vikii is already one of my most favorite also!

@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @everyone!!

I wrote some more for my WIP! I would love your guys’s feedback on it!

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The sun moved higher and higher up in the sky, while the scenery stayed the same.

Hugo was in the lead, I was in the middle and Sam held up the back.

“I wish we had a machete.” Hugo sighed, brushing asi…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I read both chapters you posted…😢 😭 I love them!🥹

@godlyfantasy12

Oooh! This sound super fun! I have one on my Google docs (One doc that’s nearly longer than my WIP itself)  but want to print out stuff and put it into a book/binder/journal! I will do one and share it with you guys! I would love to see how yours is coming along also 🙂 This is going be so much fun!

@highscribeofaetherium

Thank you!!!! He looks great!💗

@esther-c

I just checked out the link, this already seems like it will help a ton! 🙂

@euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings @esther-c

Thank you guys so much! You would not believe how much this has all helped me!💗 🥰

@hybridlore

Thank you! I am going to skip a ton, dont worry 😀 lol! Yes, I kind of meant descriptions, more like what do people normally wear/eat/decorate. (You know I should probobly ask my mom🤣)

@loopylin

Gameboys are the best! My parents had them from when they were younger and gave them to me and my brother, including a ton of games. My favorite being Legend of Zelda Minish cap! I dont think have played the Wii, we have a WiiU which is really fun! I guess we collect consoles from X-box 1 all the way to the Dreamcast and the original…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Ok! Heres the description of Sam! (You don’t have to do him if you don’t want.) Sam is pretty tall, 16 blonde hair medium length not to long, but not in his eyes. Blue eyes, smiling. Wears jeans, a t-shirt (maybe with a monkey on it) and tennis shoes. Here is the description of him.

Samuel Seaborn Smith- Clam yet playful.…[Read more]

@loopylin

I used Canva (I dont have pro, but it still works great) I loooove yours! What do you use? Haha, cant go wrong with a Gameboy! (Am I the only person who has one?) 😀

@highscribeofaetherium

Ooooh! Shes perfect! Thank you so much! I might want another, Ill give you the details tomorrow! Thanks again!!!

And of course Sam! The most funny guy in the world! He looks so depressed here because it was taken right after his friend got kidnapped. 🙁 

You guys all made me want to make/ share some now 😀 I am not very good, but here is my first two. My main character, Shauna (14) and her second brother Sam (16) I have not made Scott the oldest at 19 yet. 🙂  Hope you like them!

@light-warrior-pen @esther-c @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon @everyone!

I have decided that the end of my book will end on a happy note! What could be more happy than a wedding? The only problem is… well… I have never been to a wedding, unless you count the one I went to when I was 3? I don’t remember anything except I wore a pink dress 🤣 My…[Read more]