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HighScribe replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 3 months ago
Hi! Nice to meet you, Trilliane! I’m Bridget, aka HighScribe, aka the resident slightly insane sword-obsessed book hoarder of KP. I’m a homeschooler, and a high school freshman. I mostly write fantasy, and I’m working on a fantasy universe with multiple planets with my brother, @Jonas.
Now the traditional quest…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Anyway, you also said you don’t put Nedan in RP’s because he’s underdeveloped. I actually think the purpose of role plays is actually to develop your character. I have put many characters that aren’t developed in role plays and it helps me to hear their voice and learn more about them, just from writing them outside…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Wow. You (and your sister) are amazing at building worlds! I feel like mine is so cliche! I really can’t help you much on worldbuilding, because I’m really new to that and it would be like trying to teach a professional artist how to draw, XD
But I will gladly try to help you with characters!!!
@grcr gave some great pointers on character…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@grcr @highscribeofaetheruim @jonas @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @anyone
I drafted the song again, not sure if i really like it yet, but it’s a step closer than yesterday.
Life is a waking nightmare,
Day after day, I roll along without you
Night is a dagger of pain because you are there
Haunting my dreams like some old ghost,
Calling my…
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Oop, guess I didn’t see that.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
I’ll comment more later, but for crystal color, maybe one could be a whitish/clear or maybe silvery colored? Or sort of iridescent?
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
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PrincesaChronicle22 replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Oh darn 😅, thanks for letting me know! I’ll try to track it down and re-post it
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Ooo… this sounds really interesting. I’m excited to hear more!
For the colors… maybe use a third shade of purple, or grass/parakeet/pear green (I don’t really know what it is exactly, so here’s the hex: #87e36b)? I know those are a bit similar to the ones you already have… but that’s all I can think of at the moment. Were you…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I don’t find that particularly difficult.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
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RAE posted an update 2 years, 3 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @freedomwriter76 @esther-c @jonas @calyhuge @beth-torres @grcr @smiley @whalekeeper @loopylin @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @acancello @keilah-h @princesachronicle22 @idk
I just got a great idea, but I’m not sure if it is so great.
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Oh man, guys, I think I’m more insane than usual…I just sang that song while in Alpha’s character cloak, and I’m crying. Like tears on my face and a runny nose. And now I’m wondering…
WHY DID I KILL HER?!?!!
But alas, history is written, and I cannot alter it.@jonas @whoever else would like it in lines @whalekeeper
Not sure if I’m…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @jonas @esther-c @smily @whalekeeper @hybridlore @idk
Ignore me if you wish, I literally just typed in tags since i didn’t know what else to do (If you can tell)
I’m trying to write a song for Alpha Grath. This is for after he looses Emmie (if you don’t know who she is, she was the love of his…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Okay, cool! Thanks!
Any time!
Those number systems hurt my brain! 😵💫 I think I’ll stick with simple base-something systems!
Alright, fine😅
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
I’d have to look back over all my words so far, but I know that the name ‘Thulac” has it unvoiced. I’m guessing it varies depending on the word, like in English.
Ok cool!
Okay, that makes sense. Do you have any tips on what words I should create? So far, I’ve pretty much just been creating words as I’ve needed them, but do you have another…
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RAE replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Where’s the ‘oo’ sound(s)?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Somehow I completely missed your progress on your conlang on here. December was really crazy for me, so I guess it makes sense, sorry😅
So you’ve already got a lot of words down, so that’s really cool! Quick question, how is ‘Th’ meant to be pronounced? Is it voiced, like ‘that’ or unvoiced, like ‘math’?
So you’ve followed English’s rules…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 3 months ago
Oh, I didn’t see the ‘uh’ words, and I thought that the ones above the sounds corresponded to the sound below.
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 3 months ago
The problem is that for people who don’t consider the Bible entirely reliable, they could argue that anything they want is inaccurate. They already do that with His miracles.
True. At the same time though, I don’t find it unreasonable to have skepticism towards towards the accuracy of any historical writing, even biblical. The difference i…[Read more]
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I think that is awesome! I don’t have any theological problems with that. I tend to avoid doing robots and stuff, because I don’t believe that such a creation would have a soul, and I would usually rather avoid writing about those topics. I haven’t thought about how that would extend to a human created in a lab. There’s nothing biological about a…[Read more]
*either not dither
I don’t like to play with sentient and rational robots, honestly those creep me out. The idea of Alpha being originally a a robot made out of flesh came from me just thinking about him. It was really weird, I was talking as Alpha to his best friend Terry and it just spilled out. I was making it up as I went, but it sounded like it was a set piece…[Read more]
That makes sense to me. I think we’re pretty much on the same page.
I haven’t thought about it in depth, but from first glance, I don’t have a problem with it either. I guess it would depend also on how he was created. Did they take human DNA to create him? If that’s the case, then I think he would have a soul just like any other person, because the rest of us are created with human DNA, even though the process of…[Read more]
He was made from mixed DNA, to give him the traits Grathmere wanted. I believe most likely, he was made the weird 3D printer way at first, and developed from there.
He was actually interestingly enough, not made to have any moral compass. He was supposed to be a heartless assassin that did what Grathmere wished. He’d have limited free will, but…[Read more]
I think that’s a really good idea. I don’t find any theological issues with it. Er, I don’t really have any other comments ATM 😅
@rae
I like the idea! I think it makes sense that he would be without breath at first, and I think that God could definitely give him a soul if He chose
Ooh, ok. So I see where your doubts are coming from. Here’s my opinion…
I believe that as soon as a baby is conceived in the womb, he (referring to either gender in this case) is a human being with a soul that is loved by God. Obviously he cannot physically breathe yet because he’s only a few cells. But when he is born, God is ultimately the O…[Read more]
@rae
I really like this idea!!!
I think this is a fun idea. I don’t think there’s any theological problems. Is this your fantasy, or something else? If the first, then I wouldn’t think theological and scientific problems should be your primary concern, because what you say goes. Even if your more into hard worldbuilding, you can build up a distinct theological system that is…[Read more]
@thearcaneaxiom Yeah, this is in my sci-fi/fantasy Galaxy. Alpha is one of my main charries.
I don’t think this is too weird an idea for a sci-fi universe. It’s basically like God put literal, actual life in a body which was built, not born. Like a machine built out of flesh and bone, it was working, but it wasn’t alive quite yet. I think the way he explains it is a little strange, but that’s an explanation and can be modified a bit.
My only issue is that if his heart was going but not his breathing, he would die pretty quickly, so maybe he was effectively “dead” with neither organ working, and when they tried to “jump-start” him, his heart started but not his lungs, and then when they were confusedly trying to figure it out he started breathing.
That was a weird explanation, sorry….
It makes sense…in fact that was the way I pictured it in my mind, just Alpha sometimes says things weirdly, and leaves out parts.
I believe the term for during but still coming back to life by revival is called “clinically dead”. Not sure if Alpha falls under this or not, though…
Ok, good, it made sense…lol