Cloaked Mystery

I…worldbuild in the dark at night usually (I have trouble sleeping) and I rarely, if ever, actually write a comprehensive thing on my world, I just scribble things on random sheets of paper or in notebooks that I then loose in the sea of notebooks that I have already.

Yeah, I need to change some of my writing habits.

@trailblazer

I’m not really good at making character arcs, but that a pretty good story you got there.

@whalekeeper

Yes, lol

@whalekeeper

Yes

@whalekeeper

Yes, thank you for the memes, lol. I especially like the CS Lewis one

@theducktator

I tried doing that, but I felt like I needed to plan more.

@whalekeeper

I knew I forgot someone else! Dang it

fifth or sixth time

That’s encouraging, lol

I knew I forgot somebody! @savannah_grace2009

Tags!

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@the_lost-journal

I’ll probably will be able to do it next week (since I go every Friday until like the second week of February) but thanks :]

Also yeah, they are

Gotcha

@the_lost-journal

I believe that I have the skill to do black, but my mother and father think otherwise… also where I go there is no double black sadly.

@the_lost-journal

Green and blue. I would’ve done black but my mother said no 😢

Oh, they’re doing that today?

@the_lost-journal

Also how was skiing?

Good, thanks

@keilah-h

Gotcha

@whalekeeper @theshadow

Tenz

As Emeline spoke, Tenz shrunk back against the wall. The vapor around him had all but disappeared besides the tendrils that carried Reid. “I want Omi,” His quiet, childish voice, barely to be heard, was tinged with loneliness and sorrow.

@rae

You’re welcome!

Ah, ok thanks for the explanations 👍

@the_lost-journal

lol

@highscribeofaetherium

Thank you for the critique! You gave me some very helpful feedback.

Just a couple things to address so you don’t have to keep wondering

The second and third sentences seem to imply that Max’s only non-human feature is that his eyes are full of emotion. That doesn’t seem like a necessarily inhuman trait. Do I understand cor…

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