Cloaked Mystery

@keilah-h

Don’t worry, I like this RP too, so I don’t want it to die either!

@rae

I’m assuming you’re looking for feedback on this?

The only thing I would say is perhaps give Nahim a better reason to think that there was a traitor. You currently have him thinking that the place couldn’t have been taken if there wasn’t one, and maybe from an in-universe point of view that’s true, but I think to the reader it feels lik…[Read more]

@rae

I was meaning to read your previous version, but I was so far behind that it was a daunting task to begin, so this is perfect!

@rae

Ah, that’s too bad ☹️ I’m usually the last person in my family to get sick too…except my dad who just doesn’t get sick sometimes (cheater!) But I also seem to get the most sick a lot of times, although other times I don’t get very sick at all.

I hope anyone in your family who’s still sick feel better soon!

Oh yeah, we also need to pick up a large quantity of butter (of all things) from a relative.

@rae

You too!!

Does that mean you or someone else have also been sick?

Hope you feel better

Thanks! I’m definitely on the mend. Thursday was my worst night, but each morning my throat feels super clogged. I have to play piano in church tomorrow and since I’ve been on vacation, I haven’t been able to practice for a week, so hopefully I’m at least n…[Read more]

@rae

We are in a bit of a slump. I’ve been on vacation this week, plus I’ve been sick the last couple days, so I’ve been feeling mentally drained. We get back tonight, and I’m going to try to be more active on this RP.

@keiah-h

I think the giant is 9’

@savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @rae

Ariac

“Well then,” said Ariac. “I guess we’ll split up. The hall only goes two ways though, so two of us can go each way. How about you girls go that way and Riker and I go this way?” He figured Riker was the most potentially dangerous of the three, so he wanted to keep an eye on him.

@rae @savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76

Ariac

“I don’t,” said Ariac. “I just got here.” He hesitated. “I suppose we should work together.” He didn’t particularly trust any of them, but he didn’t think any of them would be a threat, especially the two young girls. He was pretty sure the thing in Riker’s hand was a weapon, but he doubted it w…[Read more]

@rae

I happen to know that that is the case in the Netherlands, but I’m not sure about Germany. Wouldn’t be surprising.

Well, I finished BoM now. It was definitely more enjoyable than SoS, and the new metallic arts stuff (unkeyed metal minds and such) are definitely interesting. My biggest problem with it is that the entire book felt like an excuse to introduce those principles, and they were introduced so quickly (practically info-dumped) that I’m not even sure i…[Read more]

Ariac has black hair, yellow eyes, and is of average height. He wears a grayish-blue cloak over a plain black top and dark brown pants. He has a belt which has no weapons or tools of any sort attached but instead a bunch of pouches containing money or personal trinkets. He’s in his late 20s.

Ariac

Ariac hesitated. The young man seemed almost…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Alright, I’ll do that. I forgot to post a description of Ariac earlier, so let me do that first.

Izre

The seven of them moved down the hallway in single file, eventually reaching the doorway to a large room. Four tables ran horizontally down the length of the room and were lined with chairs. Colesco and Callipsa were already there.

There was no food on the table, but Izre couldn’t (and didn’t need to) eat the stuff, so she didn’t care.…[Read more]

@rae @highscribeofaetherium

Okay, I’ll write a transition there real quick. We can give them some time to talk before the king comes to talk.

Krenna

Krenna looked up at the portal, then ran toward the wall, jumping and planting one her blades into the wall. She pushed off and went sailing towards the middle of the ceiling. She grabbed the edge of the portal and pulled herself through, rolling to her feet on the other side.

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Quick! Get them to the dining hall before they fight again!

@thearcaneaxiom

Well, yeah, gold compounding is just absolutely ridiculous. Pewter and gold would be pretty good, because you could probably store the increased healing granted by pewter, and so store health without getting sick. That would be a good “tank.”

Compounding bronze would be pretty good, since it would let you never sleep. A bendalloy…[Read more]