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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
Yes, he is insulting her.
Izre doesn’t usually take insults personally, ’cause she doesn’t really care about other people’s opinions, since most people are younger (and therefore, in her view, don’t know what they’re talking about), weaker (and, in her view, not worth bothering much about), and/or (she assumes) less intelligent. She’s a funny mix…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
Izre
“I won’t kill him if he’s the only way to send us home,” said Izre. “What do you propose?”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
Izre
“If he’s cooperative then he won’t need to be dismembered!” said Izre. “Now answer the question!” she snarled at Klethen,
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
Krenna
Krenna hit the wall and fell to the ground, winded—and with broken ribs, but that didn’t matter. She stood up slowly, gritting her teeth as the crystals inside her fused her bones back together. Loop was right, not that Krenna would ever admit it.
Izre
“This is how you get answers!” Izre hissed at the hooded man, not taking her eyes o…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
@everyone
I’m think I’m gonna throw a character in here. I don’t really know what’s happening, though, so could someone tell me where I should put him?
Ariac
Ariac lives on the planet Diera. As an Immancer, he can engage in cosmic transactions that let him “trade” his belongings (which includes anything he can be said to “own”, be it physica…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
I’m gonna leave my last RP as it is–Krenna would have other reasons to avoid fighting Glace, so just ignore that inaccuracy. She’ll just go for Klethen because he looks like the weakest to her.
Izre
The woman with black hair and glowing blades on her arms attacked Klethen.
Izre irritably swung her tail into her, sending her flying…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
The only thing I know about Vethe’s appearance is that she has white hair.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Mistborn in the forum Book Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
Yeah, it’s kind of weird, doesn’t that seem like a cognitive power, rather than hybrid? I think Brandon Sanderson said that that was a mistake and it would be switched with brass, which would make sense, since warmth seems like a hybrid rather than a cognitive. The problem is Sazed was using warmth at the end of WoA, before…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Mistborn in the forum Book Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
For a compounder, I would totally pick Steel. Those powers are good on their own, but as a compounder, you would basically get infinite speed, which is just totally OP.
For a generic Twinborn, a Steelrunner-thug would be really good. A lurcher-skimmer could be cool too, cause you could just become a giant magnet.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Mistborn in the forum Book Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
Steel – stores speed
Iron – stores weight
Tin – stores senses
Pewter – stores strength
Brass – stores warmth
Zinc – stores mental speed
Copper – stores memories
Bronze – stores wakefulness
Chromium – stores fortune
Nicrosil – stores investiture
Aluminum – stores identity
Duralamin – stores connection
Gold – stores health
Electrum -…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Mistborn in the forum Book Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
Oh, I should provide a list of Feruchemical powers since those are harder to remember. Just a moment…
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Mistborn in the forum Book Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
@thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium
(Yes, yet another Brandon Sanderson topic. Maybe we could have just used the general Cosmere one, but 🤷♂️)
I just finished AoL and started SoS. In my opinion, AoL was thoroughly decent. I didn’t like the villain, because his motives seemed really confusing and he felt pretty flat. One thing I like about t…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
Anyway, you could have Zahlin come. Idk what the nature of his sword is, but if it’s anything like Conviction and Bloodsong, it would be able to block Vethe’s. Otherwise, I can send Ellis or Kate.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
Sure, God cares, but there are different levels of care.
Not with God. He is deeply invested in your life, even if you can’t see Him. It might sometimes feel like He cares more about other people, I’ve felt that a little before, but it’s not true.
What you deleted showed up in my notifs. We don’t have to talk about that if you don’t w…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
Well, it’s alright. 🙂
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
Yes, I agree.
True, but we’re not talking normal fantasy, since normal fantasy can portray Black magic as good. We are talking godly fantasy. In godly fantasy, we must make the distinction from Darkness and Light, Hope and Despair, Love, and Hate. God, and the world.
Yeah, that’s where rule 2 comes in.
I believe you think I am attacking you…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
*sigh* why are we pointing out mistakes in each other’s rp’s.
Glace only has a vambrace on his right arm that is mithaln, otherwise, he has a mask, hood and normal clothes, not even Mithweve. Reason: he was banished. He technically shouldn’t wear the mithaln vambrace either.
Okay, see? We all make mistakes. Don’t beat yourself up about t…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
A correct fantasy world has basics, whether you deny it or not, you cannot possibly create a fantasy world without carrying over parts of the real world. My point stands.
What do you mean by “correct”? Yes, a fantasy world will have things from our world, but you can change most anything. The only reason it has to have a basis from our wor…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
That’s basically what I do. The magic isn’t actual magic, because it is part of the natural world rather than derived from supernatural forces.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 4 weeks ago
I highly doubt God would have a sword that passes into the spiritual realm. I believe it to be demons.
In real life? Sure. But in a fantasy universe, the powers necessary to create that could exist and not be black magic.
Here’s another thing that can be considered. There can also be “magic” from nature. This is really what all the magic…[Read more]
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