Cloaked Mystery

@thearcaneaxiom

No problem! I did post a lot of stuff here!

The main thing is do you think there is anything particular overpowered in this magic system? I don’t think any of the individual powers are particularly OP, and nobody can have more than one, but by having people team up, there might be some OP effects that could be achieved.

@princesachronicle22

Yeah, the sleepless are interesting. That reminds me: I was surprised to see a sleepless in Edgedancer. That was one of the few things that surprised me.

I liked how he continued the trend of Lopen accidentally swearing his oaths after the action is over XD.

@princesachronicle22

I had mostly similar thoughts about Dawnshard. It was more enjoyable, than Edgedancer, for me, because the events weren’t things that I had already figured out based on later books. As I said before, I didn’t avoid spoilers for this book, so there was nothing shocking. The information about dawnshards is what interests me mos…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

You were writing in first person the whole time, because you consistently used the word ‘we’, but you refer to yourself in the third person, which implies that this being narrated from someone else’s perspective.

@highscribeofaetherium

Well too bad, because I no longer have them.

@savannah_grace2009

Fortunately for me, by first and worst bits of writing were on physical paper, and I have long since thrown them in the trash, so they are gone forever.

Unless… what if they aren’t? Oh no, I have to track them down and personally see to it that they get destroyed!

@loopylin

Riina

“There was no rule banning swords,” Riina said. “…for some reason. And if you’re so concerned about our comfort, stop trying to take our very comfortable footwear.”

@whalekeeper

Okay, I decided on who the literature teacher can be, but I won’t introduce them yet since there aren’t any classes right now. It’s a character I’ve used in another RP, and the image I have in my head of them teaching a class is cracking me up.

@savannah_grace2009

I would assume it goes without saying, but I will also be out of town till Sunday night.

@highscribeofaetherium

Hmmm… Is there a way for us to like decrease your number of posts?

@whalekeeper

What about literature? That might be one I could find someone for.

@loopylin

Riina

“I’ll leave when I want to!” said Riina. “If you won’t fight then I win automatically! You can’t make me leave! I can go wherever I want!”

To prove it, she did a flip backwards through a portal and appeared again a few feet away. She raised her sword again in challenge and generated crystals in the grooves that ran the length of…[Read more]

@everyone

Btw, can someone give me a list of what teachers we have and what classes they’re teaching? It’s possible I might have some characters that could be good/funny for some new classes.

@loopylin

I wasn’t worried XD. I’m not necessarily confident he would win, but I can’t say without knowing anything more about what sort of magic he uses. I figured he wouldn’t agree, as that would be most irresponsible.

@loopylin

What does he do? XD and here I assumed he was just some generic guy!

@loopylin

Who?

Riina is having too much fun right now (and I’m having too much fun RPing her.) she’s gonna get a bit over the top now!

@highscribeofaetherium @rae @loopylin

Riina

As Riina walked through the room, she noted with some dissatisfaction that nobody seemed properly awed by her presence. Nobody even seemed particularly impressed by her jumping aro…[Read more]

Vlydia

Vlydia barely flinched as Riina landed next to her, having dropped from a portal above. One got used to her sudden appearances…to some extent.

“What did you do now?” sighed Vlydia.

“Me? Nothing!” said Riina. “Some snoopy guy wanted to take my boots, and then a jerk threw a knife at my head. Had to get out fast.”

Vlydia narrowed he…[Read more]