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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
@rae @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @beth-torres @trailblazer @acancello (I think that’s everyone)
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
That would indeed be desperate. There would also of course be the option of adding more characters, although even that might not work very well, because the characters understand that these people were brought to help them—
I’VE GOT IT!!! A spy hunt! We add a new villain (and maybe a few non-villains to add confusion) and hav…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Cosmere/Brandon Sanderson in the forum Book Discussions 11 months ago
Shadows was interesting, if a little creepy. I was quite interested in the “Evil” which I’m assuming had to do with a shard splintering.
Yeah it was interesting. I’m not sure if the Evik is directly caused by a Shard splintering, but the shades are so it seems likely. Arcanum Unbounded mentions that a shard was shattered near Th…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Cosmere/Brandon Sanderson in the forum Book Discussions 11 months ago
It’s almost the end of the year, and all the secret projects were for this year.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Cosmere/Brandon Sanderson in the forum Book Discussions 11 months ago
Yes it is.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
The mistake with spending so long in Lillen was that they had time to work out their differences and cooperate in a safe environment and now they are working together perfectly. That would be good in real life, but us not at all what we want here!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
I’m honestly a bit bored of the action scenes too. Sometimes they’re cool, like the fight in the burning palace, and the fights between our characters were fun as well, but this one just feels bland to me. We’ve already explored a lot of the interesting fight possibilities. Next time we do a fight we should at least creat…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Cosmere/Brandon Sanderson in the forum Book Discussions 11 months ago
Okay I just checked and that is everything, except the White Sands graphic novel. I think a full novel for White Sands is scheduled for the end of 2025, so I’ll probably just wait for that.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Cosmere/Brandon Sanderson in the forum Book Discussions 11 months ago
In other words, RAFO😂
I wonder if you could use Feruchemy. Remember those disc things in BoM? What if you were able to store connection to Elantris and then tap it so that you could use AonDor anywhere?
Raoden assumed that they all came form the Dor, which I’m guessing is secretly just Devotion and Dominion, despite just being s…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic I’m new here! in the forum Start HERE 11 months ago
True. What’s your point?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Cosmere/Brandon Sanderson in the forum Book Discussions 11 months ago
I have now finished the Emperor’s Soul. I actually really liked it! Forgery is a pretty cool magic system. The book was very different from what I’m used to from Sanderson.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic I’m new here! in the forum Start HERE 11 months ago
Welcome to KP! I’m Cloaked Mystery, known more mundanely as Jonas. I’m mainly a fantasy writer, though I tend towards fantasy with hard rules, verging on sci-fi. As my sister already mentioned, we are both working on a shared fantasy universe with multiple planets.
I’m bad at the newbie-questions tradition, so I’m going t…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Yeah, we’ve been trying. I’m not sure how we can do that, but I want to if we can.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
What do you mean?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Cosmere/Brandon Sanderson in the forum Book Discussions 11 months ago
I think Sanderson said you would have to “hack” the magic system to get AonDor to work off world.
Sanderson is well known for his magic systems, but I feel like AonDor and all of the other magic systems that are only hinted at are all fairly boring. AonDor is quite generic for a magic system. It can do basically anything, and it…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Cosmere/Brandon Sanderson in the forum Book Discussions 11 months ago
I just finished Elantris. I don’t have much thought on the story at the moment, except that it was relatively mediocre. I feel like a lot of it has been done better in his later books. For instance, Raoden’s plot line was very similar to Kaladin’s in WoK, but I didn’t find Raoden as interesting of a character.
I’m more intereste…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Wouldn’t presence make both phase though? It’s extra-dimensional space, but it’s still a directional vector, unless I’m thinking about your idea of in-between planes wrong. It could still be rationalized I guess even then, just having a restricted spatial influence, just like 3d spatial restriction.
Okay, so I’m not really th…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
One thing I was just thinking about is that the Resonance of Conversion creates the possibility of a manmade magic system. It would be possible for Conversion to create a new form of Arcana if you knew what you were doing. On its own, this would be useless, but it’s also possible you could create the ability to use the new Arcana. Conversion a…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
In case you forgot, Riina is still in a standoff with Mr. Gregory. No pressure, I just wasn’t sure if you remembered or not since you have RPd for some of your other characters since then.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Cosmere/Brandon Sanderson in the forum Book Discussions 11 months ago
Didn’t Hoid give Kelsier a good beating? Unless that doesn’t count, since He’s a cognitive shadow.
Yep, it didn’t count. Hoid said that Kelsier’s mind fabricated the pain that he should feel, and so he isn’t actually hurting him.
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