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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Okay. I have no idea whether a planet could safely orbit a blackhole.
These are the main technical difficulties I was thinking of:
- Planets are warmed by light from the star they orbit.
- Plants need light to photosynthesis, and animals need plants to eat. (You could replace all plants with fungi, which don’t need light…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
So, it orbits a star so far away that they can’t even see it? And there are no other stars near enough to be seen? I’m not sure if it would even be possible for a planet to be orbiting a star that was far enough away that it couldn’t even be seen, but idk.
I have the same problem on Ildin, since people live underground. I…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Cool! So is he already with Nahim? Or are you going to RP with him separately?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@rae @princesachronicle
Kate
“No. I’m ready.”
What’s Trade Tongue?
That’s all I have for now.
Since you brought up languages, what are we saying for those? Are they all automatically able to subconsciously speak English? (From my understanding, Trade Tongue is English, correct?) My characters don’t speak English, because it…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Ellis
Oh, really? said Conviction sarcastically. Why would she think that?
Ellis was thinking the same thing but didn’t day it out loud.
“Well,” he said to Szabrin. “In my world, we have one too. Only half the time though. If it works the same here, it will probably set in a few hours.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Ellis
Ellis raised an eyebrow.
“What? You mean the sun?”
She had spoken of “darkness.” Did her world have no sun?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Ellis
Darkness? What was she talking about?
Conviction said they were in another realm. Was it possible that she was from yet another separate world.
“Well, as much as I would like to figure this out, I have some answers to find,” he said. “You can stay or follow. Just don’t get in the way.”
He started towards the palace again.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@princesachronicle22 @beth-torres
Okay. You can put those characters wherever you want. Nobody has interacted with Snake yet, but that doesn’t mean you have to.
You can go next in our group.
Ellis
If she didn’t recognize the name ‘Percaro,’ then she probably didn’t know about Árvendor at all.
“You…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery posted a new activity comment 2 years, 1 month ago
I recently discovered it exists. It’s usually used in comics, not novels.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Ellis would just think she’s being polite. In real life, it used to be normal to call someone you didn’t know well by their last name. If Rin’s culture is the same she might actually call him by his first name, thinking it’s his last name, which he might find weirder.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Ellis
“Imitated a bird,” Ellis repeated slowly.
Yeah, said Conviction. You know, completely normal things!
Ellis narrowed his eyes, wondering if she was making fun of him. She seemed serious.
“Thae Shi?” he asked. “Are you Sa Li?” Her hair was dark enough, but her skin seemed too light. But the Sa Li weren’t neces…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Ellis studied her suspiciously for a moment, then sheathed Conviction.
“I would like to know the same thing,” he said, crossing his arms. “I’m Ellis Percaro.” He glanced up at the roof she had fallen from. “How did you get up there in the first place.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Mystery ideas in the forum Mystery 2 years, 1 month ago
I’m not a mystery expert, but I do enjoy them on the occasions I’ve read them. (Although that mainly includes Sherlock Holmes and a couple of Edgar Allen Poe stories.) I would be completely clueless creating a plot for one, so I can’t help much, but I think it’s a cool idea.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Ellis
Ellis raised his sword as someone on a nearby roof shouted something. It was a young woman with long dark hair. He was pretty sure she hadn’t been there before.
“Who are you?” he demanded.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h
That’s fine with me.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Up to 3 per person is allowed. (We have 7 not 6, though.)
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@rae @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009
Ariac
“Then maybe you lack self-preservation instincts,” Ariac snapped manifesting another sword in his other hand. “My patience is running out. You better explain what you want with us, or. Get. Out. Now.”
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Um, do you think we should change the turn order, because the way we’re doing it seems disj…[Read more] -
Cloaked Mystery posted a new activity comment 2 years, 1 month ago
You log out so you can spy on us without us knowing? 😱
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Kate blinked. “Storm a… Oh. That.” She looked at the palace. “With just three of us?”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
Kate
“No. I don’t,” said Kate flatly. She looked around warily, and then released the Compression. The energy dispersed, blowing her hair.
“Very well, Lord Nayhelm,” she said putting on an air of confidence. “I am Lady Katílía Atmor. It seems we’re all in this together.”
She turned to the other woman. “And you are?”
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Okay, that makes more sense why I have never seen it before.