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Trahia the Minstrel replied to the topic Cover Art Sharing Space/Critique in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Thanks!
I love your compositions — it really evokes this feeling of wistfulness, or determination — the mood tells a story. I love the last one, and I think it’s cool you work in coloured pencils! I’ve done a lot of coloured pencils drawings before. Good job!
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Trahia the Minstrel replied to the topic Cover Art Sharing Space/Critique in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I love your collage! It’s definitely got me intrigued about your story.😊
Yes, art that you can feel satisfied with is sooo rewarding…
I love the second one you put up (which you said you’d done first), but since I don’t know your story, I can’t say whether the darker and more ominous aesthetic — which makes it feel lik…[Read more]
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ella replied to the topic A Little Bit of Everything in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Heyy, awesome to have you here! I’m Ella and I write all kinds of stuff too, from dystopian to fantasy to mystery. I love reading his-fic but i’ve never worked up the courage to write it lol
Anything fun you’ve been reading recently? I have millions of books on hold right now, but I really want to read The Inheritance Ga…[Read more]
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Trahia the Minstrel replied to the topic Cover Art Sharing Space/Critique in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Thank you so much! The girl on the top of the cover is Princess LÃna Veh-Jûranal of FérÄ«jinar, Lily of the Oasis. As to what she’s worried about … that’ll have to remain a secret, until my 2nd book is finished 😉😁.
Yeah … I wanted to have ‘The Prince of WalfKlau’ at the top, and originally I did, but then I realised that i…[Read more]
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Abigail.M. and Trahia the Minstrel are now friends 2 years, 11 months ago
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Cover Art Sharing Space/Critique in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Wow, Trahia! I love these, especially the second one. I love the two girls in the center of the cover. The hairstyle, clothes, and expressions show a lot about them. Who is the girl on the top of the cover? She looks like a very intriguing character and makes me wonder what she’s so worried over. I really like her design. E…[Read more]
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Trahia the Minstrel started the topic Cover Art Sharing Space/Critique in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Hi Everyone! I’ve been making some rough sketches of my first two book covers, which I thought I’d share and hear whether you thought they looked good or not, and I thought maybe you guys would like to share your covers too, if you have them! It could be fun!
Book 1 and Book 2.
So I’ll go ahead and tag a bunch of people:
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
I just think he’s an awesome avenger and I love his character arc. He’s also just really funny (a pain sometimes) but has a good heart XD (pun intended) I also love the father/son relationship between him and Peter Parker. I just…I dunno lol. Do you not like Iron Man?
It is! Ahh you should totally watch it sometime! It’s heart…[Read more]
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 11 months ago
I’m SO sorry, I just saw that your question was already answered! Yikes, sorry about that
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 11 months ago
Yes, that makes sense:)
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 11 months ago
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Trahia the Minstrel replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Is it sad if I say my favourite Christmas movie is a toss between Veggietales’ St. Nicholas, and the Donut Man’s Christmas episode? Both were such a great part of my childhood, I just get fond memories whenever I watch them. I found the Nativity pretty good as well. Oh, and I recently enjoyed Christmas with the Chosen.
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Breaking my silence. *EMOTIONAL* in the forum Announcements 2 years, 11 months ago
@not-so-secret-secret-assassin
Well then, I’ll take back the cross out ‘cause most comedians probably could take a couple lessons from you.
No problem, I love giving anyone and everyone that Yoda quote (like. All. The. Time.) XD Anyway, that IS a dilemma, but sadly I can’t help you too much there. I haven’t been on KP for a while, (I try to stop…[Read more] -
Abigail.M. replied to the topic How do I make a non-cliche escape scene? in the forum Plotting 2 years, 11 months ago
@not-so-secret-secret-assassin
That post you wrote is awesome! And is actually very helpful, (probably more so than several articles out there), so even though it was written for the awesome writer Elanor, I just wanted to say that it was very good and actually inspired me to write an escape scene for my current novel!
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic How do I make a non-cliche escape scene? in the forum Plotting 2 years, 11 months ago
This scene is stacking up to be very interesting the more I hear about it! My favorite part of this (I know, I’m a cruel writer to characters) is that Kedja knows she can’t escape and that only Zlya will be able to make it out of the prison. This is great story-wise because most escape scenes get pretty much everyone out without a ton of…[Read more]
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Abigail.M. replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 11 months ago
Hi, Koshka! I love this poem 😀 I visualized it being sung by a captive like you said it would be and think that that works wonderfully:) It felt wintery and mysterious and sad and hopeful. I especially loved the last stanza and how each line in it was its own yet completely tied together. So I think that’s beautiful.
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
I knowww! Yeah, it’s definitely make it or break it for me too. Uhhh Marvel. XD you love it and you hate it.
Ugh, I know they’re all so good! I love Cap and Spiderman. Especially spiderman XD.
Ohhh my gosh Black Widow!!! I love her movie, it was even better than I expected it to be! Gahhh they’re all so good! I love black panther too…[Read more]
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Trahia the Minstrel replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Hi! I’m Tráhia the Minstrel. Welcome to Kingdom Pen!
I like your website, by the way. I really enjoyed reading your post about book recommendations! I love that you love Viking Quest too! It’s my favourite series ever!😃😃😃
That’s cool you play piano. I learnt for 8 years, then stopped because I wanted to just play for fun … and beca…[Read more]
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Ava Coulter replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Oh awesome! I like that about short stories too. Although I tend to make them too long and drawn out XD
Ikr! I should!
Aww that’s awesome!! I was kind of similar. When I was around 5-11 I would write short stories and novellas and “publish” them with tape, staples and printer paper XDD. And then when I was…[Read more]
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