Jessi Rae

@rochellaine, okay. I thought maybe she had posted a portion in one of the forums. but that makes sense

@leumeister My real brother is wondering if you make money on your songs. (My real brother, who is not you, no matter how many times people that for some reason…)

@jenwriter17 No I didn’t cry for the movie. But that song makes me sad. and nearly cry. :*(

@kaymart Heyo! Well, you can subscribe to topics and you will get an email whenever someone posts on that topic. also you get an email when someone tags you.

@dekreel Nice ending. He has risen indeed!
(apparently I can search for GIFs even if I hide them. I have the ability to forget things. XP Oh, yes.

@jenwriter17, it has been very interesting and eye opening

@rochellaine, where can I read @seekjustice ‘s book???

Here’s my character:

Lillian

Red, slightly wavy hair

16 years old

Blue eyes

5’4

She’s from the 1860s, so she wears a Victorian-style dress

@jenwriter17, whether or not God knows the future and if He does then do we have free will

@seekjustice…where can I find it???

@seekjustice, wait, have you published a book?

@jenwriter17, I’m debating someone, does that count?

@skredder I love it!!!  Nice job!

@mnvalentine Thank you for sharing!  I do agree with Elizabeth and Skredder.  It is a little to dull and slow moving, even though its great for establishing some facts.  I like how you described the characters.  Now I am curious to read more. 🙂  I have terrible times with my first chapters too.  So exiting you are so close to publishing!

@mnvalentine Shorter would probably help. I don’t think you necessarily need more conflict as much as you should capitalize on the conflict you’ve got. Humor would also help move the story on a bit faster. 🙂

@jenwriter17 I’m really excited for when you get to parts 4 and 5. I’m going to put up 3 tomorrow and I’ll put up 4 and 5 on Wednesday because I may be gone later this week. Also, 4 and 5 should be read as close together as possible. But, yeah, I can’t wait until you get there! 😀

@Dekreel woohooo I love it! *tosses confetti* xP

@SeekJustice @Sam-kowal I’ve actually already got a cabin (plus several other offers, haha) so I’m all good, thanks though! Have fun with the Kapeefer cabin!

@mnvalentine Thank you for letting us read this. I have to say that I am pretty curious as to what happens after this chapter. But, it does seem a bit stagnant. It didn’t feel like anything was really moving. Even the part where they had to rush to move everything in a week didn’t feel hurried. The characters themselves didn’t seem to move much.…[Read more]

It is, definitely. You’ll get it right, though, I know it. 😉

@jenwriter17 Through the majority of the story, it will be told from Casse’s POV. There are a few times where I will go into another character’s POV. Like I did with Evelyn in this one. The majority, like 96% of the story is going to be from Casse’s POV.

Head-hopping is a big problem I know I have and one of the things that I really need to fix…[Read more]

@seekjustice This is gonna be good! I also requested access. 🙂