Jenna Terese

@daisy-torres Awesome job!!!!!! Ooh, I love that snippet!!!!!! 😀

I wrote 270 words. Last line:

But before I realized what was going on, a ball of fire sped past me, crashed into the ice tower I had just created, and melted it in a heartbeat.

Thank you so much for sprinting with me!!!!!! 😀

@scripter-of-kingdoms I’m sorry I missed your sprint yesterday. I hope your writing went great though!!! 🙂 <33

@daisy-torres I’ll join your sprint!!!! 😀 And YAY that’s exciting!!!!!! 😀

@relia

you sound exactly like my friend Annalise and my sis, lol! (who both do creepy gollum voices😆) i love it!!!!  if ur psycho, then so are my sister and Annalise (and they aren’t because they’re reaaaalllly smart hahaha).

anyways, nice to meet you, i’m ella.  i write dystopian, thriller/suspense, murder mystery, and paranormal fantasy (not e…[Read more]

@faith-q

Of course:) Thank you also!:D

@faith-q

Hi Faith! I’d love to join (I need some accountability for a project too:)

@godlyfantasy12

Of course! I’m glad I was able to help. You honestly don’t write poetry? I thought that that was excellent 😀 It was so much fun to read and interesting and yes, I just loved it!

YES!! That is amazing! Much better on the length and it fades the poem out more naturally, I think that’s sensational:)

@godlyfantasy12

That’s alright, KP sometimes takes the line breakers out of posts and the paragraphs get joined, (it’s happened to me several times, but I’m not sure what causes it).

Number one, -I consider this the most important part of my thoughts on this- I loved your poem! Especially where the narrator refuses to put the mirror away and…[Read more]

Also, @gracie-j I just HAD to say that I LOVE your tagline. It’s pure gold, sis. XD and I can honestly relate waaAAAAAaaay too much XD

@faith-q

Wow, this is a tough one. I honestly get the struggle, I’m not entirely sure if I’ll have any helpful advice, but here’s just some thoughts.

The first thing I recommend is just to read everything and anything you can find that is a story told from a child’s pov. Especially ones with girls around your character’s age and maybe try to…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

I must say that I go against the grain and like the powerful villains who don’t have sympathetic backstories and are just evil. Jadis is by far one of my favourite villains because she gives me such chills, particularly in The Magician’s Nephew in the city of Charn. Villains like Mother Gothel from Tangled who are powerful and com…[Read more]

@nanisnook I’m so sorry I missed your sprint!🙁 I hope I can sprint with you next time though!!! <33

@lydia-s Yep, they went great!!! 😀 Thank you!!!! <33

@typewriter77

I think the right theme would emerge once you have a general idea of the characters and how the plot should go. For a short story, perhaps you might want to avoid some of the bigger themes which would require an entire novel to do justice (pun intended).

Since your story is to be a mystery/thriller, one idea that came to me is to…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

Oh yes I love it when the antagonist and protagonist mirror each other thematically.

I like unexpected villains (e.g. killer being a child or sweet old lady). I’m also fascinated by villains that have unique and interesting motivations because the power-hungry, petty-jealous-rivalry, s…[Read more]

@lydia-s That’s totally alright!! I understand! 🙂 Thank you, though I haven’t written today yet. I’m going to write my 100 words right now. (I have no idea why I’m waiting late in the day to write!😂) I hope your writing went great!!!!! <33

@lydia-s I’m sorry I missed the sprint.

If anyone is going to be sprinting soon, I’d love to join you! 🙂

@lydia-s

Hey, I’m back! R u you going to be starting again soon? (I saw the post where you said you were on a break.)