@jenwriter17
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@dekreel Yeah, I have a feeling I would be a sweet, well-meaning character who unintentionally ruins everyone’s plans because I would deal with things in a real-world way. 😀 That would be very annoying for fantasy believers, and could really mess up the cliched plot for them. *snickers*
I don’t know…if you act enough like a person I might f…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@rochellaine Hmm…. *smirks* I like that! It’s unique!
… Wait, so how do you feel about me? Please don’t make me disappear! *prepares to hide under table*
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@dekreel Have you noticed how not-into fantasy I am? I think if I was in a KPA I would probably be the person who instead of wanting to go on the quest would try to call the police. Or if someone had a cute imaginary creature for a pet I would say something like “That’s not a real animal” and poof! the creature would disappear because I di…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@rochellaine Absolutely! *whips out character notes* What’s your suggestion?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@dekreel Oh good! 😀 May I make a suggestion?
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Joy replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@rochellaine Okay I’m back, but only for about twenty more minutes XD
The KPA is actually going to be a whole series of holiday-themed stories. So if you aren’t in this one, you will undoubtedly be in another one. And don’t worry — I won’t make you a creature 😉
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@dekreel Bye! I’ll probably still be here for a while, so I might be here when you get back.
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Joy replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@rochellaine Ahh, I gotta go! Sorry I couldn’t stay longer! I shall return later!
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Daeus replied to the topic The Synopsis Nook in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@sam-kowal The idea is definitely intriguing.
As far as the synopsis goes, I agree with Kate that the voice is slightly inconsistent. My main advice though is cut anything you can. Like, “believe me, that tends to curb one’s appetite could be cut. There are a few words you cut elsewhere or phrases you could rephrase to sue less word.
Also, I…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@dekreel *Slowly peeks out from under eyelashes* Am I going to be in the story?
I don’t really care one way or another if I’m in it, so don’t put me in if you weren’t planning to. 😀 I just want to make sure I’m not some weird creature, because I have noticed you are prone to doing that, and I don’t think I would like it… 🙂
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Joy replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@rochellaine Exactly! And it’s working out!
Cool! BTW I read what you had on the doc, and I really liked it!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@dekreel A vague idea is better than nothing! 😀
I’m working on my western again. Kind of a little outlining, which I don’t normally do fully, but I’m a little confused as to how the story is going to work out, so I’m trying to give myself at least a plot to work with…
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Contemporary Western Novel in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@notawriter That should be the new KaPeeFer motto: “Just a tag away!” 😀
Okay, conflicting goals: I think I could do different, but parallel goals, but not conflicting goals. I think if they had conflicting goals there is no reason they should even consider being together. If I met a guy who was a missionary or a doctor I would immediately th…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@rochellaine Hi!
Yep, KPA again. I want to get it done by March, so I’ve been working at it a lot
At least I have an idea, a vague one albeit, of what’s going to happen!
What are you working on?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
Okay, @dekreel, I’m here. KPA again?
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NC Stokes replied to the topic The Synopsis Nook in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@Sam-kowal I would definitely read that! The whole idea is cool. I love sci-fi/fantasy mixes! *totally not biased because I’m writing one* 😛
Hm…Â Limnet Stanson… Limnet STANson… STAN!
Was that on purpose? 😀
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Blogging… in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 8 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Haha, Good, because I just realized I binge-read quite often. I’ll take an old series of 3-10 books off the shelf and lie down and re-read them till 3:00 am. 😀
So if it’s a thing…other people do that too?
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Joy replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@dragon-snapper @catwing @aislinn-mollisong @rochellaine @skredder @audrey-caylin @waterlily @anyone
Let’s see if I can get more writing done… Care to join me?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic The Synopsis Nook in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@sam-kowal Oh, it’s not a set rule. Tell Stan he should revive himself, because I do believe in dragons.
I prefer realism to fantasy, but I did enjoy Chuck Black’s Kingdom and Knights series, as well as Frank Peretti’s Cooper Kids books. Dystopian isn’t really my thing, either. For future imaginings I like Star Trek where Earth is fine, almost…[Read more]
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Joy posted an update 8 years, 8 months ago
@dragon-snapper First of all, I am REALLY enjoying beta-reading Sector One! It’s genius. I have just finished reading Installment 44. Secondly, I have a question: I made some edits on grammar and structure etc. on “Record Changes” mode, and I was wondering how I was going to get it all back to you. Is there a way? Would I email it to you? Or is…[Read more]
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@dekreel Yaya! I’m so glad you’re enjoying it! 😀
So, if you’re doing Record Changes, I would just send whatever doc. you’re using back to me as an attachment. That should work.
Ooh… chapter 44. You’re just about to /that/ chapter. Chapter 45 is one of my favorites. XD
@dragon-snapper Haha, yeah I just read it this morning! XD It was… different!
So what if I don’t have your email anymore? Do you have a Silver Phoenix email I could use?
@dragon-snapper *squealing* *scratching walls manically* I just finished reading your book. OMIGOSH ITISONEOFTHECOOLESTTHINGSIHAVEEVERREAD!!!!!!!
*finishes destroying the wallpaper* *moves on to the table* That was amazing!! I especially loved it near the ending. Oh, and the epilogue. GAH! I need to get my paws on the sequel
Lol. Different is a word. @dekreel
… No email? Well, I don’t currently have a contact page on my Silver Phoenix, but I could re-email you? Would that work?
And as for the second comment…
*explodes* DEKREEL YOU ARE SO AMAZING FOR SAYING THAT (and amazing anyway XD) THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU so muuuuch!
Haha! The sequel has been…[Read more]
Oh, and I’ll be posting some collages on my blog (the Writings page) within the next few days. So if you want to see those… 😛
And I have to ask–who’s your favorite character?
@dekreel
Sure, that would be fine.
Thank you! And you’re very welcome!
Sweet! I will definitely be keeping my eye out for the collages
My favorite character…… Oooooh…… Gee, I don’t know… I like Ike, although at the beginning of the book he was kind of annoying. I also like Zelaya, Everett, Theron……….. And Kaydon mostly because I got to…[Read more]
@dragon-snapper
So, it’s your dad’s email right?
@dekreel
@dragon-snapper Yes, it’s my dad’s email. 😛
I should like to get an email that actually belongs to “S.F. Dekreel” sometime…