Jenna Terese

@rochellaine

well, I would have thought you would have learnt by now 😀

I have to go, but I’ll be on later 😀

@seekjustice You awful person, you!  How could you not warn me, after I told you I had a rough day with ATOTC?!  I had only gotten a few paragraphs into Justice’s POV when I started crying again! 🙁  Oh, Sapphire!  Oh, Kendall!  Oh, Waif!  Oh, everyone!

😀 😀 It was great, as always!  I can’t wait to read the next part.

@seekjustice Okay.

I’ve almost finished reading it and I’ve got to say that talking to someone through a low window is near the top of my list of “most romantic settings!” 😀 😀 😀  It happened several times between one of my favorite fictional couples: Patty and Bill, from Carolyn Wells’ Patty series.  So you have totally made my day with the C…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Cool! I’m actually not going to be around for much longer, since I have physiotherapy today, but I should be around at my usual time today.

Yes, I did. 😀 and I’m sorry, but we will eventually get to the last two chapters 🙁

@seekjustice Hello!  I’m here. 🙂  I’m going to read your chapters then work on my western.

Did you get my message about A Tale of Two Cities?

@dekreel  This is cool!

Name: Kaya Young
Species: Giraffe
Appearance: Light purple and violet, long eyelashes, and dark brown eyes.
Personality: Sweet, has trouble focusing, joyful, gets really excited over everything.
Other notes and/or facts: Smells like pink roses, enjoys hula-hooping, and loves fountain pens.

@skredder

Sorry 😀 I’ve read the first part but I’ve had a crazy weekend and haven’t had time to comment yet, which hopefully I’ll be able to do today 😀

@rochellaine @jenwriter17 @catwing @skredder Anyone around? I’m writing!

@warrenluther04 That’s wonderful!!! (Goodbye 🙁 )

@rochellaine

Um…yeah?? I think so. Or wouldn’t it be your Thursday? or your Friday maybe, if we’re being technical, because it’s at 7pm…I don’t know.

@mnvalentine Thank you for letting us read this. I have to say that I am pretty curious as to what happens after this chapter. But, it does seem a bit stagnant. It didn’t feel like anything was really moving. Even the part where they had to rush to move everything in a week didn’t feel hurried. The characters themselves didn’t seem to move much.…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Through the majority of the story, it will be told from Casse’s POV. There are a few times where I will go into another character’s POV. Like I did with Evelyn in this one. The majority, like 96% of the story is going to be from Casse’s POV.

Head-hopping is a big problem I know I have and one of the things that I really need to fix…[Read more]

See what I mean about repetition? I had already mentioned my website! :O

If you want to help…

check out my website! If you leave a comment I’d appreciate knowing how I know you. I’ve received several bogus messages on there in the past.

krltalk.witnesstoday.org

@WarrenLuther and @jenwrites17, most of my ideas come from the Bible itself. A verse I read or that was incorporated into a sermon. Even hymns we sing in the service.

Here are a few (titles are my own, but you can change them if you see fit to do so–I do ask that you let me know if you want one of my story ideas so I can remove it from my “list…[Read more]

Okay. I am admittedly new here (the group, as well as KP almost as much).

I wish I could say with enthusiasm that I will truly love and enjoy all of the forums and such. Sadly, that isn’t possible. I get confused pretty easily much of the time. And forums/chat rooms tend to move so fast. Also, is there an alert or something about when I receive a…[Read more]

@seekjustice This is gonna be good! I also requested access. 🙂

@jenwriter17 Alright-y then! Here’s part 2. It’s a bit longer than part 1. 🙂

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xt0Mg5mn3HJW2aIZvbheF66fFbkISe567zs-KRVw7N0/edit?usp=sharing

@seekjustice I just finished watching ATOTC 1958.  I am weeping, comfort me!  I am thankful it is the first two chapters of your novel you have given us, rather than the last, for I could never bear it.

@that_writer_girl_99 By all means, read away! 🙂

Sorry about the POV issue. I can’t seem to stay in one head. I will fix that when I edit the story. It’s supposed to be Casse’s POV.