Jenna Terese

@valtmy

The only thing I would say in rebuttal to what you’ve said in your comments though, is that I had quite heavily based the world on the world of the Great Depression. That’s part of the reason there’s such a divide between the rich and the poor and also in the technology. In the Great Depression, the people were living in a world that was…[Read more]

@jenwriter17

Bye!

@seekjustice

Good to know I’m not the only one that thinks so then. But worldbuilding is very crucial (one could say it is the heart of) for a dystopian story. And any changes you make (esp in the tech level) can cause ramifications in your plot (e.g. suddenly the conflict or problem doesn’t make sense because it can be s…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Bye!

@jenwriter17 The hardest thing about this one is trying to bring it all together into something that effectively caps off the last two books.

@valtmy Most of it makes sense and a lot of it was said by another beta reader last week. Most of the main critiques have to do with my worldbuilding especially, which I know is pretty subpar.

@seekjustice

Haha hope you can make sense of my blubbering rants! 😛

@jenwriter17

Are you one of the beta readers as well?

@jenwriter17

Its coming along slowly, but at least I have something that resembles a plot now.

@jenwriter17 @valtmy

I’m still here, reading over Valtmy’s comments 🙂

@catwing

Bye!

@seekjustice @dekreel @jenwriter17

I’m on if any of you still are.

@dekreel 🙂

@valtmy Got it. Thanks so much!

@seekjustice

Just sent you the email 😀

@dekreel

Hey!

@seekjustice  I guess I’ll try the Google Doc then. 🙂

@dekreel

I don’t mind which you use 🙂 Feel free to go with whatever works best for you.

@seekjustice  Great, thanks.

By the way, sorry I haven’t been reading your book lately. I’ve just been unsure about which document I need to read from. (The one in the email or the Google doc.) Hopefully I’ll start up again soon…

Which do you think I should use, the Google doc or the email doc?

@dekreel

Currently it is just about 1pm. 🙂

@seekjustice  I’m doing fine.

May I ask what time is it in your region of Australia right now? Just so I know when you’re awake and asleep. If you don’t want to answer though, that’s fine.

@dekreel Hey! I’m doing all right. What about you?

You know you’re a writer when you pace back and forth in your room repeating your character’s name in different accents, trying to find a good accent for your world.

@seekjustice  @catwing  @valtmy  @rochellaine  @alia  @jenwriter17

Heyy, I will be world-building if not writing a bit. How are y’all doing?

@valtmy

Awesome, I look forward to hearing your thoughts. 🙂

@catwing  HAHA, I love it!! Well done! 😀 😀 😀