Janellebelovedpig

@keilah-h

Much better then the last one you showed us! This is really good! The guy and girl differences evened out really nicely! The expressions are also good.

@esther-c

So where do you draw the line on this one? Obviously there are some lines that should not be crossed before marriage, but could you possibly elaborate on this more?

Well, this is slightly tricky because I don’t date and don’t believe in dating at all. BUT, that is a side point. You’re characters are dating, so lets see. My standards…[Read more]

@theducktator

How’s your dad’s job search going?

@highscribeofaetherium

Ew, NOT fun. 😣 Praying!! <3

@highscribeofaetherium

<3 praying!

@esther-c

Livia

“It’s not just my motivation…” Liv searched his eyes, desperately wanting–needing him to understand. “I have seasonal depression,” she lowered her eyes. “I—I don’t like talking about it, and I hate putting a label on myself, but it’s true. It’s always been hard, but with Xandro gone,” she bit her lip, a sob building in her c…[Read more]

@whalekeeper
FREE HUGSSSS

Now would you like an Esther hug or a Lukas hug?? 🧐

@savannah_grace2009
Lukas

He wiped his sweaty palms on his hands as Livia tucked her phone back into her pocket. “Then let’s change that! I can help you catch up on everything so people don’t think you feel off the face of the planet.” He cracked a lopsided smile.

@esther-c

Livia

Liv sighed, letting him hold her for a few seconds.

“I’m sorry…I know I haven’t been the best friend,” she pulled out her phone and showed him all the unread and unanswered messages. “I haven’t had the motivation to do anything lately.”

@jannellebelovedpig

I’m doing Crazy Writing Week! Never done it before and I don’t know what to expect, but hey! there’s a first time for everything.

@savannah_grace2009

Lukas 

“No.”

Lukas ran his tongue over his lips. At least he got a clear answer. He had heard from his brothers before that girls would say they were fine when they actually weren’t. If Livia hadn’t answered that way, then that must mean she really wasn’t okay.

“Why?”

By Liv’s expression, that was definitely not t…[Read more]

@koshka

1: love triangles. I find them incredibly unrealistic and often ridiculous.

😭

jk jk. XD I personally don’t mind them if they’re done right. 😉

2: no communication. The entire plot should not be able to be resolved with a 5 minute conversation. Like seriously. This may be a problem in real life, but do I want to real a full 300+ pages abo…

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@koshka   @whalekeeper

Aannnddd I’m left in the dust. What is it with you night owls?

oh boy, you mention “doctor” and Rory’ll flip out bad.

You don’t want to see that.

Rory

When Barnes actually took off her mask, Rory started in surprise a little. He had been preparing to surprise her and somehow get it off. He needed to see the face b…[Read more]

@esther-c

I agree with @koshka and @elishavet-pidyon

I would also add,

1. A lot of physical contact before marriage

2. Only being able to have a relationship when alone. I prefer that one of the first times this couple is alone is when he asks her to marry him. Show them getting to know each others families, hanging out at church, spending…[Read more]

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Have any of you seen The Man Who Invented Christmas? It’s the story of how Charles Dickens wr…[Read more]

@liberty

Yes, and the weird thing is I got two emails at once both saying the same thing. It’s like my last registration actually went through….. I hope being signed up two times isn’t a problem.

@esther-c

Livia

“Livia, are you okay?”

She blinked hard, still refusing to make eye contact.

She formed the moisture into the form of a horse, letting it gallop around on her palm.

She missed Xandro. 

She let the water fall off her hand and into the churning waters below.

Finally, she let out a shuddering sigh, and turned to face…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ohhhh yeah I understand!!!

Still, I change my book so many times that I’m used to it lollll

YAYYYYYYYYY I’m so excited!!!!!!

@savannah_grace2009

Hehe, thanks 😁😊

Lukas

Lukas watched as Livia played with water between her hands. He was captivated for only a moment before his eyes roved to her face. A listless, wandering look swam behind those bright blue pools.

Lukas knew it would be be easy for her with Xandro not being there–although that was good news for him. He…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, thanks!! 🥰

Sometimes it is for me, but in this book’s particular case, it needs some bigger edits (not like a whole revamp), and I didn’t feel like digging through that. XD

Yeah totally!! I’m hoping to create a topic for it soon! (Which reminds me…you posted something new on your WIP topic that I need to read!!)