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@keilah-h @loopylin @koshka

Rory

Rory jumped and spun, aiming a blow at Hunter with his fist. He pulled up just in time and froze. “Hey Hunter.” He quickly opened his fist and made a waving motion with his hand. “Hi Hunter. Hello Hunter. Hey Hunter… Hi.” Rory shoved his hands in his pockets. He could feel his ears burning and he really,…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Sometimes, just describing other things they’re doing with their body language is helpful. For example, observing a conversation between my sisters that’s going on right now, I can see a lot of things they’re doing that don’t involve looking at one another:

• Blowing bubbles with gum
• Toying with the carpet
• Cupping their…

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@linus-smallprint

Hmm, I like it!

Let’s see. How about nothing to do with the characters. Mention what’s going on around them. Someone shouted something, pans clattered, wind picked up, a bird chirped, children giggled. Etc. That might help.

@linus-smallprint

Okay, now I’m starting to believe that sign.

@linus-smallprint

I literally saw this on my way home from work. I could not restrain myself. Sorry Linus.

@linus-smallprint

Yay! The tag worked!

I am curious what this hat looks like. Is this one of those flat hats, with a brim that goes over the eyes?

I’m not sure. This is what it looks like:

Is this the first time you have left Aaron’s perspective?

Yessssss………. but I was thinking about doing it in the next section and wanted to do it m…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Haha!!! I have No idea what you are talking about. It’s not like I’m driving and my dad says, “Turn left” so I hold up my hands just to make sure which way is left………………..

@theducktator

YES!! You are not the only one!

@theducktator

Thank you!!

@keilah-h

They are literally standing outside the elevator.

@keilah-h

Well that’s a relief! lol.

@highscribeofaetherium

I’m finally here!! Sorry it took me so long to get back to you! 😭

Clayton (i normally don’t write from his pov, but I really want to so we’re going for it XD)

Voices drifted from the door in front of us. I shot Audrey a look that asked if we should open the door. She shook her head, motioning down the hall. I pleade…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint @keilah-h

The next morning, Aaron was so sore he could hardly walk. He staggered downstairs and found Alicia in the kitchen, fixing breakfast. Sabina was upstairs getting the little children dressed. Alicia looked up when Aaron entered. “Good morning, Aaron.” She nodded toward the table. “Sabina left that for you.”

Aaron walked…

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@rae @freed_and_redeemed

I may be wrong, but to me Steve seems like a good old Oatmeal Raisin type guy.

@linus-smallprint

Sure thing!