Janellebelovedpig

@freedomwriter76

Okay! Thanks for letting me know!😊

@loopylin

Ooooh, that intrigues me. XD My characters aren’t ones to choose to do something like that but I kinda want them to turn on their mischievous side… you might have to convince them though…

What charries do you have in here? Are they at the lunchroom rn?

@freedomwriter76

Ahhhh those boards are SO good!!! The boys are so big 😭

And CONGRATS on your book!!! Keep it upppp!

@smiley @freedom

I’ve been somewhat stalking your pietro convo and love the pfps😉

@keilah-h

Thanks! 😀

@trailblazer @light-warrior-pen @hybridlore @freedomwriter76

Here it is!

Before I could think any further, I collapsed on a bed, and fell asleep. I had a dream, one that filled me with pure happiness. It was the story of how my parents met. The story was told many times and each time, mom could not ever stop laughing and dad still felt a little…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @everyone-else

Wow. So I’ve actually been thinking about this a lot lately. (And have even considered writing an article for KP about it. XD) And my opinion is, there is no “right” way to do it. But there are multiple things that will work.

First off, you could just have a Christian MC or side character who’s faith is very evident…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Good job! That’s so exciting!!

@smiley

I’m not sure maybe anything between 3 and 4? When I finish writing I will definitely fix it up though 🙂

@highscribeofaetherium @esther-c

Thank you!

@thearcaneaxiom @whalekeeper

Okay thanks Whaley! And yes number 1 is Rishona.

@acancello

Aww, those look awesome!!

@thearcaneaxiom

Right, she represents Eve, but is she literally Eve? Is Earth here the same Earth we know, and therefore the story of Adam and Eve is really just a translation of Rishona’s story?

Well I think that Rishona is literally Eve in my story, and Earth is the same earth we know but I think what I was going for is that there’s no Adam a…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

“What is magick?” She tested out the foreign world, mulling it over in her mind.

“Ahh, yes, I suppose you wouldn’t know,” he said airily. Rishona bristled at his mocking tone. Her stomach clenched, and she ground her teeth as her jaw hardened defiantly. What was this emotion, she wondered. She had never felt this way before. N…

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@trailblazer

I will! (Once I write it, lol!) I have the perfect idea in my mind so I will work on that once I finish this chapter in my WIP. 😀

@highscribeofaetherium

I looooooovvveeee your new pfp!!!!!💗 💗 😍 👍 💗

@light-warrior-pen

Thank you! I also played it in my mind as I was writing and was very proud of how real/funny it sounded!😂

And the most sweetest twins in the world! They are just soooooooo adorable! 💗 😍

@esther-c @whalekeeper@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @hybridlore

Now since pics are working, here are some of my new boards!

This is Vikii, my sweet girl! I still cant stop feeling bad about all she will be going through in my WIP😭

@thearcaneaxiom

Yes, Rishona does represent Eve in the prologue.  And I do agree that I use flowery language excessively. I love your ideas, because you have helped me realize things about myself I never have before!

And about the paragraph you wrote….

“Ahh, yes, I suppose you wouldn’t know,” he said airily. The dismissive comment trigge…

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@overcomer

I think the second one,

“But I am neither bird nor wife and my dreams

Are shining, a full moon tonight:”

Has a better flow to it  🙂

@thearcaneaxiom : I’m sorry I made that look so confusing!

thanks @jonas for helping me!

@jonas sorry got your tag wrong

how did i forget that??? sorry i’m tired

IT WORKED!!!