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@keilah-h

Oh yeah!

I’m assuming you’ve read Saturday’s section and today’s?

@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION!!

The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
December 10th
The Empire

To Johannes, Heinrich, and the brothers at the University,

Greetings in the name of our Lord, Jesus Christ

Such wonderful news! Prince Dietrich, son of Emperor Haid…

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@liberty

Really?!?! You called it?

Oooh!!! He’s about to become the Josiah.

Maybe so!

So, is he your new favorite? I was pretty sure he would be.

@liberty

I know! It took Leon getting captured to sober him up a bit I guess.

@whalekeeper @theducktator

Praying!! <33

@hybridlore

Haha! You typed it a lot during TVON

@hybridlore

Yay!! I’m glad I caught you by surprise at least. 😂

It took about a month honestly. I learned web design so I could do it. I was motivated.

@hybridlore

I liked the Wilhelm-actually-Prince-Deitrich twist.

Did you see it coming?!?!

Linus will say he did. 100% 😂

Pretty cool that he’s now a Christian… but it’s going to be very dangerous.

Ya don’t say?……………

😂

Aw thank you!!!! I’m so glad! What do you think??!

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NEXT SECTION!!

The next Sabbath, Hans did not return, but Julian was pleased to see Marius slip in and sit down. With him was a young man who appeared to be in his mid to late teens. Marius leaned over and whispered something to his companion who nodded. Ju…

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@liberty

Something I haven’t mentioned. I’m doing it between any possible sequel to CR.

@liberty

I have a book I’m about to start writing once I wrap up CR, and I think you’re gonna go head over heals for the MC. Or the MC’s best friend. One of the two. It’s going to be a you sort of book. 😂

@linus-smallprint

I don’t know. It didn’t really stand out to me, but then from your notes I knew it was going to happen.

Whaley did make a strong point.

I think you could go either way.

Honestly, maybe a mix is best.

Either your original way with a little more listening, or Whaley’s way with a little more anger.

@linus-smallprint

What do you all think? Is Tyn’s reaction in Chapter the 1st in line with her character? Or do you think she would take a more considerate approach like Whaley is suggesting?

Hmm. It’s a hard question. I’ll have to give it more thought–I found that her reaction didn’t quite suit her, but I can’t really pinpoint why. It might be a…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

yeah, the girl slaves were in the house.

Okay…. maybe. That’s a big gap between the twins tho. I may change it. I have a new character in his 20s coming in.

@rae

I’m a little swamped, but tag me and I’ll try to join at some point. 😊

@rae

I like it! I think the part in the field is the only thing I would fix honestly. But that’s your choice.

Like I said, it’s a delayed hit.

I’ll probably cry tonight. 😂

@koshka

Imperial soldiers are young.

I only have two other teens.

@liberty

Liberty…..

you are insufferable.

😂

NOTHING about Marius and the prince?

 

Oh, and…Dietrich sounds like a very interesting character. I hope you don’t kill him since I like him.

CALLED IT!!

As I was editing I was like….. this is going to be her favorite character!

@koshka

Uh, 21 is still between 16-30

@linus-smallprint

Also, as for them majority being males, I grew up in a household of boys, and my sister came along when I was already in my teens. Sooo…. boys have always been easy for me to write because I can watch them. I find girls harder because I don’t really live with older girls.