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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings
I’m a little late, but here…
With a stunning light, I am somewhere else. Where, I don’t know, but I know it is far, far away from the place I knew. Yellowed grass spreads out in a wide circle around the tree I’m in, and from there it gets greener until there are hills, and trees beyond them.…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
That’s what I figured. 🙂 It should be a very interesting castle XD
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
That reminds me. How many characters are we doing? Does it matter? I probably will just do one, but just checking.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Super original, but maybe they want to be the BEST VILLAINS EVER, or something like that. Idk. 🤣
Hmmmmmmmmm…. Or MAYBE they have to work together to stay alive, because the castle is filled with weird monsters or something. I don’t know how this works so just throwing things out there.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@esther-c @awsumfaith @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @light-warrior-pen
Whenever we start, I’m gonna let one of y’all start us off, because my villain writing… Idk how to describe it other than, “meh.” 😅🤣🤣
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
If it’s like any other character castle I’ve seen, the characters are stuck in a castle, but I suppose they could try to take over the castle… 🤔
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I would totally be willing! I know the general idea of a character castle, but haven’t actually done it before. But I do have some villains kind of waiting to be used, so yes, this is a great idea.
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 6 months ago
Ooh! Okay that’s good! Hmm….yeah tell me XD I’ll be on the spoiler forum!
Alright! I need to skedaddle at the moment, but I’ll get to it today or tomorrow. 😁
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Esther replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 3 years, 6 months ago
Yw!!
Yay! Ok, I can’t talk about them now, but I’ll get to them probably tomorrow. (Or at least some of them. XD)
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Esther started the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @euodia-vision @lightoverdarkness6 @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h @awsumfaith @light-warrior-pen @joy-calle @acancello @felicity @kyronthearcanin @anyone-I-missed
Ok, ok, ok…
I have an idea.
So, I know we already have multiple RPs, but what if we did another character castle…
This time we don’t add in any good…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@everyone
Ahh!! I’m gonna have to hop on here at some point and continue! I like totally forgot about this. XD Maybe we don’t have to stick with the schedule, idk.
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 6 months ago
It’s all good! 🙂
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Esther replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 3 years, 6 months ago
Ember sounds so awesome!!
@the-rest-of-y’all
Do you guys wanna hear about my MCs families?? 😏 (It’s nine other charries, btw… 😅😂)
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 6 months ago
Oof…yeah, I feel you…WAIT who are you planning on killing off?! I must know!! (It better not be Lukas, the baby is too precious…and I know you won’t kill off Ev or Ami…)
Yeah… um…
I can promise that it will not be Lukas. I think he’s going to be in a sequel with Skylar and Fynn, so neither will they die. And I would definitely[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 6 months ago
I LOVE THIS SO MUCHHHHHH AHHHHHHHHH!!!! It’s so good!!!!!!!!!! I almost cried! (That’s saying something, cause i like NEVER cry for books and/or movies) You did so gooooood!
Woo-hoo!!! 😆
(Same here, girl. XD)
Thanks so much!!! ☺️
i hate to give a critique on it, but you asked for some. My only thing is i would have showed a lit…
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 6 months ago
Yay!! So glad you love it too!!! 😆
Sorry to make you cry, but I’m so glad that my writing can be that powerful! 🥲😄
Everything is so smooth, like the way she wrote the poem, I was so impressed at the way you wrote that, it’s perfect!!!!
Thanks so much!! 😊
And when he found her on the beach I was just 😭😭😭
I know!! 😭
The way she…
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 6 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 6 months ago
Right???
I’ve done one on Wingfeather Saga. The others… Hmm. I had a fanfic on Percy Jackson before, basically just to change a bunch of things I didn’t like XD. I’ve done Wings of Fire and Berinfell Prophecies as well, but I don’t remember the rest. 😅 It’s been a while.
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Esther replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 6 months ago
Fanfics are hard. 😅 Like, this may be the only one I ever do. XD It was easier because I got to create my own characters, instead of trying to write the author’s characters accurately. What are your fanfics of?
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My Love Has Gone Across the Sea (WFS fan fic) in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 6 months ago
You’re SO welcome! I’ve tried fanfics before, but they haven’t been great. 😅🤣
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