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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Critiques On My Fantasy World? in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 6 months ago
I love it!!! 😃
The only thing I would suggest is with your rivers at the bottom of the map, or maybe just one, Grange, if I’m reading that right. Usually (unless this is unique to your world) no river goes from one ocean to another. That would make two continents, or a continent and an island. So because of that it seems that you…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic BETRAYALS, PLOT TWISTS AND AHA MOMENTS, OH MY!! in the forum Plotting 3 years, 6 months ago
Ok, good. 😅 😊
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Ok! I’m ok with skipping a few days after the boarding announcement is made. After the situation with Ev is resolved and everyone else is ready to move on, of course. 😉 🙂
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
OH, wait! Steve is an artist too!!!! And also, Ami having a crush on Clint is just so cute XD🥰💕
Oh, that’s awesome!!
Ahh!!! I know, I love it!! 😆🥰
“Letters don’t belong here…” he muttered, “they’re supposed to be in English class, not Math.”
I agree Steve. 😂 I say that all the time. XD
(hey, you think this group could run into…
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Esther replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@loopylin, you can go next if you want. 🙂
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Esther replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
🤯
Any questions?
(I wouldn’t know what to ask. 😂)
How would you feel if you found out that you lived on a donut?
(Hm… 🤔 Then I’d ask):
Is the donut edible??
🤣
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Kathleen replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 6 months ago
Your friends might be on to something. The words choices and flow of the poem has such an enthralling, I don’t know… texture to it?
Something about the poem feels so alive and playful. I really like it. Especially the last three lines. They are perfection.
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Kathleen replied to the topic Critiques On My Fantasy World? in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 6 months ago
Yo, this looks really cool! I have much respect to writers who create maps for their worlds, as its something I still aspire to do, haha.
If I had any suggestions it would to maybe make the names of each of the places on the map unique to your own world, history, and cultures.
Names like “Greenwood” and “Snowy Mountains” could be…[Read more]
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Elanor replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 6 months ago
Here’s one of my more recent ones:
Brown Eyes
March 20th,2023
I was chatting with some girlfriends on GR and one was saying how a guy had beautiful blue eyes and I commented that I always found brown eyes soo intriguing and then went on to say something along these lines and they giggled telling me I should write romance novels. 🤣
Brown ey…
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Elanor replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 6 months ago
Those are beautiful!
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Elanor replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 3 years, 6 months ago
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Starshiness replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 years, 6 months ago

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Starshiness replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 years, 6 months ago
*gasp* a whole forum just for writing memes?! This is amazing 😍 I literally have a Pinterest board with nearly 100 memes, plenty of ammo here XD
*apologies for if I happen to post something that has already been posted by someone else within the thirteen pages of this forum I do not have the time to read in entirety XD*
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Starshiness replied to the topic The story game…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@esther-c Yesssss and I second the motion!! Piper and Griffin. Griffin and Piper. They sound good together 👌🏽
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Starshiness replied to the topic savvy? in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
@she-is-a-pirate Ahoy there matey! Aaaand that’s as far as my pirate lingo goes but EEEE MORE PIRATE STORY WRITERS?!?!! This is amazing, I hope you’ll share snippets with us 😉
Anyhoo, hi and welcome to KP! I’m Starshiness! Why does that suddenly feel like such a mouthful for one word?! Maybe I should start going by Star around here… we’ll see.…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @awsumfaith @anyone
Not gonna lie I have no idea how those tags didn’t work last time. 😕
Here’s the next bit of the Dragonsbane Society:
Tali pressed a rough cloth to her temple, where Brycen had hit her. The gash had mostly stopped bleeding by now, but it still stung. Atticus paced the tent, and…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Yeah, for Eclipse, he’s sort of an antihero, so… I don’t have as much of that problem. I do, however, have a villain that really gets on my nerves, and so I figured writing about him in a castle would end up kind of crazy. 😅🤣
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Yeah my first character castle-ish thing is with a villain, so I’m figuring that out.
Idk how you guys are writing yourselves into it, too. I can’t write about myself very well, which is weird, cause I know what I would do for most things… idk. 😅
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Thanks!!! 🙂
Heh, no… I used to call her Kyrah, and accidentally still spell it that way sometimes instead of what I call her now, Kirah. So anytime that happens is unintentional. 😅 I found just recently that in the Crescent patrol there was another girl, Kira, so I don’t know what I was thinking there…
Fun fact, Kirah’s…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Trapped in the Library of the Kingdom of Pen — (Official) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@everyone
I just had an awesome time reading through this whole thing… I got bored. 😅
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