Janellebelovedpig

@euodia-vision @esther-c @karissa-chmil @felicity @sarahsmile @janellebelovedpig @elanor  @

Another great book to read! I don’t remember if I posted it before, but has anyone here read Wonder by R.J Palacio ?(Not sure if I spelled her last name right ) Did anyone like it? Did anyone cry (I might have just a little 🙂  ) Let me know! Also please t…[Read more]

@esther-c

Yes, the parents did do a theme I was going to have there names also start with “S” but I think that would be to much, and I have not really created them yet, so its ok if I change there names 🙂

Thanks!

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

I’m going to RP for Ev and Ami this afternoon. 🙂

(I’m not sure what happened to Ev and Tony after they left Clint and Ami. XD)

@whalekeeper

Oh yeah, I gotcha. 😉

(I should probably take some time to do some good studying this week. Final exams are next week. 😬)

@acancello

Hmm…

Well, this is something that you’ve gotta be careful with. You could say that alliterative names is what their parents wanted, because I know some parents have a “theme”, if you will, for all their children’s names. (For example, me and my siblings all have Bible names [and so do my parents 😁])

So it all depends on what thei…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

First of all, great scene!! 😄

Second…

I love that idea about Corvina’s mother!! It would be really cool!!!

@starshiness @esther-c

OK thanks! I have 2 other characters who are her brothers and there names are “Samuel Smith and Scott Smith” I haven’t picked out there middle names yet. Do you think that would make it sound unrealistic?

@princesachronicle22 @smiley @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h

Riya

Riya quickly looked away when one of the boys glanced up and noticed the two girls awkwardly searching for somewhere to sit.

“Hey, there’s a few seats over here!!!” He shouted, motioning towards the empty chairs. Riya sucked in an uneasy breath, hesitating to accept the boy’s offer.<…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Awwwww November!!! 😭 Poor boi.

Great scene Godly!

@godlyfantasy12

Oh, I love that scene!!! It’s so good! I just love November XD

The Silvening thing is really cool, too! 🙂

@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @landric @gwyndalf-the-wise

Alrighty, here’s Chapter 6! I’m not completely sure about this one… It feels right, and gets a lot of world/character building in I guess, but I’ve been told the stakes just aren’t completely there. So we’ll see XD

Chapter 6

Back on the ship, I introduce Arew to Sorren. He seems…[Read more]

@starshiness

Hmmmmmm…. good question. A princess prbly wouldn’t have anything to do with looks, but the elf thing could be because her ears were hidden… Or maybe she could be like a shapeshifter, like how certain people could change into wolves or something… I don’t know XD

@acancello Hmmm I would think that people say not to use it because perhaps if you have multiple characters with alliterated names, it would give the story a very fairytale-ish or imaginary world kind of feel and would be “unrealistic” if you know what I mean.

I agree with Esther tho, I think one name is fine and I like the sound of Sarah Shauna…[Read more]

The only thing I really didn’t do much with was the different tenses heh… the first half seemed to follow present tense but then we apparently switched to past after that? Oh well 😅

Continuing…

“Um, not intentionally… he sorta followed me here.” Piper shot Griffin a peeved look that indicated she hadn’t forgotten the offense.

 

The…

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@acancello Oh great, np!

@acancello

Great question!!

But the answer solely depends on you and what you want for your story. I feel like the name Shauna Sarah Smith would stick in my mind if I read your story. It’s easy to remember, and it may be something that defines your character. If you decide to keep it, make sure you don’t use alliteration for any other cha…[Read more]

@starshiness

Thanks for doing that 🙂 Now it looks a lot better!