Janellebelovedpig

@esther-c

Do you really want to know?

@esther-c

I’m glad some of what I said was helpful! I’m excited to see what you end up doing in your story.

@esther-c

😂😂🤣

@savannah_grace2009

Lol! Ok, awesome, I love it!! 😂

@esther-c

Okay, end of February it is!!!! XDXD

@savannah_grace2009

It doesn’t have to be anything special, tbh. If you just said, “Hey can you get it fully read by the end of February” or something like that, then that would work great. Otherwise, I might just forget or keep putting it off. 😳😂

@ellette-giselle

Wolfy dies, doesn’t he…??? 🫣 Or does he not?? I must knowwwww 😩

@koshka

Ah, okay, I get what you’re saying. I’m definitely going to be considering that getting into some major plot points coming up in my book. 😉 Thanks!

@theducktator (excuse my tardy reply🫣🤭)

Aww, that’s a bummer. 🙁 Yeah, the time off can be nice though. 😉 Still praying for y’all!! <33

@ellette-giselle

Thanks so much for taking the time to reply! I really appreciate your point of view on this. I can’t say I agree with everything 100%, but I definitely understand and support your viewpoint. It gave me a lot to think about!

In fact, piggybacking off of your conversation with Whaley, I can totally understand your way of t…[Read more]

@liberty @jonas @highscribeofatherium @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle

Thanks everyone!!!

You guys can use the link on my profile to read it, and then post any comments here, if that works?

@esther-c

What’s a reasonable deadline? There’s 19 chapters as of now, with more to come lol

It depends on how fast you can read XDXD

@theducktator

NO. MATURE. RELATIONSHIPS. BETWEEN. CHILDREN. I have read about 2 books ever that had elementry/middle school relationships well written. I don’t care if in real life 12 year olds date. I don’t want to read about it.

TELL ME ABOUT IT. It’s insane how often you’ll find those in books and it’s really just ridiculous. 🥱…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ahhh that’s so funny lol

Livia

“Thanks,” she exhaled hard. “Sorry, I didn’t mean to dump all this on you. But yeah, that’s why I’ve been acting weird.”

@savannah_grace2009 (Almost tagged you @Livia XD)

Lukas

Lukas chewed on his lips for a moment, resting his elbows on the bridge railing. The river gurgled by, providing fresh water for the fountain in the middle of the courtyard. He tried to get the words flowing as fast as this river, but nothing was coming to him. Whenever Lukas was…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

If you gave me a deadline, I’d be totally down for it! Sometimes I’m busy with school and whatnot, but if I have a deadline, I’ll be sure to get to it and give you some feedback!

@savannah_grace2009

I’d be willing to help for sure! I may not have a tone of time, but I’ll do what I can!

Okay, guys…I’m just going to start tagging everyone I can think of lol

Would anyone be interested in reading through/critiquing/giving suggestions on my WIP?

I love writing, but it’s hard to write when I’m not sure if people would even be interested in reading it or if it’s actually trash lollll

Not that I care what people think, but it…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thanks!!!

Aubrielle’s her older sister.

@rae

Amazing scene! And I agree with Whaley. Not too repetitive, but maybe substitute a few of those “Fathers” with something like, “The man” or something. Not too much of that either, but just enough to brake up the monotony of “Father”

Aw :/ so sad *cries*