Janellebelovedpig

@anyone-who-is-interested

Chapter 1

Strong hands grabbed at her shoulders, trying to rip her away.

But Sef wouldn’t let go.

Eyes scrunched shut, tears leaking from the corners, she clung to her father like he was the only thing keeping her life together.

In a way, he was.

And now he was leaving.

“Let go, Sef,” her mother said stern…

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@linus-smallprint

Looks like this section is a hit!

I mostly use ESV, but sometimes I’ll use another version if I find it translates the Hebrew/Greek better for the particular verse/passage.

I’m glad you like that scene. It’s one of my fav.

Spring Fever is a real thing. Especially among the teenage guys at our church.

lol.

@linus-smallprint

I don’t know. I see that stuff really fast, but it might just be me. Do you want it to come as a shock?

By the way, do you have any guesses for why Alan was able to defeat his attackers so easily while Stripe was easily beaten?

Two.

One, capturing Alan’s father is a decoy because for some reason the king wants Alan to…[Read more]

@rae   @raxforge   @loopylin   @hybridlore   @jonas   @grcr    @whalekeeper

Leon and Julian — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)

Leon’s expression clouded with worry as Marcel gestured to his ears. He can’t hear!

Marcel’s next words confirmed the suspicion. “Can’t hear. Are they close?”

Leon shook his head and gave Marcel the Imperial Military “a…[Read more]

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Leon and Julian— Elderstrand (wsome of Group 1)

Leon watched as the girl raced off, followed by Ben, Flare, and Brutus. Or, was it Baron. Leon’s brows drew together. Something wasn’t right about him. whatever the case, Leon was secretly glad he was gone. though part…[Read more]

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NEXT SECTION

Stephen and David continued to grow, and Joseph found himself looking up to them in many ways. Mr. Caddick was always a source of wisdom, and Joseph found himself coming to him often. It seemed so strange to Joseph that they all looked up to him,…

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@linus-smallprint

btw, thanks for the “guy-talk” scene. 😉

@liberty

Oh my goodness.

You’ve ruined me, girl!

oh I couldn’t breathe! I’m crying right now. Oh man, that was such a good, good story! I love the tragedy of it!

Tell your brother he did an amazing job!

@theducktator

I agree with what hybrid and highscribe said. Definitely consider the length and genre of your book first. If your novel is only going to be 60-70k, I would definitely hesitate adding more POV characters cuz then they each only get 10-15k each and that’s really not a lot in the big scheme of things.

Also consider if each c…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Oh, whoops. I forgot I got hit by a snowball.

Just a sec.

Liam didn’t seem to agree, but he let the matter go.

They were silent a moment. Then, Liam started coughing. It was a small cough at first, but it grew harsher and stronger. “Easy, easy,” Werner said, carefully helping Liam to sit up. He whipped out his handk…

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@the_lost-journal

Thanks so much for coming up with this! It looks like a fun idea.

I may not be able to participate, we’ll have to see. I have a lot going on right now. 😉

@grcr

Oh no, my prayers will definitely be with you and your family. 🙏🏻 Sending virtual hugs your way! 🫂💕

“fear not, for I am with you; be not dismayed, for I am your God; I will strengthen you, I will help you, I will uphold you with my righteous right hand.”
‭‭Isaiah‬ ‭41‬:‭10‬ ‭

“I sought the Lord, and he answered me and delivered me from…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

To say I didn’t know the minute Alan’s father made the plan would be lying.

I knew he was going to get caught.

I really liked this chapter! I like it a whole lot!

Poor Stripe, I feel bad for him. Perfume is awful!! Especially ON YOUR NOSE!

Okay, the similarities thing

The only thing that stood out to me as being…[Read more]

@hybridlore

So fun to work with!

@linus-smallprint

I know! Sabina is gonna get herself killed.

But, she’s like that. I mean, remember how spunky she was when she was being a total snark to Aaron and Turin. She hasn’t lost all of that.

still, it scares me when she does stuff like that!

@theducktator

I try to never have more then 1 MC for a given setting.

So, my last book only had one, but his brother and wife were very heavily leaning toward MC state, and Cora even got her own POV at one point. However, Ethan was the one the book followed the closest.

The one I’m writing currently has three MC in three different locations,…[Read more]

@liberty     @freed_and_redeemed

Next board!!!! A favorite of mine!!!

@freed_and_redeemed

OH MY GOODNESS!

I. Could. Not. Breathe!

WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO MY BOYS!!!!!!!

I’m about to call the protection squad on you.

Except, I LOVE IT. So I’m not. Instead, I’m going to high five you, because this is going to be so good and I can’t wait to read it!!!!!

YOU ARE HORRIBLE!

Stop teasing…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

IT”S IN HARDCOVER!!!!!!?????? Why wasn’t in hardcover before!??! *sobs*

Man, I’m heavily debating buying a second copy just to have the hardcover too!

@liberty

Woah, sounds like Ellette’s book!

I know!!!! 😱

This is why I’ve been hiding it ever since I found out Freedom was doing ww2 on KP.

Then, after reading her b…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I know!! It’s so perfect for her!!

@freed_and_redeemed

you’re gonna make me cry!! I’m so happy you found out about this WIP!

@liberty

yes!! A girl after my own heart! lol. I am German, so this is really close to me.

oh my goodness!! That is one of my dreams!! I want to track ww2 across Europe!!!

YES!! I’m just waiting for it to come out!!!

Freed-and-redeemed, are you watch…[Read more]