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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 hours, 8 minutes ago
Forgot to tag you in my RP above
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 hours, 44 minutes ago
Leon and Julian—with Baron, Ben Gunn, Flare, and Marcellus, Everstrand edge
Leon stared at the scar, and he felt a tightness in his throat. He knew the kind of men responsible for something like this. In fact, that was why he was here. He glanced over at his friend. Julian’s face had paled, and he was clenching and u…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 hours, 28 minutes ago
Ha, you’re good! I keep missing you too.
Yes, agreed. That line was actually one of my MCs main struggles in the last book. Though he didn’t realize that until someone pointed it out to him.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 hours, 29 minutes ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 hours, 32 minutes ago
Yeah, well “so far” is the key term, my girl.
We’ll see.
Either way, God wants us to share Him with others. Ultimately, He knows who is going to accept that gift or not, but that doesn’t change the way we should approach it, right?
I don’t think it should, but I’ve seen some people go at it like They are the ones s…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 hours, 48 minutes ago
*cough cough*
I knew that.
*wince*
Sorry i forgot! Okay, so I have an older age range. Good.
I would definitely like some advice (maybe later on) in how to classify these books. I was thinking YA, but that could include 13 or so year olds, and the violence level in these books might be to high for that. I mean, they are kinda dark…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 9 hours, 53 minutes ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 10 hours, 5 minutes ago
Kenna and Zeke’s kids!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 hours, 16 minutes ago
Glad to hear that!
I wouldn’t delete this, I need it for Joseph’s arc and to really set the whole stage. But, I’m glad you liked it enough for it to be a keeper weather I can trim it or not.
Btw, completely off topic, You’re 15? Right?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 hours, 28 minutes ago
Okay, that’s two against me.
Glad you like the map!!
I’ll take a look at that section and see what I can do by way of trimming a few things up………
what do you think, @linus-smallprint ?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 hours, 30 minutes ago
Yeah. I’ll see what @linus-smallprint and @keilah-h say, and from there I’ll make a decision once I have everyone’s opinion.
I think I could end up trimming things up a little if I need to.
Well, I know the belief in Divine Election is not held by everyone. Some people believe that anyone who chooses to be saved can be saved,…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 hours, 39 minutes ago
Oh, btw, neat deduction! Sounds a little Sherlock Homsy.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 hours, 40 minutes ago
Well, I would say now, except that @raxforge isn’t active at the moment so we can’t get his characters to move.
I guess give us a few in case he decides to make his way over here. Otherwise we might just have to abandon him.
No worries. It’s okay to call him Barron. I think i have his names down now.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 12 hours, 43 minutes ago
@hybridlore @keilah-h @linus-smallprint
For anyone interested, here is the current map.This is what everything looks like in this book.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 12 hours, 44 minutes ago
Lol, I was wondering when you would start wanting the backstory.
First I’ll reply to yoyr note on the scene.
You might want to consider trimming it down, but if you can’t, that’s fine. Just try to think about what will move the character growth forward and work for this story/target audience specifically.
So, it wasn’t sup…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 13 hours, 4 minutes ago
wow. How did you know GRCR was RPing?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 13 hours, 17 minutes ago
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Ellette Giselle posted an update 13 hours, 20 minutes ago
hello! I believe you’re a new member here! I haven’t seen any introduction forum from you, but I just thought I’d say hello!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 13 hours, 22 minutes ago
@hybridlore @keilah-h @linus-smallprint
Alrighty people! Have fun with this very long section! I hope you enjoy it.
Also, Linus, I am starting to have some high hopes for this book, despite what I said about it not being my favorite. I think i might enjoy it a lot. Just let me know if it’s starting to feel like a LTBL repeat. (If you would b…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 13 hours, 48 minutes ago
Leon and Julian—with Baron, Ben Gunn, Flare, and Marcellus, Everstrand edge (No kidding! It grows faster than a kitten!!)
“I wasn’t going to kill…Ben,” Baron mentioned in his quiet monotone.
Julian turned and cocked his head sideways, a grin pulling at the corner of his mouth. “You sure had me fooled.”
Le…[Read more]
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