Jane Maree

@valtmy

I’ll hunt down some books on that then, and set to work reading them while my beta readers finish off the document and I’ve already started doing some serious worldbuilding. I see that as my main things to tackle in the next draft 😀 Thanks for all your input!

@valtmy

I realise that 🙂 though things like the “Premier’s Bill” which Lang gets assassinated over, were things that really happened in Australia during the Depression (though no one was assassinated, as far as I know).

I definitely think that in order to do better worldbuilding for this story, I need to do some amount of study on economics and…[Read more]

@valtmy

The only thing I would say in rebuttal to what you’ve said in your comments though, is that I had quite heavily based the world on the world of the Great Depression. That’s part of the reason there’s such a divide between the rich and the poor and also in the technology. In the Great Depression, the people were living in a world that was…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Bye!

@seekjustice @valtmy

Sorry but I will have to leave now. Bye!

@jenwriter17 The hardest thing about this one is trying to bring it all together into something that effectively caps off the last two books.

@valtmy Most of it makes sense and a lot of it was said by another beta reader last week. Most of the main critiques have to do with my worldbuilding especially, which I know is pretty subpar.

@valtmy Yup! *bows*

@seekjustice That’s good; one of the things I struggle with most is creating an interesting plot that actually makes sense.

@jenwriter17

Its coming along slowly, but at least I have something that resembles a plot now.

@seekjustice Hello to you as well. 😉 How the third infinity book coming?

@jenwriter17 @valtmy

I’m still here, reading over Valtmy’s comments 🙂

@valtmy I’m on! Hi 😀

@seekjustice @valtmy @dekreel Who’s still on? I think I’ll be on reading Seekjustice’s book a while, but I may have to leave any minute. How is everyone?

@dekreel 🙂

@valtmy Got it. Thanks so much!

@seekjustice  I guess I’ll try the Google Doc then. 🙂

@dekreel

I don’t mind which you use 🙂 Feel free to go with whatever works best for you.

@seekjustice  Great, thanks.

By the way, sorry I haven’t been reading your book lately. I’ve just been unsure about which document I need to read from. (The one in the email or the Google doc.) Hopefully I’ll start up again soon…

Which do you think I should use, the Google doc or the email doc?

@dekreel

Currently it is just about 1pm. 🙂

@seekjustice  I’m doing fine.

May I ask what time is it in your region of Australia right now? Just so I know when you’re awake and asleep. If you don’t want to answer though, that’s fine.

@dekreel Hey! I’m doing all right. What about you?