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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
In my opinion, most of the musical is awkward attempts to stick passages straight from the book to music.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Were the white carnations for any particular reason? Or did he just like them?
That wasn’t particularly smart of them. I mean, if you stopped singing and actually did something you wouldn’t be in this here fix.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Haha, no not really. I don’t really think Jane Eyre is a prime musical example.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Exactly right. It would be hugely annoying 😛
I feel there are extremely few guys who like flowers as much as Quillon does 🙂 in fact, when it comes to flowers guys are even more unimaginative than in their proposals. Red roses are the only thing they understand.
I actually think you would have more luck vowing vengeance on someone…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Then again, my slightly more sentimental side likes the idea of the flower language that Sapphire and Quillon use. But it would still be simple. I’m sure there’s a flower that means “marry me”.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Awww 😛
I wouldn’t like a particularly weird one like those examples because I would probably see through it right away and then just get annoyed. I would like the guy just to be frank and practical. “Would you marry me?” would be sufficient. Of course, all this would be done without pleading or tears or any of the other sappy…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
I just looked up unique ways to propose to someone and some of them were absolutely hilarious.
One of them was to play a trivia game and then casually ask Will you marry me? As one of the trivia questions. Or to get a specially printed jigsaw puzzle and ask the intended to put it together.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Ah yes, I do. As I said, I don’t know if I will use it, but I shame-facedly admit that I do have it planned.
I think mine is slightly more unconventional 😛 but I don’t want to tell you about it because it would give away most of the ending.
I think Victoria found it a bit forward too 😀 Of course, you can’t just have random German…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Sorry I had to go do some housework so I had to wait till just now to read your rant, which was quote an enjoyable rant to read 🙂
Don’t worry, Justice wouldn’t propose on one knee. In fact, I do have a proposal scene planned out though I haven’t decided whether to use it or not. Its rather…unconventional.
As to the practice of…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
I would never hold anyone back from ranting on romance cliches, as long as I’m able to rant too. 😛
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SeekJustice replied to the topic *cries raspberry blood tears* in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
That’s amazing news! Hopefully we’ll see you around a bit more 🙂
(Sorry for the delay in reply. It’s those pesky time zones)
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SeekJustice replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
I can’t even imagine how hard that would be for you. I’m very close to my family and I don’t think I’d cope very well with spending two months away from them living with someone I’d never met. I will definitely be praying for you.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice *laughs* Thanks. Yep, Brant is my sassy problem child and I love him. *pats Brant’s head* *he glares at me* I must be off. Happy writing, guys!
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
“And stuff escalates from there” 😀 sounds like an example of my outlining 😛
It does sound pretty cool, especially a fairy named Brant and Rumplestiltskin.
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice I don’t mind! It’s about a girl named Katie, whose family are the guardians of a bridge to a magical island. But, magical creatures keep crossing the bridge, like they’re running from something. So, Katie’s father goes across the bridge to see what’s up and *dramatic pause* disappears. She and a grumpy fairy named Brant go to enlist…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
*bows* Â What’s your Red Riding Hood retelling about? If you don’t mind me asking.
I seem to be good at pairing characters up and getting them attracted to each other, however when it actually comes to helping them continue their relationship I have no idea. It doesn’t help that I’ve never been in a relationship…[Read more]
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@rochellaine Working on my WIP, a Little red Riding Hood retelling. What are you up to?
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NC Stokes replied to the topic Writers' Corner #19 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
*tips hat* Hello, Queen @seekjustice.
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