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Active 8 years ago- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Clouded Fury Alpha links in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 3 months ago
@skredder ooh, now you’re getting me excited! 😀
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 3 months ago
@rochellaine lol, your meme is very accurate! 😀
bad girl, @seekjustice, bad girl! Your readers are weeping oceans and you just say we “should have learnt by now”?!
😛
I’m on page 11 right now. Awesomeness so far 😉 I should finish it within the next hour, cuz I had a few other things to take care of (ahem, like my broken heart). 😉
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 3 months ago
@jenwriter17 @sleepwalkingmk Is not @seekjustice heartless? She has no words of sympathy or comfort for her weeping reader, but simply tells me I “should have learnt by now!”
(See above for explanation.)
Seekjustice: Okay, see you tonight! (If I’m not still heartbroken by then.)
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Clouded Fury Alpha links in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 3 months ago
@skredder Okay, will do! 🙂
My answers to your questions:
1) I really enjoy the family, so I would keep reading.
2) I think the first line was good because it establishes very soon the close relationship of the family and the lifestyle.
3) So far, I think the characters are consistent 🙂
4) Yup! 😀
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 3 months ago
@seekjustice You awful person, you! How could you not warn me, after I told you I had a rough day with ATOTC?! I had only gotten a few paragraphs into Justice’s POV when I started crying again! 🙁 Oh, Sapphire! Oh, Kendall! Oh, Waif! Oh, everyone!

😀 😀 It was great, as always! I can’t wait to read the next part.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@seekjustice Okay.
I’ve almost finished reading it and I’ve got to say that talking to someone through a low window is near the top of my list of “most romantic settings!” 😀 😀 😀 It happened several times between one of my favorite fictional couples: Patty and Bill, from Carolyn Wells’ Patty series. So you have totally made my day with the C…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@seekjustice Hello! I’m here. 🙂 I’m going to read your chapters then work on my western.
Did you get my message about A Tale of Two Cities?
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Clouded Fury Alpha links in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 3 months ago
@skredder I read it! I still love this family 🙂 …..
There were only a few little things I commented on. I saw you said that it was supposed to be in Casse’s POV, which I didn’t know; I thought you were doing omniscient POV. I would suggest more following Casse’s action and her thoughts to make it her POV.
I’m looking forward to the next part! 😀
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Snapper posted an update 8 years, 3 months ago
Hey guys! 😀 So seems like everyone’s taking a hiatus. 😛 I’m going to as well. Whatnot with NaNo, School, blogging and trying to get my book ready for publication, I need more time than I have. So I shall return, but for now, I’m on a vacation. I’ll still be posting on my blog and I’ll be on facebook too. 😀 Visit me!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 3 months ago
@seekjustice I just finished watching ATOTC 1958. I am weeping, comfort me! I am thankful it is the first two chapters of your novel you have given us, rather than the last, for I could never bear it.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Clouded Fury Alpha links in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 3 months ago
@skredder I’m ready for it any time you’re ready to give it 😉
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 3 months ago
@seekjustice Yay! I can’t wait to read it! I requested access 🙂
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Rochellaine replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@seekjustice This Friday? (Wednesday for me, right?) Okay, I’ll be praying for you!
@warrenluther04 That’s great! I prayed for you several times yesterday, and was very happy to read your message in my email. 🙂 Goodbye, see you soon!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Character Song Swap in the forum Music 8 years, 3 months ago
@leumeister You compose? That’s cool! My brother is a classical style composer. Well, if you’d like to send me those links I’ll listen to them, but I’ll warn you that they probably will not have a chance at changing my preferences. 🙂 Sorry. So if you, as the composer, don’t want to have a possibility of someone disliking them, you prob…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Private Messaging in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 3 months ago
@valtmy Usually people on here are really nice about it if you just let them know you only want a specific few people on the document. You might get a few random views of people reading it, but they won’t comment unless you want them to. People always ask me for permission before commenting on my documents, and I do the same for others. So if…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic KP Literature Character Search Corner in the forum Characters 8 years, 3 months ago
@dekreel Sorry, I thought you’d be able to see that I edited the document, since I added the Bobert section to the main character list, so I didn’t inform you of the fact. Yes, I can edit the document. I didn’t answer before because I’m not on KP on Sundays. 😉 So if you ever need me to edit after you, just let me know, as long as it’s not on Sunday.
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Joy replied to the topic Readers' Corner in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@skredder Ugh…
It was pretty good! Today, incredibly enough, was the first time in my entire life I have ever dyed eggs.
Except with the holiday, I’m NOT ready for Monday… 😛
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Joy replied to the topic Readers' Corner in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
@skredder I disappeared. But I suppose I can reappear again before disappearing for two months…
How was your Easter?
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Joy replied to the topic KP Literature Character Search Corner in the forum Characters 8 years, 3 months ago
@daughteroftheking *leans back and smirks with delight at the tap-dancing tiger* Most delightful thing ever.
Anyway, you’re welcome! 😉
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 3 months ago
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Aw, you too?! *sniffs* this is too much.
Well I hope you have a great hiatus! 🙂 We’ll have to have some celebratory part when you, Dekreel, and Warren return. 😉 when do you think you’ll be back?
Not you too! *sighs* When will you return? Can I still tag you?
@jenwriter17 @ariel-ashira Absolutely you can still tag me. 🙂 I just might not be able to respond all the time, but I love hearing from you all. <3
And I expect to return within a week or few. Certainly no longer than May 1.
@dragon-snapper Okay! 😀 At least you guys aren’t taking super long hiatuses 🙂
*waves good bye to another friend* Please return… You will be missed.
So long for now, Chosen Kid. :3