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Active 8 years ago- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice You still here?
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introvert_girl replied to the topic How should I continue this? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
General impressions: I really liked it, and find the premise/laws of fate to be very intriguing.
Some things I would expect or be interested in seeing moving forward:
– Juqing and Wanyu meeting
– The relationship between Wanyu and her father or Wanyu and her teacher/his family and the other students (how do they react to finding out she’s…[Read more] -
introvert_girl replied to the topic How should I continue this? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
General impressions: I really liked it, and find the premise/laws of fate to be very intriguing.
Some things I would expect or be interested in seeing moving forward:
– Juqing and Wanyu meeting
– The relationship between Wanyu and her father or Wanyu and her teacher/his family and the other students (how do they react to finding out she’s…[Read more] -
Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@alia Are you still here?
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Clouded Fury Alpha links in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 2 months ago
@skredder Awesome 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 2 months ago
@ingridrd *tries not to break critiquing hiatus*
*fails*
I just have to read this!!! Maybe I’ll put off the start of my hiatus until late May… is the whole book written and you’re just posting parts of it here and there, or are you still in the process of writing it?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Sorry! 🙂 (But I’ve left suddenly in the past. Especially when it gets really late. If I leave suddenly it’s usually because I just crash and fall asleep. 😛 )
Oh yes. That will make you feel better! …did you find a cupcake?
Sorry, but I still haven’t thought of anything. I’m going to leave completely now, I think. But I’…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice I don’t know if you got my post saying I was leaving, but I’m back now for a very little bit.
Oh yes, now I remember. That wouldn’t be as easy a fix as some edits, but I don’t think it would be too hard to make it a semi-accident.
Shakespeare said “love is blind, and lovers cannot see/the pretty follies that themselves commit.” E…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Does she intentionally try to catch the bullet herself, or is she trying to push him out of harm’s way when she gets struck? In the case of the latter I think it would be perfectly reasonable, since she wouldn’t be actually trying to give her life for him. What do you think?
I’m going to disappear for about an hour to watch s…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice I’m upset because I want to use a certain picture for my blog post, but don’t know how to use it without being afraid of copyright stuff, so I’m trying to find a private picture that will be boring, but which at least I will own myself.
Sure, *brings bag of dirt* plot hole did you say? Let’s fill it up. I’ve got some special s…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice I’m back. 😉
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
@catwing Rin would probably pick the Niagara as well. 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice @skredder @sarah-anson (if you’d like to read it too 🙂 ) Chapter 7! 😀
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_aD1ola1rVG3cFwLSZ8S87nBtL7_j1xCdWK0rpUgpek/edit
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Haha! I guess you do, don’t you! 😀
I’m going to go now. I’ll probably be back tonight around the usual time. Hope to see you then!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice I love J names too, but I guess for now I’ll go with Marc.
Did you decide to actually edit Stars? How’s it going?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@jenwriter17 Hello! Aaaand…goodbye… 🙁 Hope to see you soon!
@seekjustice Haha. 😛 I like Jay, but I already have two boys in the book named Jared and Josiah, so another “j” name might seem a bit much, don’t you think? (Although alliteration’s always awesome and amazing.) Marc might be good. (I wrote a whole story with alliteration once…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice @rochellaine @alia Ugh, sorry guys I have to go. I’ll be on later though 🙂
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@alia Sounds great! 🙂 By the way, if you’d let me read it when you finish I’d love to, because like I said before, it’s a really cool idea!
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice @rochellaine @alia Are you all still on?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@alia That is a really cool story idea!! Poor little kid. 🙂 I kind of think there’s a theological problem with it, though, don’t you think? “All’s well that ends well” isn’t exactly a Biblical concept. (Please don’t be upset. I’m just asking, and you can write whatever story you want. And I could be completely wrong about how this stor…[Read more]
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