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Rochellaine replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@seekjustice Haha, yes it’s funny, isn’t it? 😀 Any character but Justice. That doesn’t mean I didn’t like Justice, because I thought his character was wonderful! And I’m beginning…just beginning to ship him with Chessy now. 😉
Ah, please let Rain be younger than Kendall!! I really don’t like romance when the girl is older than the guy,…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@seekjustice Did you actually say that?! You’ll give Justice and Chessy more window scenes? *squeals* Yes, window scenes are very romantic! Of course, like I said, the first thing I thought of was that favorite couple of mine, Bill and Patty, but the original window scene, which is considered one of the most romantic scenes of all time, is th…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@seekjustice @skredder I’m back! How’s it going?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@seekjustice Oh, I thought she was going to end up with Quillon until he started interacting with her sister! Then I refrained from mentioning it since Sapphire and Quillon obviously were meant for each other and Chessy had nothing to do with anything there. 🙂 I also could have seen her with Jonas if she was a little bit older. As it was he…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@seekjustice @skredder I’m leaving for about fifteen minutes. Hopefully you’ll be here when I get back! 😉 Goodbye for now.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@catwing @jenwriter17 Oh, wow. I had no idea I was so good at this! I thought you guys would beat me by a lot! 🙂 I feel very happy with myself right now. 😛
*accepts chocolate wreath with pleasure* Thank you for this great honor. 😉
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@jenwriter17 @catwing I’ve got 478 words. 🙂
@seekjustice Any fanfiction?! Wow, thanks! 😀 😛
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@jenwriter17 @catwing Don’t you girls dare to have a word war without me!!! 😀
Fifteen minutes by the timer?
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valtmy replied to the topic Private Messaging in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 5 months ago
Yeah I think I might do that. Thanks!
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valtmy replied to the topic Is this boring???? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
I agree with what everyone else has said. I think the problem has to do with the pacing and the passiveness of the main character. There is a lot of description that slow the story down and much of the information conveyed through dialogue could have easily been summed up in a few lines.
Just some thoughts…
#1: The article in the…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@jenwriter17 Thank you so much!! I’ll need them. I’m not going to do it right now, though. My little sister is singing “You Are My Sunshine” and “Eensy Weensy Spider” a few feet away from me, so I don’t think I’d better start crying and sniffling… 😀
So right now I will try to get my word count for Camp NaNoWriMo in on my western, and ma…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@jenwriter17 Okay I might do it! But then…help! I’ll have to reread the whole third part! How will I survive? 🙁
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@seekjustice Just give them a few more window scenes and I might fall for them. 😉 I don’t care what happens, whether the conversation is completely boring, whether they argue, whether they kiss – I just love the fact that they’re talking through the open window!!! Since it seems like Justice is accustomed to coming to Chessy’s window when he w…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@jenwriter17 Well, the first one I came up with was Chestice. 😀 What do you think of that? And can you come up with any more ideas?
I may not ship Chessy and Justice, but I did ship Quillon and Sapphire! Hey, what would you think of some Rain/Kendall fanfiction based on the conversation between Chessy and Rain about their crushes on Justice a…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@jenwriter17 If you’re still here – and if you’re willing to speak to me after what I said about Chessy and Justice – I’m writing now. 😉
Say, do you have a ship name for them? 😛
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Private Messaging in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 5 months ago
@valtmy I guess the best way to do it would probably be to just put the link out there for everyone, and say that there’s a limited time – say one or two days, or maybe less – to access it. After the time is up, you can copy everyone’s comments into your own notes and then delete the document. Then the link will be empty and no one can read y…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Private Messaging in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 5 months ago
I might consider that. Thanks!
Haha I know you guys are all really nice. The problem is that people outside the KP forums can access it as well and I’m shy about my writing. 😳
Hmm… I did think about using that feature but I know not everyone may want to give out their email so I wanted to check if…[Read more]
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Sam Kowal replied to the topic Is this boring???? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@mnvalentine I think it is somewhat boring, in a way. Of course, there’s the question, ‘What’s going to happen next?’ which is partially engaging and makes me want to read more. But, the characters and the conflict didn’t drag me in for the first chapter. August has some conflict because he’s not as popular as Trent, but he didn’t seem to want…[Read more]
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Sam Kowal replied to the topic Character Song Swap in the forum Music 8 years, 5 months ago
@leumeister 😀 Would you send me the links? I think it would be awesome to see what you have come up with. What programs do you use to create your electronic sounds? Do you use Ableton? I’ve been thinking about getting into that, but so far I don’t know much about making electronic music
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Stars Fill Infinity in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
@jenwriter17 Shall I cause a great horror to come upon you by saying I didn’t ship Chessy and Justice really at all during the reading of Stars Fill Infinity? 😉 I actually told @seekjustice I didn’t think that they should end up as a couple.
*backs away warily*
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