@hybridlore
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Andrew replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Yeah, it hasn’t been working right for a few days now. But without Kathleen around to fix it, I’m not sure if it will get better. 😕
Hopefully we can have her come check on it if its still acting up.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
*Scream of pleasure!!!*
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
KP is breaking for everyone. *gasp* this might be the end!!!!
Only killed off at least four pretty important characters in only two books. (Prince guy, Turin, Aaron, Adrian.) Nearly killed off all your main characters. And stated that the next two books would be even darker. 😑
*indignant sniff*
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Yeah, good point. Maybe add something in their journal entries about how it went well, and how Leon is proud of Julian? Something like that.
Sounds good.
*eyes you suspiciously*
*grins evilly*
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Oh good. It’s been glitching all morning on my end.
I’m just your #1 fan 😉 Well, online fan anyway.
You 100% are!!
When did Leon start calling the governor Walter? I was a bit confused, but I probably just missed the part where you introduced him.
When the governor told him to. XD
It happened when they were looking over t…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@linus-smallprint @Liberty @Hybridlore @Koshka @elishavet-pidyon @Keilah-h
Just a heads up to y’all, if KP is acting up and you don’t get tagged, I normally post a section every morning, (save Sunday) baring assassination, the women’s draft (in which case I will go under ground and change my author’s name), or an opportunity…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@linus-smallprint @Liberty @Hybridlore @Koshka @Elishavet-Eloy @Keilah-h
Lets try this again
NEXT SECTION!!!
The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
April 30th
The EmpireLeon was not arrested as we had feared, thank God. The Governor only wanted to speak with him, and the results have been unbelievable. The…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I said he was the same age as Ernst, Rolf’s brother, and I said Ernst was about 15-16
Do I need more then that?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Oh dear! I hope nothing is up with the page, I may re-tag people.
Interesting . . . this made me wonder if he had been in love with the governor’s daughter, but that didn’t seem right once I saw how the governor interacted with him. 🤔
Wouldn’t you like to know.
ack, yes, I missed a word there. When I read it over my brain said it…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Thank you soooo much girl…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ started the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@esther-c @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @loopylin @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @raxforge @rae @freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @theducktator @theshadow @the_lost-journal @trailblazer @keilah-h @anyone-else-i’m-blanking
I’m doing something drastic.
Something crazy.
I suppose I shall start at the beginning…
Our youth…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @esther-c @theshadow @hybridlore @grcr
MY DAD GOT A JOB!!! He’s under a contract for a year, which means he’s considered self employed, and we’ll have to pay our own insurance, but he’s getting paid a lot more too. He works in computer programming by the way.
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
It is a good word, isn’t it? Using too many synonyms can be a problem though too (probably my biggest XD).
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Going to catch up soon, but I noticed you used the word “glanced” a few times in one chapter (can’t remember which). It was just a little repetitive, not at all big though.
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TheShadow replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
March 8th sounds good, I think I’ll be free then.
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HighScribe replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
So I haven’t done this yet and I don’t really know how it’s gonna work…does someone send out the invite for the meet to all of our emails? Or is it a link on KP? I dunno XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Hmmm. No promises.
Really out of character for him too! lololol.
I think you’re enjoying the suspense way too much. 🤔🙄
Oh 100%.
Especially since I know something you don’t………….
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