hybridlore

@hybridlore @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @kyronthearcanin @jonas @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @whalekeeper @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest

I’m not going to bother with italics this time, they always come out wring. Anyway, this is the fourth chapter, but I’m going to warn you that I may drastically change part of this chapter, so…[Read more]

@hybridlore Thanks!! 😁

@savannah_grace2009 Hi! So for the record, when I do maps of cities, I generally draw them separately. However, if your map is big enough you can draw buildings as small squares/other shapes, depending on how they’re built. Axiom is right, there are many different angles. If you draw a city up beside mountains or trees,…[Read more]

@hybridlore @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @kyronthearcanin @jonas @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @whalekeeper @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest

Again,

If I just tagged you and you aren’t interested, feel free to go away.

If you’re still around, and haven’t read the first and second chapter, look up. If you’re still around and you…[Read more]

@hybridlore

And I actually think that side characters are supposed to be fleshed out–that’s what makes them more realistic–but not too detailed to the point where they become too big in the story, unless that’s the point, if that makes sense.

I would actually say that it is more realistic for side characters to not be fleshed out. In real life, p…[Read more]

@hybridlore

No, it’s not annoying at all! I honestly am super forgetful and just forget to check KP and stuff lol. So yeah, it actually helps a lot!

I’ll probably be leaving in May, because that’s when my subscription ends. I’ll still be on other stuff but I just want to put that money towards other things, if that makes sense. 😉

@hybridlore

*Is trying to think of a character to use this on* *Doesn’t want to spoil anything in Healer/the sequel* XD

Oh btw I think I might call the sequel “Outlaw,” to fit the character sort of like “Healer” did. 😉

@mineralizedwritings

It’s totally fine! Don’t feel bad! (Now I feel bad for making you feel bad! lol)

It does kind of sound like her though, so I see where you’re coming from.

Yeah, I really don’t want the romance to be the main reason for the abuse, because that just sounds “cruel” to put my characters so much for the sake of an unhealthy…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Oh my, I didn’t even think about human ears! Lol that’s so funny now that I see it that way!

@hybridlore

I added a little to this part. Does this sound good?

“We’ll see who gets a red ear tonight,” Albert hinted, a glint in his eye. My skin prickled at the mention of the tradition well known in these parts of the country- any boy who happened to open a red ear of corn got to kiss his sweetheart.

@hybridlore

Thanks for the tag!! You’re really saving me there XD I hope to be more active, especially once I leave YWW. (:

@rae

Hey! So yeah, I love and write sci-fi, and I love this story!! You’re a very talented writer. I agree with everything hybridlore said – on the topic of long/short paragraphs, I think it’s a thing where people have…[Read more]

@hybridlore Yeah I should probably clarify that. If you’re not aware of that tradition it definitely wouldn’t make sense. Thanks for pointing it out!

@hybridlore @acancello @smiley @thearcaneaxiom @kyronthearcanin @esther-c @rae

Hi y’all, I have a couple of questions, and as it seems that you have all been here for longer than I, I’m hoping that you can answer them.

#1: What are ranks? I’ve seen different ones under everybody’s profile, and I was just wondering what they are.

#2: Where would…[Read more]

@power @hybridlore

Great advice!

@mineralizedwritings

Ottoline from “Character Party” isn’t the one I was asking the question for, though, it’s an entirely different character. (If you check out my WIP page on KP, you’ll see it.)

@hybridlore

Hi! Nice to meet you!

I know…my sister @grcr warned me about that. lol A lot of people seem to be writing fiction, but I think there is plenty of room for both. And both can help to expand God’s kingdom. Hmm…mostly essays for now, but I hope to start on a fictional book soon too.

Ohh…I never heard of those. I will have to look…[Read more]

@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009

Let me know if anything in this section sounds strange or unrealistic. Some parts feel a little awkward to me, and I want to know if it feels that way to other readers or if it’s just me.

In early September, the first cornshucking of the season took place. Mama had finally agreed that I was old enough to go,…[Read more]

@hybridlore @anyone

So, I decided to create a doc and just put all the characters I’ve created into it and do the questionnaire for each of them in there, but one thing I realized is that this questionnaire doesn’t necessarily work for non-major characters. Side characters aren’t supposed to be super fleshed out, they’re supposed to be flat, so…[Read more]

@hybridlore @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @jonas @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest

If I just tagged you and you aren’t interested, feel free to go away.

So…If you’re still around, and haven’t read the first chapter, look up. If you’re still around and you have read the first chapter, look down.

CHAPTER 2-…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I do know how to tag people, but who would be interested? I do have two friends, but at the time I posted that, they we nonexistent. Should I just tag people I know?

I like your idea of adding Nahim in, it’s probably the only advice I’ve gotten about this chapter that doesn’t ruin my purpose at all.

Actually, funny you should…[Read more]

@hybridlore

This is a good idea! 😃 (Can I share my questionnaire answers?)