hybridlore

Hello! Thanks for the big welcome! I want to answer all these questions, but please forgive me, I may have to respond in segments at different times. I won’t be able to answer everything in one shot due to time (and I get distracted a lot TBH).
So… I have to say one of my favorite books series would have to be the Milana Legends by Anna Travis…[Read more]

@acancello

Yes.

@hybridlore

Thank you!

@acancello @smiley @hybridlore @euodia-vision @trailblazer

I posted a new poem!

https://happybelovedpig.mystrikingly.com/blog/little-candle

(I’m just starting to come back to KP, so I’m excited to take a look at all y’all’s blogs. Ain’t it fun!)

@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore

Finally getting back to this… but here’s a little more!

My fifteenth birthday came and went. After school let out for the spring, there was a lot of work to be done on the homestead to plant our crops and gardens.

The summer term of school began, and it was my final term of school. As I walked into the…[Read more]

@hybridlore

The problem with that is that character deaths should be meaningful. I think what we’re talking about is an out-of-universe reason for their deaths. In-universe, I see no problem with the “reason” (more like cause) for a character death being that they ran into monsters. There’s nothing less satisfying than characters just “randomly”…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Thanks.

@hybridlore

Have I ever mentioned I really like your forum signature.

I thought it ended really well, I liked the mentor-y moment with Master Paul! I didn’t really understand what Cubespace was entirely, so the whole incident confused me a little.

I think Master Paul asked Nahim to fly the ship, but Nahim said no, so the Master left him there o…

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@janellebelovedpig @Savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore @euoida-vision @smiley @anyone!

Few new posts on my blog, nothing to exciting, but there is some 😂

acancello.blogspot.com

@hybridlore

Oh! you didn’t have to read the entire thing today!!! Oh, well.

The biggest things I noticed were again, really long paragraphs. I think it would be easier to read if you split them up, but it’s up to you.

Yeah, I’ve only gotten to chapter four with my paragraph revisions

What did you think of the scene in The Deal? Ya, know, this pa…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I like it! Thing is my favorite, lol. I don’t think you should change the name even though it’s a little mean, but it’s up to you. I think it fits her and she likes it, so it works.

Thanks! I love Thing, she makes a great dynamic with Tailen, and is fun, funny, and perfect for not so subtle infodumping🤣

The plot is a little confu…

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@hybridlore

Yep, that’s fine! No problem!

@highscribeofaetherium

Yeah, you might want to wait to actually write anything until everyone else gets a bit farther. My character hasn’t actually showed up yet. He’ll arrive separately, so it probably makes the most sense to do that for any new characters.

@hybridlore @thearcaneaxiom

I know you both expressed interest in this RP at the…[Read more]

@hybridlore @power @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @kyronthearcanin @jonas @loopylin @whalekeeper @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest

CHAPTER 6-ON BOARD THE NIGHTMARE
Nahim was alone and unbothered for the first time in a while. He ran his right hand over his sling for his left arm but didn’t try to move the shoulder. He was different…

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@hybridlore @power @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @kyronthearcanin @jonas @loopylin @whalekeeper @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest

Next chapter…I’m just going to post most of my chapters now since I plan to change some of them soo, but want some feedback.

CHAPTER 5-MASTER PAUL
Mandin adjusted the thick band to the satchel over his…

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@euodia-vision @hybridlore @acancello @anyone-else

For those of you who have seen my blog, what kinds of posts would you be interested in seeing in the future? If you have ideas, throw them my way. I’d love to hear your thoughts! I want to write more on my blog but often I run out of ideas and then several months go by before I realize I haven’t…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Yeah that’s what i was thinking too! That’s too bad, I bet she’s disappointed (if that’s the reason). I’m gonna miss her!

@hybridlore @grcr

Thanks!!

@savannah_grace2009 @euodia-vision

Sooo…what’s the big secret about Amir’s parents?

Hehe… Ok. So it’s a working idea, and it may change eventually as I flesh out the story more, but basically his parents are double agents. They actually work for the shah and are 100% loyal to him. But as part of that work, they pret…[Read more]

@hybridlore

YAY! So excited for you!!! It looks great!!