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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
lolololol.
The whole not wanting it to happen so not seeing the signs.
btw, it’s Tuesday! Where’s your chapters?!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
Thank you!
I know!!!! POOR ROLF!
Did you see it coming with the foreshadowing earlier that day?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!
“We need more meat,” Rolf said. He and several others were sitting about in the main cavern, eating breakfast.
“Are we running low again?” Julian asked.
“Yes, and we’ve hunted this area clean.”
“Then let’s pla…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
Cool! I feel like this is really where Leon and Julian sort of start to drift apart in personality. They’re really starting to experience different things from one another, and it’s changing them.
I love the idea of Roland and Liesl getting married in their work clothes with their scarves and hats because it’s so cold and they’re…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
Wow, that was fast.
what were you doing? just sitting there waiting? 😂
That was a pretty long section and covered a good deal of stuff…. do you have any thoughts on particular sections of the section?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!
The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
March 31st
The EmpireIt is growing dark. I am sitting beside Leon, who is tossing in fevered sleep. Last night we were attacked by wolves, and several of us w…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
oh yes Leon.
huh. I mention that a lot of what the people are eating is vegetation and wolves don’t eat that.
odd that it was confusing… 🫤is there a better way to word it you think?
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
@elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @linus-smallprint @hybridlore @koshka @rae
Awesome. 🙂 I still have a couple weeks of school left so I’ll start the topic after.
Also, I signed up for Crazy Editing Week. It’s right after my school term ends, so I’m hoping to get some stuff done. XD
Is anyone else planning on doing it?
Yeesss, you bet I’ll be ther…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
@hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @linus-smallprint @esther-c @liberty @theshadow @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @the_lost-journal @ellette-giselle @rae @keilah-h @theducktator
Hey guys (well you’re mostly gals). Would you be interested in a goal-focused chat where we practice our individual writing skills and chat about…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!
The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
March 13th
The EmpireWe are all settled down inside a cave complex the Lord led us to. It has begun to really snow in earnest outside, but we have wood for a fir…
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Oh well. 🙁
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Did you ever decide which state you were moving to?
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
It’s the one about whether it’s more important for a biography to be inspiring or impartial. 🙁
Nice. Yeah, saying goodbye was sad, but I’m kinda glad it’s over.
Oh right, you’re leaving. Do you think you’ll do CC in your new state?
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Three Ducks in a Trench Coat replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Well, I did put in a Calvin and Hobbes reference, but my mom will probably make me remove it. 🙁 It’s the essay about Something Beautiful for God, and the prompt is weird.
Tuesday is Blue Book. Then I’m FREEEEEEE!
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whaley replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Our last day is Monday, but as a senior, school isn’t really ‘done’ until all the graduation formalities and celebrations are over. My thesis defense still hasn’t happened yet. You must be glad to be done, I’m jealous. XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 1 week ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty @linus-smallprint
NEXT SECTION!
With the numbers in their group increased, travel was slower. Still, they pressed on toward the mountains, keeping up a steady pace each day. Four days later they were climbing the foothills and still they continued h…
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