@hybridlore
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Esther posted an update 1 year, 4 months ago
@hybridlore
I added my second draft of the short story to the document! I’m mainly looking for feedback on character, plot, pacing, and prose. Especially parts that seem preachy, repetitive, or seem like I’m info-dumping. I’m open to any feedback and thoughts you have on it, feel free to tear into it and be nit-picky! XD If you catch a gramm…[Read more] -
Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
I love themmm!! 😍
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
Soooo coooool!
Okay, what sort of character is he? That will really help with the quotes. Like, what sort or quotes would fit him, ya know?
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
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whaley replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Aw, I won’t throw snowballs at you then. Truce.
*Whips around* @rae +2 @mineralizedwritings +2 @hybridlore +2 @savannah_grace2009 +2 @calyhuge +2 @loopylin +4
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
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Okay, so the rest of Group 1 has to reach the river, right?
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Loopy replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
*grabs your foot and yanks you to the ground* REVENGE! ⚪️💨 x 8
Here’s your five hundred words
The train platform was busy and crowded, the air buzzing with activity. People pushed and shouted. Trains whistled impatiently. But none of this bothered Felicity. Being Skadian, she was almost a head taller than everyone else in the c…
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
Here are my 352 words. I just couldn’t end it at 50 since it needed to end on a good cliffhanger!
Here’s the next installment! Enjoy! *it only gets better later on*
Walking up the cobblestone pathway that led to the castle building, he quickly reached the portcullis. Upon nearing the iron gate, he spotted a lone man-sized…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 4 months ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle @loopylin @rae @raxforge @jonas @grcr @hybridlore
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)
The hand motions were a little unfamiliar, but Marcel could guess from Leon’s expression that they weren’t in any immediate danger.
Marcel made the same hand motion. “We’re good.”
He was slightly dissatisfied with the answer, since Felicity and…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
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Leon and Julian — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)
Leon’s expression clouded with worry as Marcel gestured to his ears. He can’t hear!
Marcel’s next words confirmed the suspicion. “Can’t hear. Are they close?”
Leon shook his head and gave Marcel the Imperial Military “a…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle @rae @raxforge @loopylin @hybridlore @jonas @grcr
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)
Marcel strained, trying to listen to Leon’s reply. Something was very wrong with his ears. Hopefully it wasn’t permanent. The buzzing had escalated into a high-pitched siren.
“Monsters… Huge…” Then Leon shook his head.
Marcel winced and…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@rae @raxforge @loopylin @grcr @hybridlore @jonas @whalekeeper
Leon and Julian— Elderstrand (wsome of Group 1)
Leon watched as the girl raced off, followed by Ben, Flare, and Brutus. Or, was it Baron. Leon’s brows drew together. Something wasn’t right about him. whatever the case, Leon was secretly glad he was gone. though part…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle @rae @raxforge @loopylin @grcr @hybridlore @jonas
Marcel — Elderstrand (wsome of Group 1)
Felicity said something to him, but her voice sounded like a faint buzz underwater. No matter, she was clearly leaving, and a bunch of the group followed close behind.
Marcel watched the white braids fly off, brow furrowed in worry. He…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
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NEXT SECTION
Stephen and David continued to grow, and Joseph found himself looking up to them in many ways. Mr. Caddick was always a source of wisdom, and Joseph found himself coming to him often. It seemed so strange to Joseph that they all looked up to him,…
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@raxforge @loopylin @grcr @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @jonas
Baron (Brutus)—Group 1, about to follow Fel.
“My name isn’t Baron!” Brutus hissed, pushing Flare away. “Whatever you think you saw, you were wrong!”
Brutus’s attention was then caught by the girl who he was going to follow, He took her “try to keep up” as a little…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
So fun to work with!
I know! Sabina is gonna get herself killed.
But, she’s like that. I mean, remember how spunky she was when she was being a total snark to Aaron and Turin. She hasn’t lost all of that.
still, it scares me when she does stuff like that!
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
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Felicity
“I don’t have time for a conference!” Everyone in this group seemed so distracted. She was ready to just leave on her own, but the tiniest ghost of a sense of survival made her hesitate a few seconds.
“What… Where are you going?” Marcel was up. Or at least tryin…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@rae @raxforge @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @grcr
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)
Pain rung in Marcel’s skull; he felt as if something had woken him up, but he couldn’t hear anything. His ears were definitely bleeding, since his rose-colored hair had begun to clump with a darker color.
Everything was numb. Dark, wet, and…[Read more]
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Okay, thank you so much!! I am so sorry I completely forgot about it after KDWC shut down 🤦. I will try to check it out later today!
No worries at all! I only added the draft into the doc today, so you aren’t really forgetting about anything. 😝