@hybridlore
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
(Sorry, things are crazy right now. Otherwise I would have posted one yesterday too)
The next morning, Leon and Julian woke early. The two sat and read their Bibles for a time. Then Julian sat down beside Leon on the edge of his bed and…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
aw, thank you!!!
Well…. I was working on a project I need to get done….. but I’ve never been one to resist puppydog eyes.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I can see the dilemma. I think it is good that Leon and Julian are trying a more subtle approach. I think @hybridlore‘s suggestion is good. They wouldn’t have to lie then.
But they are going to have to come out with the truth eventually.
Leon and Julian might not necessarily take the correct option first as well. It might be…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
sorry?
Not sure what you mean…..
Sounds good!
Nice, nice. Glad that’s starting to set in. It was harder to show them coming home when they hardly interacted with people and they were in a place that looked a lot like Ardenta because they were right on the boarder. ya know?
They’re names are…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore  K.
QUESTION FOR THOSE WHO HAVE READ ALL POSTED SECTIONS.
So, as we all know, and @elishavet-pidyon pointed out….. Julian took that first encounter full-tilt and without a necessary dose of wise caution. However….. now I’m a little stuck.
Julian and Leon are living in the house of a family who worship’s idols. Due to their c…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
I have a question for anyone who’s read the section I posted yesterday.
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper @koshka @theducktator @hybridlore @theshadow @esther-c
Well, my dad just got a call from the police, and they arrested the lady who did it. He’s on his way to the police station right now to pick up his wallet and his keys and stuff. Take a look at that! God is good.
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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The Ducktator posted a new activity comment 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore
Please tag me if you post recommendations! I want to read YA, but it’s usually filthy and cringe. -
TheShadow posted a new activity comment 1 year, 2 months ago
That was very encouraging, thank you so much. Glad to hear you’re doing better too, I’ll keep you in my prayers too.
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yess!! Will look at these later
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TheShadow replied to the topic Scenes in the forum Plotting 1 year, 2 months ago
Oh my goodness *brings back memories* We used to love that show.  But I don’t remember that line, sadly xD
Finally, someone else who’s watched it!! That is sad, it’s a good line lol. There’s so many good lines from the show XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Of course! Yes, prayer is the best thing. He really will speak through you.
idk about the account. My computer is flipping out today.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
True I guess.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
YAHOO!!!! I LOVE this book SO MUCH!!!
You are amazing girl!!!
Oh man, I am getting so sucked into the story! Wow! Rare that a book gets me like this! WAY TO GO!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
WhAt?!?! They remind you of Sabina and Turin? But they’re so…. different. Okay, i guess I can see where you’re going with that, but Rolf didn’t threaten to stab anyone, and Liesl is extremely sweet.
It kind of feels like she’s going to be a love interest for one of them… 🤔
Hmmmm.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
The next morning, both young men were extremely tired. They ate a light breakfast, but neither of them felt like getting up and walking again. Leon decided to lay down and doze for another hour or so, and Julian pulled out the book from J…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
He did, in his way. And he’ll address it again soon enough.
WHAT!?!? You don’t like that one? (or are you choking with laughter?)
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @keilah-h @theshadow
I came home from school today and the van was in the driveway! The police found it in a mall parking lot. The thief still has my dad’s murse, but we have our car back, so that’s great!
Thank you so much for your prayers 🙂
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@theshadow
So glad I could help a little! Thank you!