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@keilah-h

okay!! Thanks for the suggestions!! I’ll rework a few scenes.

@ellette-giselle I agree with @hybridlore ‘s statements! I think that bit about Leon’s reaction might’ve been what I felt was missing from the scene.

@hybridlore

Thank you so much, that means a lot!

@hybridlore

Sorry to hear that, praying for you 💗

You got this, God will help you!!

@hybridlore @keilah-h @freed_and_redeemed @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @loopylin

Here’s another scene! This is one I started in a previous draft and finished just recently. Again no critiques please! Not ready for that lol

November’s foot tapped against the marble flooring. His lips quirked to the side and he cleared his throat, glancing f…

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@hybridlore

Okay, good. Eh, it’s just part of his personality to me. He’s great at Warrain and leading the team, because he applies himself, and as a result doesn’t really focus on school. 😆 His skills with computers and coding will be more prominent later.

Ah, glad to hear it will come into play. Well, I like it, it adds more to his chara…[Read more]

@keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal @liberty @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint

Oof, it’s been two weeks. Well, here’s the third chapter, please tell me what you think once you’re done reading it. This is a shorter chapter, so I’ll probably post the fourth tomorrow.

Chapter 3

“That’s lovely.” Elina sat down, an uncom…[Read more]

@hybridlore

You’re welcome! I’d love to see Everette in a bind like that, and maybe someone surprising like Cole (could be a really cool moment) is like, “hold on a sec, he got less time then the rest of us,” or something like that.

Just a thought. It could show an interesting angle on the dislike of any sort of Christian beliefs or standings.…[Read more]

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NEXT SECTION

Leon woke in the darkness. He heard Rolf breathing and felt the rocking of the ship below him. He sat up, wondering where they were going and what fate lay ahead. Leon leaned against the side of the ship’s hold and drew his knees to his chest,…

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@hybridlore

Oh! Okay.

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint       @liberty

Look y’all, whatever you may think…. this is actually the truth.

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint      @liberty

How about this one?

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

For all those it may concern…. I would call this the theme song if this book.

@hybridlore     @linus-smallprint

Hey, that kind of stuff even happens here in America.

I took a class out of the home with several home school kids. It was a Constitutional class, and at one point we were debating real court cases or arguing pro or con real things.

Well, I was put on a team with three of the guys, (that class was heavily out…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Yeah, that’s kind of when I relapsed into it too (about two years ago or so.) Yeah, definitely, knowing what it is gives it less power. I’m a lot better than I was a few years ago when it was worst, but I still have bad days every now and then. Nice to know that other people understand what it’s like too though. I kind of shy away…

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@hybridlore

Well, I’ve never seen that movie. Just heard of it. And I like the song “Speechless” but other than that I know nothing of it besides it taking place in Arabia.  lololol.

@liberty

But that IS how I feel!!!!

@raxforge @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @keilah-h @whalekeeper @theducktator

It feels like forever since I posted a story on here, but here is story #11! This is my favorite one of the entire Baron Chronicles, and it brought tears to my eyes. I hope you enjoy it too:)

 
Though your sins be as Scarlet…
Sunlight filtered through the pale…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I already attempted to do so and got out-debated. She took fake-Alec. 😖

Wait, what does that mean? Who’s fake-Alec?

You don’t care about Leon?

I do! I do! Just…maybe I like Rolf better??🫣

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

For anyone who is interested…..

Hassan (center) and two of the other slave traders.

(and yes, they are in their native country in this picture)

@ellette-giselle @hybridlore

*promptly rescues Leon and Rolf, gives them new identities so they can hide from you and they disappear into the city* 
*straps on several guns and bolts. Snatches Alec and slams him against the wall.*

Girls are weird.