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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
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CHAPTER 4 and 5!!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
Yay! Wonder what glitched before…. 🤔
Oh really? Whoops! Did you mark the spot, or do I need to go find it?
Glad the tension is building!! Have a favorite character yet?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
That is very odd. Did you let it load and scroll down? I just tried clicking on the link as a guest and it worked fine for me…..
Try again. I reloaded the page on my end,
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Liberty replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 months ago
Okay, great! I’m glad you felt that difference.
Yes…Jace is the youngest. Everyone else is in their twenties or thirties…Jace is the only one with the word “teen” in his age. Everyone views him like their little brother.
Guy… we didn’t really get much there, but I got the impression he is haunted by his past. Lol…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
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Next Chapters!!! (2 of them!!!)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 9 months ago
<3
I don’t go to camp until this afternoon so I’m really excited and nervous!!!!!!
Aw girl you’re the best <3
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Liberty replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 months ago
Yes! I’m planning, Lord willing, to write a book with these guys in it.
I did notice a few times that some words you used were either typos or not words at all (or words I’d never seen.)
Thanks. I think I caught all of those.The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more w…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
Thanks! Word was what I was having difficulty with. I’m going to see if I’m allowed to have an account there.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
Can you try resharing the link? It just takes me to the login page. 😭
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
Yay! I forgot it was Tuesday. XD
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 9 months ago
Great! Does bio stand for biology? Because if so, wow. Biology is HARD.
Thanks!
I will! I’m not actually taking it until tomorrow, because when we arrived at the BMV, there was a 49 person wait. It’s not usually that crowded, so we’ll go back tomorrow.
Some of the material will depend on state and my…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
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Esther posted an update 9 months, 1 week ago
Guyyssssssss… It’s been way too longgggg 😭 But I’m finally back!
Writing has been pretty nonexistent lately 😅 I haven’t really written anything since the end of March (and that was mostly editing anyway), and I’m really really hoping to make some progress and get into a better rhythm this summer. I feel like the unplanned break actually helped my…[Read more] -
Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 1 week ago
About how much of the book is left?
For now it is still fine. I still need to finish up what I am working on and will still be on Kingdom Pen until then. I just didn’t want to start helping with something new.
Need to apply for some jobs, but I will check the chapters after.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 1 week ago
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Hey, are any of you still reading through my sister’s book?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 1 week ago
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Okay all, chapter 1 is out. I’m using Microsoft Word. I think if…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 1 week ago
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Tags didn’t work ^
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 1 week ago
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Okay, it looks like the most popular time to start is the 14th, 15th, or 16th, so would everyone be cool with the 16th being our start date? (That’s two weeks from yesterday.) This would mean if you’re…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 9 months, 1 week ago
Thanks for asking!!!!
It’s been a rollercoaster. I have some good days, some bad days, some days where I just want to shut everyone out and not talk to anyone XD
And then I have some days that start out good and then end with me sobbing in my bathroom trying to get ready for bed 😭
The Devil also has been trying to attack me with…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 1 week ago
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BOOK AESTHETIC!!!
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Hey Esther!! Nice to see you around again!!
Sounds like a lot of craziness! 😂 How are you liking driving so far? And what new project are you planning to work on first?
I’m doing pretty good! My family moved and so we’ve been settling in and stuff but this week I’m finally starting to finish up my math (hopefully the last math of high schoo…[Read more]
Hehe, yes, but good craziness nonetheless! I’ve liked it so far! I’m kinda nervous and a little scared, but I’m mostly excited so that kinda overpowers the rest, lol. My brother’s also going off to college in the fall and he had been driving us places sometimes, so it’s almost like a motivation for me to be the new driver in the house (for my o…[Read more]
Yes, that makes total sense! Righttt. I’m just starting to be able to drive my siblings to the grocery store and it’s been fun. 🙂
Oh, awesome! I remember that one. Africa sounds really interesting… 😆
It was fine. We’ve moved plenty of times, and this one was a bit more sad for me, but I like our new house and neighborhood, and we’re starting to…[Read more]
Yes, that’s awesome!
Haha, yeah, I’ll be needing to do a lot of research, but I may save most of it for the end once I’ve gotten the whole story written out.
Good! I’m glad it’s been a pretty easy adjustment for y’all!
Ooh, fun fun! Oh yeah that’s a good idea! Do you have any idea what you want to do after high school yet??
Research, ugh. 😂 I would save it for the end too. XD
I want to write at least part-time, Lord willing!
I’ve also considered teaching violin or working as a librarian on the side. 😊 Do you?
Awesome, awesome!
Yeah, I’m hoping to get a degree in high school social studies/history education and/or youth ministry. I really want to be involved with high schoolers and ministry somehow in my future
HIIII ESTHERR <333
I'm so glad you're back, I was starting to wonder where you were…
(Like i'm one to talk, I'm notorious for randomly falling off the face of the earth so I get it girl haha)
THAT SOUNDS SO FUN!!!! I'm glad the last few weeks went so well for you!!!!
Writing's been nonexisitent for me too…I'm kind of stuck on my Andromeda…[Read more]
Oops I forgot you asked us to talk about ourselves too haha
Nothing much has been going on with me…I got a job at a coffee shop and I’ve been working 7 hour shifts almost every day which is exhausting but at least I get MONEY!!!
And I’m glad its’ keeping me out of the house too.
Besides the writing thing I mentioned earlier, I haven’t been…[Read more]
Outcry is such a great name, Sara!!
Thanks!!!
INDIANAPOLIS??? I’m in Indianapolis!
OMC!!!!!!!!!!
THAT’S SO COOL!
We’ll be either at the zoo or at a waterpark on July 4th..any chance we could meet up then?!?
We may be in Chicago then. I’d hoped plans would be nailed down before I replied, but it’s all still up in the air. If we’re here, I would LOVE that! Which waterpark?
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So it looks like we will be in Chicago then. 😭 I really wish we could meet. Is the 4th the only possible date?
NOOOOO
yeah the 4th is the only day i’d be available *cries*
I’m actually going to the zoo that day (we’re splitting our youth group up based on what we wanted to do…one half is going to a waterpark and the other is going to the zoo.)
I decided on the zoo so it will be fun (:
But I’m sorry it won’t work!!!
Nooooooo! 😭 That would have been so fun! Would you be here again next year?
Thanks girl! <33
Ugh, yesss, I know that feeling. It can be really good to switch things up every now and then!
Oooh, that sounds like such a fun place to work! I got a job at a coffee shop near us and then was FIRED before I even started. 😑 It was because she thought they would be busier now that they had added ice cream to the menu, but…[Read more]
That’s so cool that you get to know her <3 And that's so sweet that you bring her starbucks!!! I'm sure she's so thankful to have you as a friend!!!
Yeah that's so true…
Hi!!! You’re alive! I have my permit now too! Passed the test first try, and even have some duck Student Driver magnets for our car! I’m scared though. It’s a 12 passenger van with enormous blind spots and an essentially useless rearview mirror.😬 I drove around a parking lot a bit after the test, and I’m driving again this evening. How’s your…[Read more]
Yay, that’s so exciting! Oof, yeah that doesn’t sound fun 😭 But hey, if you’re able to drive that, you’re able to drive anything, right? XD We have an SUV and a Ford Taurus that I get to drive, so yeah, a lot smaller, lol. But it’s been going well! I really like it and I can’t wait until I’m experienced enough to drive to school and church!
Ugh,…[Read more]
I’ve driven three times so far, and I’m driving again today. I’ve only hit two curbs, which isn’t too bad given the size of that van. XD I can’t wait till I can just drive places whenever I want to, though I know that I’m going to be the one always going to Kroger to pick up some forgotten dinner ingredient. XD
Yeah, I’m surprised too. But I’m…[Read more]
@theducktator You should totally join KDWC!!