@hybridlore
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Keilah H. replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@hybridlore lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@hybridlore doing good! how about you?
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I’m ok! Thanks for asking! I was feeling really bad this past week, but much better and actually quite happy today. I can kinda feel fall in the air… and we have the heat turned on now 😍
I just re-watched captain America over discord with my sister who is at college, and that was really fun. It’s a pain to set up but once you do…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Another Project I'm Working on in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@hybridlore
Thanks! That wasn’t originally my plan, but at one point I noticed that there was a bit of a pattern with the powers I had so far. After realizing that, I designed the table, struck off some powers that didn’t fit, and designed more to fill the empty spaces. -
Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Another Project I'm Working on in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @hybridlore
I have created a new character, the villain:Vilsayor
Vilsayor is a high-ranking nobleman and the leader of a conspiracy to unleash an ancient being from the core of the planet, using Resonance Crystals. He embezzles Resonance Crystals for his followers to use. He has…[Read more] -
Cloaked Mystery started the topic Overview of my main WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @hybridlore @savannah_grace2009
It’s been two weeks since I originally tried to make this post, so I’m just going to try again.Here’s a “brief” overview of my WIP. It is set in my fantasy universe, Celestiar (I made a thread about it a week or so ago, in case you’re interested and didn’t see it.) It takes…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 2 years, 7 months ago
@hybridlore
Well I’ve been doing volleyball, and working on my WIP a LOT! also I’ve been making moodboards for my characters and also I’ve been on KP a lot too. -
Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
Here is a little more….
A few weeks later, I was perched on a hard wooden pew listening to one of Reverend Bradshaw’s sermons on the mercy of God. Clara was seated next to me, her fingers playing with the handkerchief in her lap.
“Rise for the closing hymn,” Reverend Bradshaw directed. We rose, and as throa…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Aw, thanks! Do you like writing sibling scenes?
We don’t have Max, but you’re right – I could probably find it in YouTube clips or something.
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Smiley replied to the topic Monthly Prompts!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@esther-c @acancello @euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Alright here’s mine for day 3
Scary prank
It’s a fanfiction, so uh… only Hannah is my original character XD
Hide and Seek
Hannah walked beside Vision, checking every crevice and closet as they continued down…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@hybridlore I went through a huge Little House phase when I was in elementary school, so it doesn’t surprise me that this reminds you of it lol.
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-GRCR- posted an update 2 years, 7 months ago
@acancello @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @esther-c @trailblazer
I had an idea while cleaning…
I know we are still playing in the Character Party, but what do you guys think about a Pride & Prejudice inspired RP? Like, where we each have a wealthy family who lives in mansion, and we visit and have multiple p…[Read more] -
Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Another Project I'm Working on in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
How do the crystals absorb the Resonance?
So as I said, Resonance emanates from the planet core (there’s a reason for that, but it’s kind of complicated and not that important right now.) The Resonance passes through everything on its way through the planet. The crystals just happen to of a perfect geometric shape to trap the Res…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Another Project I'm Working on in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Thanks!
I am aware of Legion, but I haven’t read it. I would say that the main thing that differentiates Krenna is that unlike either of those characters, these other personalities are somewhat real, and not figments of imagination resulting from a mental illness.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@hybridlore @savannah_grace2009
I think you guys will like this section… it’s one of my favorites because it has more action in it.
Several weeks later was Independence Day. There was no school, and our whole family dressed in our Sunday clothes and drove into town on the wagon to join in the celebration. The day kicked off just outside the…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Another Project I'm Working on in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @hybridlore @euodia-vision (as usual, ignore if you’re not interested.)
This isn’t my main project, but it’s another idea I’ve been working on on the side. It uses a magic system I shared a while ago.
Setting
The genre of this story is what I’m calling “magicpunk,” like steam…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
Some more…
Summer 1884
I wished Mama would let me drop out of school, even though I was only fourteen. Since all the crops were planted, we returned to school, but this time Albert and Abe stayed behind. The first day we went back, George dragged his feet.
“Come on, George!” I turned around and walked bac…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
I love the story! I agree with @hybridlore that it wasn’t too summary-y but it would be nice to see how the interaction with Lillian Sara and Jennie went.
I love the dancing scene! I love Libbie and Albert, they’re so cute together! (It’s fine if that’s not what you’re going for but I just like “shipping” people in my stories and…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic God in Our Stories in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 7 months ago
I think someone mentioned this already earlier, but C.S. Lewis did a fantastic job using Aslan to represent God. Okay, the whole way he created Narnia and all the characters in those stories just blows my mind sometimes, but I love how Lewis chose a lion to represent God in the stories. Watching Aslan interact with the characters…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@hybridlore Thanks! I’m glad you’re enjoying it!
I definitely want to try to show some more interactions between Libbie/Etta and some of the other girls from school (Lillian, Sara, Jennie, etc.). I just need to figure out what sub-plots I could work in.
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@savannah_grace2009 messed up your tag… ^^^
@grcr I’ve never read or watched Pride and Prejudice, but that theme still sounds like fun! (I did read the Elsie Dinsmore series; idk if that’s at all close to the same theme??) I might be able to dig up an old family from some stuff I did years ago.
😅 yeah… (I don’t know either……)
Yeah I’ve never read/watched that either XD
but could be fun!
@grcr @savannah_grace2009 Yeah I’m willing to give it a shot! I started inventing a family and now I’m getting more inspiration.
Thats ok. 😄
@trailblazer
lol. Alrighty! I might make the starting post in a little while.
That sounds fun! I haven’t read/watched it yet, but to know a bit about it. I may not have a lot of time to join though… but I will try!
Thats alright! Sounds good! 😄
@grcr Are we setting this in England or America?
Mmm… what do you think? Probably England…?
I was sort of thinking England, too
@trailblazer
Yeah….
Oh yes this sounds great!
Okay I’m pretty busy so not sure how much I’ll be able to be on, but sounds super fun!!!
This is a really fun idea!! I’d totally use my MCs’ families. 🤣